AMAIZING
INCREDIBLE SUPREME, THAT GOOD CHAPTER

It was definitely good, I have another question. scenes xxx will contain dirty language.

also you will divide the mane 7 and trixi by chapters and you will put all in a single cap.

Aren't dragons double penal?

I know Dash sacrificed herself, but I can't help but think, that she's just being a pervert.

Other than the grammar this fix is good.
Maybe find someone to edit it.

“We do have the element of surprise on our side.”

Surprise isn't an Element, you dummy! Honesty, Laughter, Generosity, Kindness, Loyalty and Magic are - not Surprise!

This was a epic and funny chapter. So it begin's.

“Thank you Sugar.” The image changed and the girls now turned to the news reporter to find that it's Blueblood in a blue blazer and a short mustache. “I always knew those power ponies where nothing but trouble!”

It's B. B. Blueblood.