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Nevarius


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So far so good looking forward to it. This was a great lead to something I think will e very good. I hope it gets going soon.

Edit: also Since I am quiet surprised I got it. FIRST!!!.

maybe, if you don't already have an idea for the begining of the next chapter, maybe you should have twighlight come over, but not to take him to school knowing he is older, but instead taking him to her library to research on how to control his body better. Just throwing out an idea and also that means that no one actually wins the bet they made against each other. if you like the idea just talk to me and tell me if you can and if you don't you can tell me like i said im just throwing out idea's that you could use

:pinkiehappy:sweet been looking forward to this cant wait to see how you evolve this story so please keep the good times rolling

This story is awesome! Just got done reading "the fearless warrior" wich is also awsome! :moustache:

Yeah "the fearless warrior" was awsome, But this one might be better

I can´t believe it i´m FIRST soawesome!

JUST GO SEE HER DAMIT!

:rainbowlaugh:Would have been funny if he said "I swear when all of this is over...I am going to set both of you on fire...":rainbowlaugh:

:rainbowkiss:You should have set her tiara on fire.:rainbowkiss:

I have to know HOW IN THE HAY did this get a down rank of 8 its a great story.

I'm really enjoying this series.+(The Fearless Warrior.)
More.
Possative rating.

nice chapter man i hope that you get a new chapter out soon

Great chapter as always. Can't wait for the next one to come out, but completely understand you.
Good ideas are numerous in the head of a skilled writer, but to wrap them up into a text is sometimes very hard.
You want your story to be good and for this fact you don't want to speed up things ruining it just for fast chapter updates.
And maybe you are just a little perfectionist like me who want the work to be pleasant for everyone.
Anyways, keep up the good work and release the next chapter whenever you feel like it. If the readers (myself included) want the story to be good they have to be patient and wait for you to post it.
That's all for now.

Bronydragon:moustache:

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Yes... I'm a little perfectionist in many aspects... now imagine this plus the fact that my native language is not english and I have a HUGE lack of vocabulary, because I think the ideas in my language and I have to adapt everything to something 'gringo' :rainbowlaugh:

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Got the same problem here. I'm from Germany. I've got a story with at least 20 chapters and I guess like 70.000 words in my mind, but I have to translate the whole stuff, write it down properly and fight against my inner perfectionist which is just too much of a jackass right now, spotting mistakes everywhere, forcing me to reread it over and over again so it will be good. So I'm litteraly annoyed by myself. Duh:ajbemused:
Oh and by the way. For english not being your first language your writing is just awesomely good.:pinkiehappy:
I'm hypnotized by your story about Eravel. It is a masterpiece!:yay:

Bronydragon:moustache:

just finished fearless warrior and started reading this :) and i must say, still pretty awesome. your stories make me smile

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:heart:I'm really happy to hear that my stories have this effect on you :pinkiehappy:

Great chapter as ever. :pinkiehappy:
I'm also able to understand Discords amusement here. :ajsmug:
There is Octavia on the one hand, who thinks Eravel is having feelings for her :pinkiesad2:
and on the other hand the furious dragon mother, who saw Eravel walking around in the body of her son, coming to get him. :twilightangry2:
As Discord might say: "This will be some excellent chaos. Mwahahahaha!" :pinkiecrazy:
Also note to self: 'Kill Discord for being him' :facehoof:

Bronydragon:moustache:

Couldn't help but think of inception while he was on the dream plain lol:rainbowlaugh:

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:rainbowderp: uhh.... what?
mind explaining?

1016374 Discord said he can keep him in their for a whole year but in your mind its only 20 times faster in the movie.

FIRST! And also indeed shit has hit the fan. At full force. From both sides of the fan.

Shitfansandwitch! :trollestia:

awesome chapter as per usual! but dammit i HATE the suspense that these kind of chapters have at the end xD now i gotta wait fot the next one before i can know if anything will turn out okay! but good job!

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Working on the next chapter already... what is killing me right now is finding time to write.... but i plan on having it ready soon (and by soon i mean at least more 5 days :fluttercry:)

Im amazed that hit to the head didn't kill him, or falling ontop of Shining Armor crushing him...also...

I AM FIRST AND BEFORE SECOND!

I like this chapter and the story overall. Brings the misunderstanding to a satisfying end. I assume that the future problem will come from the female dragon looking for her supposedly stolen son? Can't wait to read the next chapter, no doubt it will be as awesome as the last chapters.

This chapter. So much laughter. So much joy.
You are too good.
The statement of Discord really killed me.
"I didn't laid back and watch!" He said crossing his arms "I was rolling and laughing!"
Dear sir, this was making me shit my pants. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
More of it please. :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::rainbowkiss::yay:

Bronydragon:moustache:

You are very sneaky sneaky.

Take the keys to my bakery you sneaky bastard

Bronydragon:moustache:

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what you guys mean with 'sneaky'? :unsuresweetie:
I know what the word means... or I think so at least...
I just didn't got the reasons :rainbowlaugh:

Steelhead just got owned! :yay: And I claim this in the name of the FIRST!

What the? Dragon?! How in the name of Celestia?:rainbowhuh::pinkiegasp:
Saw a few minor grammar errors, but hey it's you, Nefarius. I give a buck about errors. The story is just too good.:pinkiehappy:
And I think Steel Head will need a bit of aftersun and some icebags there.

Bronydragon:moustache:

no dont let the fic end:fluttercry:

It's over. :applecry::fluttercry::ajsleepy::raritycry:
I enjoyed every moment of it. :pinkiesad2:
After Night Sky revealed that he acted like Discord had told him I laughed the entire rest of the chapter. :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:
But when I reached the end and you said that the story is over I was all Happysad.
My heart is still aching because of it. :raritydespair:

And just for the sake of a sequel I'll say this:
Maybe make another story with another protagonist and other background characters, that will maaaaaybe meet the path of Live & Learn somewhere in the storyline. I myself am writing a HiE at the moment and maybe you can catch some ideas from it if you like.
It's not written too far but I've got two chapters so far. Not submitted yet because of the lack of awesome cover image.
Here's the link. You need the password "fireball" to read it.
I hope this will motivate you to write a sequel to Live & Learn, as Live & Learn was the next line of your story The Fearless Warrior.

Bronydragon:moustache:

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Sorry... but it has to be done.... Some times is better to end before you ruin the entire story :ajsleepy:
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I though about that... but still need some more time to think over it... but I'll keep writing more stories, be sure of that. (already started a new one, but it have nothing to do with this one)
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I still hadn't time to read your stories, but I'll be sure to do it!
And you don't have idea how much I hate to make a final chapter :fluttercry:
(really, it makes me really sad)

If I take any kind of inspiration out of your fics, be sure that I'll make a reference to you :pinkiehappy:

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I know how you feel. It's like letting go of some part of you, like something inside you died painfully. I'm making short stories of different shows and from my own mind for years now and always have this feeling when one of them ends. :fluttercry::fluttercry:

You want to refer to me if you take something out of my stories? :rainbowderp: Too much honor. :twilightblush:

Bronydragon:moustache:

1082878 yeah well i am actually second so there

This is quite the new beginning, AND it has a lot less spelling errors!


(FIRST)

Darn... I just know that Steel is keeping those 10 bits... its a shame



On a completely unrelated side note, can anyone recommend any fimfics that involve non-spike dragon main characters or any that involve being turned into a young pony?

The whole 'almost killed with a cello' thing will probably scar Eravel for life. I wonder how he reacts when he comes home and sees Octavia with Steel Head? He probably gets out as quick as possible to avoid nightmares or flashbacks to almost dying

Damn. Didn't expect to see an ending like this. This was a very good story

4760975 Wow, another person that actually read these:pinkiegasp::heart:
Heh, It makes me really happy that you enjoyed the story, and sotry for my mistakes. No editor at the time it was written and my english was (and still is) far from perfect

HA HA HA in my mind as I clicked next chapter I seid to myself sh*ts going to hit the fan and I look at the title and laffed

I love this ... can there be a a nother one plz

You need to link the freaking sequel cuz I didn't know there was another story you need to make it so people know that this isn't just one story but a sequel to a different story

8017671 Done! Thank you for pointing at this obvious mistake that I oversee! :rainbowkiss:

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