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Since he was young, Dark Star has had to face many a challenge for his image.
Charcoal fur, black mane, and even the same red eyes as the once villain Sombra. Sure, there were tales that the evil King had reformed, but no one had seem him in a long time, leaving Dark Star at the mercy of both children and adults alike accusing him of being a future abomination.

The day he earned his Cutie Mark didn't make things any easier. Having the image of the Grim Pony on a tome for a mark seemed to be an ill omen for all.

But the day he earned it was what set his path in stone. It was the day his mother died, and the day he wondered...what happened to ponies when they died?

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Luna heard the stories. She heard the rumors and the gossip plenty enough even in her court.
Tales of a pony resembling Sombra going about, visiting ponies on their death beds just before they left Equestria for good. The Harbinger, they called him.

She was going to learn the truth, and she knew exactly where she would find him. After all, poor Shining armor never ascended like his wife. His time was at an end, and Luna knew the Harbinger would not pass up such a large figure finding his path to the afterlife.

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So dark star was a past twilight? I'm confused

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It's mostly meant to be up to interpretation, but since Twilight is still alive, I'm afraid that one's out.

No, he was referring to Shining and Luna both as 'brother and sister', as Dark Star, in his last moments, felt a connection with them that brought back a 'soul memory'. Best way I can explain it atm without trying to actually detail the whole of the way this 'verse handles souls and such.

Of course, there's no telling if he meant such as their current roles or not. Souls aren't too picky about previous gender having to match current. ;)

WOOOOAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

This is an AMAZING story for a standalone! I would love to see where this could go if expanded upon!:pinkiesmile:

So much character depth and mystery for just a little under 7,000 words!:twilightsmile: In my opinion, of course!

8006784 Well thank you!
What mystery would you like to see explored?

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Specifically, there are two: the first is what happens if Cadence ever gets out of the Crystal Heart, the second is Twilight finding the inheritors of Harmony.

This was a briliant story.

You realy need to find a few group to get more reader.

WELL-DONE !!!!!!!

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