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Evening Picnic

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ThatAustrian

ThatAustrian #1 · Jan 21st, 2017 · 1 · · Chapter One ·

Hmmm good story~
Also i am for both...

Lanxide

Lanxide #2 · Jan 22nd, 2017 · 1 · · Chapter One ·

Maybe Sounding, Maybe All the way through, depending on what you guys say

Why not both?

sparks117

sparks117 #3 · Jan 22nd, 2017 · · · Chapter One ·

7887395 cause some people don't like one or the other :P also I'm not to sure about my ability to do 'all the way through' yet, this story is very ambitious for my second fic ever, so. But, dosnt mean I won't try! Now... where's that motivation..

oberonice

oberonice #4 · Jan 23rd, 2017 · 1 · 3 · Chapter One ·

Holy shit typos... did you get a anyone to pre-read this for feedback and editing?

sparks117

sparks117 #5 · Jan 24th, 2017 · · · Chapter One ·

7890777 No I did not, This is my second fic ever and I did use G-docs that has a very nice grammar and spell check, so please explain some typos and be the one to give feedback instead of giving simple "Holy shit his is the worst" and just assume it will somehow help me?