David, or rather Prince Artemis, faces an uncertain future. Is it possible for him to find happiness after a millenia of hatred and pain? Or will the past be a lingering shadow from which he cannot escape? Only time will tell.
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Oh my gosh! Welcome back!
Oops, had to do a quick edit at the end of the chapter, because I forgot to do something. For those that have read it already, please go back and take a look for a certain link. Sorry for the bit of absentmindedness
IT LIVES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT'S ALIVE! IT'S ALIVE!
An update! Hooray! Lovely little chapter. We have characterisation with Artemis, the formation of his relationship with his 'niece'. Nice to see the disagreements between the two sisters, reminding us of how important they were for balancing each other out. Luna needs Celestia's compassion, and Celestia needs Luna's pragmatism. The scene with the girls and everyone else's reaction to the light show was lovely. Great job, glad to see a continuation.
So his domain is lightning? That would certainly explain the exploding clouds. And his cutie mark gives "shoot the moon" a whole new meaning.
A lot going on this chapter, and I like it. Glad to have you back, sir.
Oh Lordy, its alive!
haven't even read it yet, but i'm so happy to see a new update!!!!
Damn. Gonna have to reread everything again. I've forgotten what this was about. :s
I had just reread To Know Hell yesterday so this was a pleasant surprise.
If I didn't know the context my brain would have gone places.
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Heh! I bet his twin blue sis will be kicking him in the nuts as payback for both the damaged real estate and her cramps!
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She's definitely going to have a few choice words to say once she gets back
Hell yeah! Psyched to see an update of one of my favorites.
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Do they include Biff, pow, and thud?
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It's certainly possible ^^
Luna is gonna be so pissed. Big sister might even try to give her little brother a good old fashion flank beating for that stunt.
Pro-tip, it's possible to embed images directly into the chapter so we don't need a link to see it. For now though, here's Artemis' new butt mark for everyone's viewing pleasure:
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welcome back dude
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I am now enjoying the image of Luna dressed up as 60's Bat Man, Celestia as Robin, and Artemis as the Riddler, his mooks being the crowd of Pegasi that were chasing him...
It's ALIVVVVVVVE!!!. I admit I had given up hope on this ever updating but this chapter was so worth the wait. Artemis finally got his cutie mark, some plot development and some early introductions of the cast.
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Snrk, well, yeah, that's definitely an image
Riddle-Arty: "Riddle me this; what's white, wide, and visible to the world at night?"
Luna-Bat: "Our moon, of course!"
Riddle Arty: "Ha, no, but good guess! It is—" *points at Tia-Robin* "—the Mare Wonder's stupendous backside!"
Tia-Robin: "Holy hot zingers, Luna-Bat!"
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eh, i think a kick to the ovaries is more than fair for what she did to him
So good to see an update to this, and what an update it was!
It's a shame Artemis never got to watch the new Shazam movie, bet he would've found it inspiring considering his newly-discovered Talent.
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Are they going to be back left and back right?
I wonder if there will be more interactions between LD and Artemis. And while I was reading I saw the viewer amount peak at 48.
YUUUUUUUUUUSSSSS! Update and a cutie mark!!!!!
Chapter was beautifully written, was on edge the entire time!
time to make more fan art!
obligatory gene_wilder.jpg inserted here.
Neat, now is he living artillery though?
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Possibly
Welcome back.
Cool Mark.
Don't die on us again.
Well, this was a massively good come back to this story there really isn't any questions to be done from this. I thought that Artemis and Cadence doing a visit to Cloudsdales and the subsequent race was great with the flock of pegasi on their trail, no two ways about it. I think this will help smooth out their relation between each other growing beyond prisoner and warden relation they had before. It's nice to see that he find satisfaction in flying in open skies and find out that he has a compensative streak to him. I wonder if we are also going to see more of Lightning Dust in this story, would be funny to have a cat fight with Chrysalis. look's like the Mane Six are having a good time in their training and Shining isn't having quite as good a time with this. I might have been a little disappointed with Trixie's magic show, would have like to see more interactions during the show, but to be honest that would have marred the sky spectacle. I am happy to see you back at writing again and I hope to see more of you in the future. Keep up the good work.
I can wait for the next chapter, ill wait as long as i need to. You have made my most favorite story on this site ever. I look forward to the next installment! :)
I had to go back and reread the stories, it had been so long.
It was not a wasted effort. Glad to see this update, hope to see more from it. (Hopefully sooner than last time)
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm
What a fantastic chapter to enjoy and experience after a long wait. Well worth it I say.
You know when you read a story to certain points, you begin to have little head cannons develop. When the writer takes the story in another direction, it can leave a person a bit conflicted but its a turning point. However, if the writer goes down the path the person was thinking and falls short, its a bit of a letdown.
However: when a writer makes your little headcannon explode in a cascade of sparks and lightning hungry for more? Yep. "You are Here"
That was awesome sir. So now I want to ask the question, Is there any way shape or form that I can help? Within reason of course.
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Let’s hope not Snip Snip
Well that brings a new meaning to Shoot The Moon
That's a really nice mark, I have to say.
And the chapter was great. I was wondering if Luna would be able to tell when he hit the moon and lo and behold, she did ^^; Awkward. Still, the flock chase was awesome.
It's good to see this story making a come back.
To think I reread this particularly delectable literary dish and thought with sadness that it may never see it's culmination. You have me practically salivating for the next course!
What a way to earn your mark
Good. Good. Worth the wait.
Feels lacking. There should be some deeper meaning, but there's nothing to it.
A lovely update, and certainly one that went a few different places.
The whole flight scene reminds me of fantasia almost. The dance of things and just grabbing the fun spur of the moment. And oofle on the pegasi finding a whole new meeting on this one after that scene.
From young and old, the aerial display will be something talked about for a good long while, much to his dismay.
Wooooot!!!!!! So glad to see your wrighting again.
The only problem I personally have with the Cutie-mark is that I wish it had a similar unique ''background'' to it like Luna does :/ It would really help push the ''Twins'' image the story is making for them o.o After all I can't really think of ANYONE that's got a Cutie mark quite like Luna's shape O.o Everyone's Cutie-marks always has Celestia's shape to them... a small circle rather than a large oval/''blotch'' :/
Edit: Maybe the cloud portion of it could be stretched/lengthened to have it similar to the black part of Luna's mark?
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Eh... I'd say there are some things that you can take from the mark o.o For example while a thunderstorm during the night can be one of the most terrifying things any creature has ever endured without shelter, It's almost always followed by some of the most amazing mornings ever.
It also has a sense of ''Wild freedom''
Not to mention that sometimes the worst of enemies would rather avoid fighting one another and either broker truce or retreat to safety rather than risk ''braving the storm'' o.o
Oh and it fits with his temper XD he can go smoldering at the edge ready to blow his fuse for no reason XD
But eh that's just me...
I am happy you are back in action. I'm always glad to find an old story I had tracked a long time ago Get a update. I hope you will continue to update the story.
Hell yeah still goin. Glad to see. I really like this chapter. It was cool to see Artemis bonding with the ponies in an impromptu race. I liked that he could make it to space that was cool imagining him in a trace as he speeds past Cadance. Thanks for the chapter lookin forward to more.