Starts really interesting :)

Ooh wow, this looks really interesting. Let's see how you do!

Looking good so far. I was wondering for sometime how Fluttershy would react, and I'd have to say. I'm satisfied. Until next chapter. ^^

This was awesome! Sad it didn't continue.

This was an interesting chapter. I like how we see Rainbow regretting her past choices while at the same time realizing that those choices are the reason that she was able to achieve her dreams. The cost of a goal could mean giving things up.

Fluttershy at the end felt right. She still had her kind nature, but she is clearly guarded.