HUGE Thanks to DrawnCandy for featuring this story on her youtube channel!
A Small Note: This fan fiction is a work in progress rough draft, it lacks polish and will be punched up after I have finished more of the story.
This is a story set in an alternative reality where Supreme Commander Celestia and the evil Führer Luna have been locked in a war for the last twenty years. Pony War Academy (PWA) has taken the place of high school. At the PWA ponies learn the art of battle in order to defend Equestria from Lunas Night Mare army. Drama unfolds as Twilight and friends struggle to find their place in a world where they have only seen war.
Adult Content Advisory:
This story is going to be dark and adult at times, including adult language and situations. I will be posting two versions of the story, a Teen version and a Mature version. The Teen version will have toned down language (PG-13) and will omit any explicit content. The mature version will contain explicit content including sex, violence, and language.
If you are sensitive to any of these things, please stick to the Teen version, the story will progress in a similar manner regardless of which version you read.
Am i alloud to use this for me YT channel?
Woo! Can't wait to see where it goes from here!
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Thank you, it's very nice to hear that I was able to capture your interest, more should be coming shortly!
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Drop me a PM to let me know what youd like to do with it for your channel, the answer will most likely be yes as long as you give credit :)
Nice cover pic. Are u going to reference the mlp battle theme by undreamedpanic in the story? (Best song ever!)
What can I say other than "more please"? Awesome concept.
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Thanks a lot! I'm already hashing out the next part and I think it'll help set a better tone for the series.
Here's a little teaser
(caution: minor language)-
“Get up! Get up, godsdammit!” The figure said, coming sharply into focus. “Back to the wall! We have to defend this trench until the very last pony!” And with that, he was gone. She could hear the sound of his yelling for a moment, then a distant explosion. Then nothing.
She was alone, completely alone; and they were coming.
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In all seriousness Bronies make some of the best fan music I've ever heard, so I'll definitely have to check it out.
Thanks for letting me know!
7756289 no problem. I honestly stumbled across his music on accident. Personally I believe it was the best accident i ever had
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As a former soldier, I eat up military themed stories.
Poor Fluttershy.
Hmm.
I think I'll follow this, looks interesting so far.
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I appreciate the kind words, and thank you for your service!
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Thanks a lot!
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Hey, anytime. If you ever have any questions, feel free to ask.
7762180 You're welcome, and thanks for the watch!
Führer is spelt with an umlaut u, though many people wouldn't know that.
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Noted, thanks for the catch!
Damn, interesting indeed. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Guess what?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2tSMdvf9WzE
BOOM ink to episode 1!
The editing messed up a bit ;^;
hope you like it anyway!
~DC
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Aw man this is so awesome!
So cool to hear someone narrate a story of mine! Thank you so much!~
But... You haven't uploaded a mature version of this story.