Duel 10: Dark Gathering 2
Blitz scowled as he viewed the latest defeat of one of his minions. "And another one fails me." Blitz then looked to the ceiling in annoyance. "Would you mind telling me what you're doing up there?"
A figure answered. "These are the daily techniques my family would enforce for the heir of each generation. I used to practice them to prove my worthiness as an heir, but now I do so in order to prepare my body for when I can wrest the status of heir from my brother as force."
Blitz growled in annoyance. "FINE. Take one of the others with you."
"NO.", the figure said sternly. "When I go to face Akage, it shall be my blade and deck alone that clash with him!"
"Might I ask why you're bothering to play fair?", Blitz asked in an annoyed tone.
"I may have not been chosen as the heir, but I shall still live by my clan's code of honor. To abandon that would be to turn my back on my family and their beliefs."
Blitz frowned. "You know, it would be easier if I just destroyed Akage for y-" Blitz was cut off when he saw a blade near his neck.
"Maybe you misheard me. I have no intention of destroying my brother.", the figure said coldly. "Though I am angered that he was chosen and not I, he is still my family."
"Well then...GET OFF MY CEILING AND GET HIM ALREADY!", Blitz screamed!
"Very well." The figure vanished in a puff of smoke. Soon brother. We will settle that score from years ago...
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I'm actually excited for this upcoming arc. The Nightfall storyline was wrapped up really nicely and Akage felt less explored as a character than he should have been, so I have absolute faith in this turning out really strong and shifting my opinion.
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What did you like best about the Nightfall arc?
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I suppose it would be Night's development over the course of the story. He starts out without much in terms of character but ends up being the one with the most to say about the human spirit. Technology enhances man's life but it is artificial, so it can only help its creators so much, and Night reminding his dad of that. My only complaint about this story (aside from Burst being quick to catch on to Blitz's plan but it is a thing that could happen and Blitz doesn't know that Burst does so the story still has a conflict until Blitz get's in the fray himself) is that you set the bar really high here. Akage vs. his brother would make sense in a smaller scale context of conflict but the others probably can't top invading the school without potentially making Blitz an anticlimax. Though I could very easily be wrong without having to tell you how to avoid this (one of your strengths from the start was always knowing when to bring epicness in to the setting and how much to put in each one, even if the context doesn't make the character as epic as the conflict tried to make them out to be, and now that you know how to make a working context...)
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Thanks! Feel free to PM me any suggestions for Burst and Blitz's encounter! Also, I could use some help making up a title for the next arc. So could you PM me a suggestion for that too?
8092850 So Awesome! I love the Nightfall arc were it looks like Nightfall were it looks like he was gone forever on the side of evil but twilight saved him and not only that him and twilight saved his dad Aswell
and now I'm looking forward to the next Arc with Akage and I think it should be Like Battle of Ninjas, or a Ninja Honor