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Heh, I can only hope! ^.^

Now that is adorable!

Quick word of advice: Not everyone likes certain fetishes, so if you have something that's not the standard "vanilla", put a warning: "Contains: futa" to avoid unwanted down-voting

Um... probably should be tagged dark if you're going to involve dubcon, just to be safe.

I kept hearing the Team Fortress Engineer on every "nope."
Also, it's a good thing this is all just wish fulfillment fantasy, otherwise a bet like this would probably mark the end of a real reationship.

Fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine... I'll put this on my to-read list too, just 'cause it's you DLS.

Will read later once done.

Intriguing, definitely intriguing

why does this say it was uploaded on the 16 of march its April 11 and i dint see this yesterday

8089125 Well, it worked, and it's up there. Grats

Good start, very nice set up. Some incredibly fun, sexy fucking per usual with some good character bits. The whole touch of self conscious Spike has.... to bad this verse didn't give him a double dick like some do, but at least he gets to stick it in Rarity. Maybe Sweetie can join in and put that Futa spell to work after all.

But per usual, great bit of clop with a good set up and well done characters that just make even a single, simple, vanilla bit of sex hot. Can't wait to see what's cumming next.

Why do I get the nagging feeling that this whole thing is going to end disasterously?

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There is no futa unless DLS does an alternate ending where Sweetie wins (I really hope that happens). As is, it already warns of dubcon in the following chapter. Speaking of...
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Dubcon does not always have to start with rape. In this case, Rarity owes Sweetie a big enough favor to be (somewhat) willing to agree to this. Therefore it is unnecessary to add a dark tag. Same would be true if Spike took the bet and lost.

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Not as adorable as Precious Little Woona, though...

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Eh, it's only mentioned. It's not actually in the fic.
If people are too sensitive to handle even a mention of futa, well ... I guess they'll just have nervous breakdowns or something.

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The story doesn't dwell on it, so I wouldn't call it a 'dark' story.

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Eh, I don't think they ever had a 'real' relationship. Sweetie Belle was always a Rarity-surrogate for Spike.

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Sorry to inconvenience you!

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Next chapter is tomorrow, so it won't be long.

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^.^ I wonder what you'll think of the next chapter...

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It was uploaded on that date (and that's when my patreon supporters got access to 'proofread' it). And I (finally) published it today. The difference in dates usually isn't that drastic, but I needed a time when I could have two days in a row free to publish it.

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Well, no spoilers, but I will say the upcoming chapter is about twice as long as this one.

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Nah, my stories usually don't have disastrous endings.

8089812 Still seems like a recipe for trouble.

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Not as adorable as Precious Little Woona, though...

Few things are.

Eh, I don't think they ever had a 'real' relationship. Sweetie Belle was always a Rarity-surrogate for Spike.

Seems legit. Pretty much got the feeling they weren't SERIOUS serious, more a step or two past "Friends with benefits'.

Nah, my stories usually don't have disastrous endings.

Yeah... we've already been through how well sudden dark twists work out for these stories......

First he needs to negotiate with Opal before going into the Diamond Cave.

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And then this story became an RPG game.

And, strangely, I'm okay with that.

"Hell, I like you. You can come over to my house and fuck my sister!"
- Gunnery Sergeant Hartman

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Plot twist: his sister looks like this.
(Don't click that. I warned you.)

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According to LCPL Maximillian Uriarte, challenge accepted. Read the text under the comic.

That seemed to have genuinely hurt her, though, so he quickly searched for a way to change the subject.

Well then, maybe she should have had some self-control.

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Heh. Neither of them are big on self-control, are they?
(Then again, clopfics where everyone is good at self-control would be pretty boring, wouldn't they?)

loved all of it

Somehow I still see this story ending exactly how Choose Wisely did.

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Not always! i was just more commenting on her having the nerve to feel hurt over him bringing up how incredibly nice and lenient he was when she's the one who did the bad thing that she didn't have to do, knowing better.

On to the next chapter! I may not be a Sparity fan in the slightest but at least he's aged up.

Hey, this was a pretty good start.

I hope we can get both endings, with one where Spike loses. I think that'd be really funny TBH.

After I forgave you for what you did with Button Mash?

What did she do to him?!

I'm curious how she plans to convince Rarity doing this.
Maybe by personal participation in the task?

One small thing:

If I win, I get to use that mare-dick spell on you,

I thought she was using it on herself and only the "result" on him.

All of that was really good! I must admit though you got me curious with that bomb you oh-so-casually dropped and now I really want to know about the affair between Sweetie and Button Mash, how Spike found out (I think it was implied that she had lied before just not to his face), and how they handled that nasty fallout because obviously Spike hasn't gotten over it and it's still a very sore subject for the both of them. Honestly? I think that could even be a good story by itself if handled well.

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But which part was the best? ^.^

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With Rarity actually being a changeling that Sweetie Belle bribed into fulfilling her side of the bet?
I could see that happening. ^.^
And it would make for a fun sequel if Spike found out and then demanded to sleep with the real Rarity.

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Funny? More like fetish-y!

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Maybe by personal participation in the task?

As much a fan as I am of 3-way fun, her participation won't be hands-on, unfortunately.

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I like to think that the 'kiss and make up' phase after that little spat was when Spike got his very first blowjob. ^.^

Uhh, are the two of them actually together? Because if they were either Spike shouldn't really be so eager to go around having sex with other mares or Sweetie wouldn't volunteer another for it.

Good, but that "dragons" smaller than "ponies" thing just screams bullshit to me. Spike, being smaller than the average dragon because of how he was raised would be more believable and less insulting to one of the LARGEST races in every sense of the word. I mean really! At the very least, Spike, would be thicker than a pony his age while they would be longer but, small AND shorter?! Ouch!

Again, good storytelling.

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Well, yeah.
But that's what makes it hot!

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Eh, but there's a lot mixed in here. He's anthro, and his whole body is pony-sized.
While some dragons are huge, yes, that doesn't necessarily mean that the ratios of certain body parts to body size will be any bigger.
And, after all, it's hard to compete with 'hung like a horse'. ^.^

I would still like to see sweetie 'peg' spike.

I don't wan to hate loved this so=tory, but um could you maybe do an alternative ending? like sweetie wins? I would love to see how spike would handle one of those things

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It's on my list of things to be voted on by Patreon supporters ... if they demand it, it will happen.

Should I be sad for Sweetie at how eager Spike took a bet that could have ended in him literally getting fucked, only for a chance to fuck Rarity? I mean, I don't know the details of their relationship (If Button and Ember are any indication), but still, even after 3 years...

Which sounds bigger "hung like a horse" or "hung like a DRAGON"

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When the dragon is huge? Dragon.
But when the dragon is smaller than a horse? Not so much.

I wonder what happened between Sweetie, Spike and Button Mash.... Anywho, great start!