Days in the Mind of One that is Great and Powerful

by The REAL Mister Pkmn

The Rematch

The next day at school, Trixie showed up, and decided to cause a little panic. She grinned dully. This’ll certainly get Twilight to show. Multiple students cowered in terror behind anything they could find. The fear was apparent in their eyes, and it was so delicious to Trixie, even if a part of her found it… disturbing. She constantly picked up students that tried to flee her presence and demanded to know where Twilight was. “Trixie needs to know where Twilight is. I order you to speak what you know!” she yelled. Twilight, who overheard, could hear an odd mechanical like tone laced into her words.

Twilight stepped forward and yelled out at Trixie to get her attention. “Hey Trixie!” Trixie turned around “You want Twilight? Well here I am!” Twilight yelled.

Trixie’s mouth slightly curled into a grin. Dropping the student, Trixie stepped forward a couple of times, as did Twilight. The two were now facing each other a mere two meters away, and from what Twilight could assume, another fight was in order.

“Trixie will win this time. Trixie is much stronger now, and she will crush you, Twilight!” Trixie droned on, her mechanical sounding voice was easily recognized. It sounded like she was being controlled to say that. The necklace she donned now may have been the reason, and Twilight felt like she knew that necklace from somewhere.

“Do ya think you got this Twi?” Terrance asked, more than a little worried.

“Don’t worry about me, just hang tight.” Twilight responded.

“She’s got rocks in her brain if she thinks she can stop you!” Ashley spoke up.

Matt was next to follow “As much as it pains me to agree with AJ... You beat her before, you can do it again!”

Rina of all people seemed unsure “I don’t know guys, she seems a little...off”

It seemed as though Twilight wasn’t listening, for at that moment Trixie enveloped the both herself and Twilight in a bluish dome. Trixie drank in the look of confusion that Twilight had on her face. “You weren’t able to do this before Trixie! How can you possibly-” Twilight’s sentence was cut short by Trixie firing an attack. Reacting just in time, Twilight nimbly dodged the blast.

“Less talking, Twilight. Trixie isn’t leaving until you lose.” Conjuring up a barrage of magic bursts Trixie yelled out “Let’s see how you deal with Bullet hell!” Trixie’s horn surged with magical energy, sending off wave after wave of magical energy from all directions. Twilight was forced to on the defensive. Trying to counter was out of the question, as Trixie left no opening for Twilight to act upon. Top that with her constant flurry of attacks, it took all she could muster to avoid and defend. It pleased Trixie greatly to see Twilight losing. After blocking and dodging attacks from the powered up Trixie, Twilight's magic was starting to fade, her mana reserves apparently low. Then, with one stray attack, Trixie sent her flying to the ground with a loud thud. The others cringed at her impact. For Twilight, things didn’t seem so good. Trixie sauntered over to the fallen Alicorn and trapped her in a bubble made from the dome that had surrounded them, so she couldn’t break free.

Ashley shouts out to gain Trixie’s attention “Stop it! Don’t ya think she’s had enough!?”

Trixie seemed unfazed by Ashley’s words. She turned around with a soulless stare and raised her hand up, she radiated a pulse sending Ashley backwards, making the farm girl unable to keep her footing...hoofing?

Trixie returned her gaze towards Twilight who was furiously trying to break free from her imprisonment. “Trixie, how could you obtain such power overnight? Answer me, damn it!”

“She won’t listen Twilight, she only listens to me!” a sinister, masculine voice said, revealing another being from behind the controlled anthro unicorn mare. He was an aqua colored anthro with a grin that instilled fear into everyone else.

“Don’t you recognize that amulet?” he added.

Twilight didn’t like this guy, but she looked over to Trixie’s necklace with curiosity, and her eyes widened as she remembers the black-and-red item around her neck. “T-The Alicorn Amulet? But how did it-”

The mysterious anthro spoke again. “I see that you remember it from the show. As for how it’s here…” He smirked. “It fell from the sky one day. It’s what turned me from plain old Renaldus Star into the far superior Chessmaster Star.”

Rina asked “You said she only listens to you?”

Chessmaster snickered “Watch this and you’ll believe.” He then sneered “Trixie, take Twilight’s magic!” he ordered.
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With no visible hesitation, Trixie activated a spell that began to drain Twilight of her magic. Trixie watched as pain surged through the body of her enemy as her magic left her body, she was starting to lose consciousness when another masculine voice yelled out. “That’s enough Chessmaster!”

A turquoise blast severed the cord between Trixie and Twilight and the latter’s magic returned to her body, but not before a small plume formed in Trixie’s hand.

Onto the scene came a dark teal anthro with reddish brown hair that had a turquoise streak down the middle.

Chessmaster huffed. “Well if it isn’t my half brother, Maestro Spectrum Star. What brings you here?”

Maestro flicked his rainbow tail in agitation. “Chessmaster! Why do you use such dark magic!? You know what that can do to a person!”

Chessmaster scoffed. “It got results. And, If I get results, Her Ladyship will give me quite the handsome reward.”

Maestro glared with his blue-green eyes from behind his blue glasses. “Her Ladyship?”

Chessmaster covered his mouth with a hand and gasped. “Oops. My bad.” He then shrugged. “Oh well. You were gonna find out about her sooner or later.” He then gestured to Trixie. “She gave this one her transformation.” He then snatched the crystallized magic from Trixie’s hand, and continued. “She’ll be quite pleased that we have some of Twilight’s magic. And-” He then stopped, and chuckled. “I just got news from her. It seems that all we need is this small sample in order to put our plan into motion. So you can have the dead-weight back.” He then barked one last order. “Remove the Amulet, pawn! I’m going to need it again.” Trixie removed the amulet, and immediately collapsed. Chessmaster then picked it up in his magic.

“You may find her memories a bit...well...scrambled.” Chessmaster smirked.

Maestro yelled out “What is she offering your in return for your services, Chessmaster?!”

Chessmaster snickered again “What many of us in life dream of. Power. Her ladyship is willing to ascend me to a prince’s level if I help her with her master plans. I will be able to manipulate people as I see fit and so much more. It will be glorious!” Chessmaster laughed.

Maestro shook his head “She’s using you Chessmaster, don’t you see? If you continue down this path, she’ll just betray you without a second thought. Listen to what I’m saying!”

Chessmaster’s grin turned to that of plain boredom “I’m bored with you now brother, I need to get this to her ladyship.” he gestured to the plume of magic in his hand. “Ciao!” he waved as a portal appeared before him and he began to step through.

Maestro tried to catch him mid Teleport, but failed. He sighed, and muttered to himself “Well, this certainly didn’t go as planned…”

Ashley then spoke accusingly. “‘Didn’t go as planned?’ What in tarnation do you mean by that?”

Maestro sighed. “I’d hoped that I’d be able to tag along in his teleport, maybe find out who he’s working for. I mean, I have some suspicions, but I wanted proof.” He shook his head. “If Reina and Laranda knew about this, their hearts would break. After all, Chessmaster and I are the only family they have.”

The group of friend shook themselves off, and supported Twilight as she stood. Twilight then spoke. “I don’t know who those people are, but they seem important to you and that Chessmaster. Do you know something about what’s going on?”

Maestro shook his head. “Not very much, I’m afraid. All that I do know is that if things continue like they have, then we may end up living in a world full of Anthros.”

Rina then tilted her head. “Would that be so bad?”

Maestro hummed in thought. “Maybe not, but…” He sighed. “Some people might not… adjust well to the change. It isn’t for everyone, you know. For their sake, we need to stop what ever mess is coming our way, and fast.” Maestro then stood. “That’s why the Analyzers led Twilight to the Elements. They know something big is going to happen.”

As he started to walk away, Harry spoke. “Where are you going?”

Maestro then tossed a piece of paper towards Twilight, and she caught it. “That contains my contact info. Give it to Trixie when she wakes up as well. Something tells me that she’s more likely to be with us than against us now.” Before Maestro left he turned around one last time and said “If you want some answers, look for someone you already know, Twilight. I’ve been told she gave you some vital info before, so she may be able to give you some about this dark threat that has surfaced.”

With that Maestro vanished.

Author's Note:

So here's chapter four. I didn't expect to post it so soon, but what're ya gonna do? When you work in a colab, you're kinda expected to provide you contribution ASAP. Thanks go to Trixieistruemagic101 for editing. And hey, a proper look at the character from the end of the previous chapter! Yes, another one of my many OCs has made it into this universe. He, along with his half-brother Chessmaster, are involved in many of my fics. That's all I'll say for now.

Comments

[Trixieistruemagic101]

Trixie loves where this story is going, although Trrrrrrixie doesn't remember being so easy to take advantage of. I'll be your editor so mistakes like this don't happen.(plz let me be your editor. This story seems amazing!)

[Frankie2]

Okay. I'll continue to follow this. I just fear how bad her memories have been 'scrambled'.

[The REAL Mister Pkmn]

7914208 Really? That'd be great. I look forward to working with you (PM me your e-mail)!

[The REAL Mister Pkmn]

7914257 Don't worry, it's nothing too serious, I promise. This story's about to get more positive as of chapter five on the Trixie front. As for your curiosity about Chessmaster, he's mentioned in three of my other stories- End of Days, End of Nights; Scorching Day, Chilling Night; and the one that he (currently) has the biggest role in, The Conversion Bureau EarthGate Saga: A Fist Clenched In Rage.

[kwr2k13]

We have spots open for other anthro ponies in the story. The Cutie Mark Crusaders (mostly sweetie Belle and scootaloo, since I found someone to write as apple bloom). Rarity is needed for the mane 6 and possibly Starlight Glimmer may show up in a later chapter. Can you imagine a Derpy anthro or dr whooves? Maybe Lyra and Bon Bon?

[Trixieistruemagic101]

Trixie showed up, and decided to case a little panic.

case should be spelled 'cause'

“Trixie needs to know where Twilight is. I order you to speak what you know!” she yelled, Twilight also could hear an odd mechanical like tone laced into her words.

Maybe you should stop the sentence after Trixie's dialogue. Then you can take out the 'also' in the next sentence.

The necklace she donned now may of been the reason, but Twilight felt like she knew that necklace from somewhere.

Make it 'may be', because she's still controlled and it's still affecting her. I also think that you should use 'and' not 'but' as your conjunction.

Twilight’s sentence was cut short by Trixie firing an attack, reacting just in time, Twilight nimbly dodged the blast.

the sentence should stop after 'attack' so that it can flow better and not be a run on sentence.

“Let’s see how you deal with Bullet hell!” sending off wave after wave of blasts Twilight was forced to take a defence route against the attacks.

I say change 'blasts' to 'magical energy' I also think that the sentence should stop after blasts as well, so it isn't a run on sentence. Defense isn't spelled right, and it should be 'defensive' (so It turns to 'defensive route') Maybe, for a more visual effect, you should add more detail to the attack and/or show how twilights defensive route.

The others cringed at her impact, for Twilight things didn’t seemed really good.

The sentence should end after impact, with the way it's written. There should be a comma after Twilight, and 'seemed' should be 'seem'. 'The others cringed at her impact. For Twilight, things didn't seem so good.'

Trixie sauntered over to the fallen Alicorn and traps her in a bubble made from the dome that surround them, so she couldn’t break free.

to keep the whole sentence in past tense, 'surround' should be 'surrounded'.

Trixie seemed unfazed by Ashley’s words, she turned around with a soulless stare and by raising her hand up she radiates a pulse to send Ashley backwards, the farm girl unable to keep her footing...hoofing?

sentence should end after 'words'. I think the sentence should go like this 'She turned around with a soulless stare and raised her hand, radiating a pulse that pushes Ashley back and unable to keep her footing....hoofing?'

He then stopped, then chuckled. “I just got news from her.

'He then stopped, and chuckled.' You don't need another 'then'