Duel 3: Savage Evolution Part 2
Tyrannus had reached the forest, and collapsed on his knees near a river. As he leaned in to drink, he gazed in fear and disgust at his own reflection. This new face, this...monster, had hurt the one person who hadn't run away from his because of his appearance. The one girl who had actually grown to love him. And he had hurt her. Slashed at her with his claws. Tyrannus screamed in rage! "AGHH!" He swiped away at the reflection in the water! Hoping to do away with the being in the reflection! But it was still there. HE was still there. As his heart sank, Tyrannus heard a low chuckle coming from above.
"Yes. That's it. Use the rage in your body. It's your strength now." Evo glided down from one of the trees and was carrying a fresh kill. "Here. Thought you might like a meal." Tyrannus glared at Evo and swatted away the prey he had caught. Evo frowned. "Can't a brother show some concern for his sibling?"
"You're not my family.", Tyrannus growled. "And this 'gift' you gave is nothing but a curse! Change me back to a human!"
Evo shook his head. "You would side with those primitve weaklings?" Evo then grabbed Tyrannus by the throat and pinned him against a tree! "Only the strong have a right to survival! Which brings me to my plan! To put the world into a constant state of dueling in which we're at the top of the food chain! Everything below us is simply food to sate our hunger for battle!"
"If you truly believe that....you're the real primitve one...", Tyrannus spat back. "You've got no place in this world..."
Evo released Tyrannus and frowned. "Fine. So be it. I'll give you one last chance to make your choice. Either evolve alongside me, or join the weaklings in extinction. I hope you'll make the wise decision." Evo once again summoned his wings and flew off. Tyrannus slowly rose to his feet and drank from the stream. He then caught a fish with his newfound reflexes, and ate it.
"I guess I'd better find a place to sleep." Tyrannus ventured around, and soon found a nice firm branch on a tree. "That should do just fine." Tyrannus climbed up, and set his back against the trunk. As he started to fall asleep, Tyrannus thought of Fluttershy. He wondered if she would look for him, or if she would just pretend to forget everything about him. And if she does look for me, what'll she do? She didn't run away when she first met me. But now? Tyrannus let out a heavy sigh. I just hope that she doesn't run away screaming. Tyrannus fell asleep. Hoping that the next day would have a brighter outcome.
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Woah.
EVO IS ONE OF THE DARK RANGERS! I'M CALLING IT RIGHT NOW!
OMG!
I'm loving this So far with blitz back and having a new team by his side Burst and his friends have to be ready for the final battle
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what do you think of Tyrannus and Evo so far?
8084941 I'm liking the encounter with the both of them meeting so far
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They'll be clashing pretty soon.
8084950 looking forward to seeing it
Poor Ty....
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It'll get better! Evo gets what's coming next chapter!
It seems like the two are a pretty even match. But Evo has that ability of flight.
You know that Dark Ice was my favorite character before the reboot, but admittedly he was fairly weak as a villain. This time around he spent next to no time as a villain and that made him a slightly weaker character without the development from it. Evo, to me, feels like that villain Ice should have been, though with nobody but him pulling his strings he shouldn't reform, but I can't wait to see how this arc continues.
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I should mention that the arc will conclude next chapter. Care to PM me any hopes for the arc?
8085299
It's nothing special, you covered the bases. Just don't make the confrontation between Tyrannus and Evo or any resolution after feel rushed and this will be really well handled.
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I'll PM you the latest chapter. Give me your thoughts on its pacing. Also, A lot of people seem to not like this story.
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I wouldn't know, can't see the like/dislike ratio. If I were to guess it's because of people seeing a story and not being caught up, seeing all these new OCs does not help if they weren't following from their introduction. Or the simple fact that shipping with OCs ruins otps (which are serious business). If on the most pretentious level, while you have improved a lot you are no master of words. I say just wait until the story is complete before letting the like/dislike ratio get to you.
Now to read your chapter...