David, or rather Prince Artemis, faces an uncertain future. Is it possible for him to find happiness after a millenia of hatred and pain? Or will the past be a lingering shadow from which he cannot escape? Only time will tell.
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Oh shit you did it before a day even passed. Guess I own you a cat.
7821916 Sometimes inspiration comes easier to me than it does others. And no, you cannot send me a cat.
prediction time: artemis is gonna learn about what he and celestia did and offer himself to chrysalis. in what manner is gonna be an interesting question!
7821936 The idea is that it's something she figures she can turn to her advantage. How and why shall remain a mystery, same as whether or not she'll succeed. Also, the gore tag is there just in case.
Wow, I gotta say you write tortured souls very well. It's very interesting to see Artemis go through all of this, you root for him because you know he's trying to better himself and you feel sorry for him because of his severe PTSD. But at the same time you can't help but facepalm and think "man he is still a jerk."
I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this, especially with a certain changeling queen on the horizon.
Keep up the good work.
I just put this in tracking less then an hour ago.
I wonder if that's Chrysalis or a different queen?
Mah body tingles all happy-like when ah eat up yer words.
Thank... you.
7821963 Well, that's why I don't really write romance. I'm no good at it
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The solution is simple: git gud at it and we shall be appeased.
7822002 Yes, because it's just that simple
Well at least chrysalis has a good reason.
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I know, right?
I am W H E E Z I N G
I need more. It hurts reading the cliff hangers man, it really hurts.
Am I the only one who found Chrysalis' flirting to be more humorous than disturbing? And the best part is, she doesn't even realize that.
I can only hope that her increasing methods result in more and more awkward situations while she thinks she is making progress. Misreading those cues would certainly explain how in canon she thought she was doing a good job impersonating Cadance when it was so awful.
Mistake.
huh... Tonks
It's fitting really.
7822127 Thanks for letting me know. Fixed.
7822151 Any time.
Potential for shipping just pop up.
The blueprint for the ship is being drawn. The shipping lanes are being set.
Set Sail imminent.
such a great story. hope to see more soon.
7822181 But, sir the load you intend to put on that ship will sink it before it leaves the dock!!!
7822399 What do you mean? the ship can carries many hundred-thousands of tons and is powered by a fusion reactor, It wouldn't be sunk.
7822181 Artemis and Tom. Calling it now!
First meeting and he's caught off balance, perfect
Nymph the nympho
Aw man, this keeps getting more betterer and more betterer.
Excuse me, Admin? There seems to be a problem with the site. I cant upvote this twice.
The reaction of the staff for me sold it.
To be fair Chryssie, most Equestrians don't even know your race exists. You were too good at your job.
Nice to see a bromance develop between Artemis and Shining.
7821959 Well, David is a person who went through 800-1000 years of unending mental torture being locked in with a psychopath. No matter how nice he might have been before their banishment, one just does not simply come out of that unscathed.
So, we can fully expect him to be a jerk while still being sympathetic toward him.
And Chryssie is starting to make an interesting twist to forming a relationship with him. Sure, she's in it for revenge for what happened to her hive, and I'm sure she's going to use any affection he develops toward her as part of that revenge...but I think she's going to develop a few feelings of her own. And when the shit hits the fan, it's going to be GLORIOUS!
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Rarity's yet-to-be old boyfriend??
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Yeah I personally am sick of the attitude these ponies have towards us "Barbarians" that authors seem to put in stories. How would ponies even survive in a world like ours, a world where everything is trying to kill you and there would be no magic. Heh, it certianly would be something to see if we "Barbarians" actually come to their world and let them know just how outclassed they are.
Just like how it is in the Salvation War series, just because a creature is magical doesn't mean that it's invincible. Hell in that story a demonic army invaded earth and got it's ass kicked because they were still using bronze age tactics aginst a modern mobile army. With enough energy and technological know how, you can beat anything.
7823492 You do realize that Shining Armor isn't being literal in his use of the term barbarian, right?
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Yeah sorry about that, I just get to pissed off whenever writers write the ponies as seemingly arrogant and holier-than-thou, thinking that their way is the only way.
Yeah I should have not reacted that way.
7823542 Hey, I can understand it to an extent, so don't worry too much about it. I just like being a smartass
personally I love the arrogant tone of the ponies and find it fun when the "barbarians" get the upper hand or have new ideas/ opinions that surprise the ponies because of this.
So we've seen him interact with the Princesses and Shining. Wonder if he meets the Mane Six and how that will go down.
Just don't start talking in his mind Chryssie if you do well, I don't think there would be anything left for your hive to survive off.
Also great chapter looking forward to the next whenever that comes.
7821829 ... Actually that second one was just a typo on my part. Still hilarious though.
7823515 Really? I must have missed that somehow. I legitimately thought he was being demeaning and insulting just because he dislikes out protagonist.
I don't see the changelings making much progress with Artemis. That or him and Luna will completely crush them with no remorse in their hearts.
7823801 Well, when you're dealing with someone who almost bashed your leader's brains out with nothing more than his own hooves, you might view them as rather barbaric. Remember, ponies are people too, and thus vulnerable to the same pratfalls as anyone else in real life. Judging a race based on the, admittedly crazed, actions of the only one you've met, while wrong, happens. Given he also endangered Shining's little sister and hurt Cadance, you can imagine the captain's opinion of Artemis would be a rather poor one at the outset.
I just don't understand something , were are we in the timeline ? Because it matter and it's hard to understand
7823888 Do you mean in terms of the My Little Pony canon? Well, it's still during what would be considered season 1, with the misadventures of the mane six going on as they would normally at this point in time. There may or may not be references at some point, like the smoke of the dragon being seen in the distance or perhaps a letter arriving while Celestia is in a scene, but as far as this point in the story is concerned, canon is irrelevant.
7823895 so chrissy isn't searching revenge for the wedding .... "la trama si infittisce"
7823901 No, no the wedding hasn't happened. Cadance and Shining Armor are still only dating and Chrysalis is only in the story right now because Celestia's Solar Beam blew the crap out of her hive.
7823905 oh...right you said that at the end of the first story... I'm feeling stupid right now =w=
7823911 Don't feel stupid for something that could happen to anyone. Memory can be a tricky thing sometimes, so no worries
7823923 thanks