• Published 5th Jul 2012
  • 966 Views, 51 Comments

Live&Learn - Nevarius



After defeating his internal chaos, many challenges appear to Eravel in his new form

Comments ( 12 )

no dont let the fic end:fluttercry:

It's over. :applecry::fluttercry::ajsleepy::raritycry:
I enjoyed every moment of it. :pinkiesad2:
After Night Sky revealed that he acted like Discord had told him I laughed the entire rest of the chapter. :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:
But when I reached the end and you said that the story is over I was all Happysad.
My heart is still aching because of it. :raritydespair:

And just for the sake of a sequel I'll say this:
Maybe make another story with another protagonist and other background characters, that will maaaaaybe meet the path of Live & Learn somewhere in the storyline. I myself am writing a HiE at the moment and maybe you can catch some ideas from it if you like.
It's not written too far but I've got two chapters so far. Not submitted yet because of the lack of awesome cover image.
Here's the link. You need the password "fireball" to read it.
I hope this will motivate you to write a sequel to Live & Learn, as Live & Learn was the next line of your story The Fearless Warrior.

Bronydragon:moustache:

1453876
Sorry... but it has to be done.... Some times is better to end before you ruin the entire story :ajsleepy:
1455662
I though about that... but still need some more time to think over it... but I'll keep writing more stories, be sure of that. (already started a new one, but it have nothing to do with this one)
1455926
I still hadn't time to read your stories, but I'll be sure to do it!
And you don't have idea how much I hate to make a final chapter :fluttercry:
(really, it makes me really sad)

If I take any kind of inspiration out of your fics, be sure that I'll make a reference to you :pinkiehappy:

1457670
I know how you feel. It's like letting go of some part of you, like something inside you died painfully. I'm making short stories of different shows and from my own mind for years now and always have this feeling when one of them ends. :fluttercry::fluttercry:

You want to refer to me if you take something out of my stories? :rainbowderp: Too much honor. :twilightblush:

Bronydragon:moustache:

Damn. Didn't expect to see an ending like this. This was a very good story

4760975 Wow, another person that actually read these:pinkiegasp::heart:
Heh, It makes me really happy that you enjoyed the story, and sotry for my mistakes. No editor at the time it was written and my english was (and still is) far from perfect

4765492 still a great story nonetheless

I love this ... can there be a a nother one plz

You need to link the freaking sequel cuz I didn't know there was another story you need to make it so people know that this isn't just one story but a sequel to a different story

8017671 Done! Thank you for pointing at this obvious mistake that I oversee! :rainbowkiss:

Damn good story well done it was a bit confusing at first but it didn’t take long to wrap my head around lmao anyways nice work

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