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YEAH, UPDATE! Been waiting for this ever since that mess up with the save\publish button.
Starting off on the wrong foot from both sides by the looks of it.
Moar!!!
7817639 I point you to the little blurb at the bottom of the chapter.
7817857 awwww! Ok! Will be waiting with my eyes peeled!!
I can see the meeting between him and Tia starting with this
O.L. "so any ideas where a guy can get a throne cushion made"
P.C. "ummm....what??"
O.L. "my throne really does a number on my back"
7819150 No, for now he's just using a normal mace.
7819187 Ok
I can't wait for chapter 16.
The Monk
Next chapter ????
7845384 I'm at 650 words... It'll get there... eventually...
I cannot wait for the next chapter!
(Subconscious) yes you can
Yea, you're right
For whatever reason, I didn't get notified when you updated. A nice chapter, all in all. Nothing upsetting in terms of errors. I also notice you might've listened to my suggestion for giving the teen-aged 'heroes' a lesson.
Here are some corrections in sign of thanks
How suspicious.
even once I found the Blues
Unless they were fully aware of what they were doing in the event that they were also dark in nature. Like Gnarl, for instance. Also, we just finished explaining that the big man was pretty helpless while doing his Clairvoyance thing. This looks like an intentional setup. I suggest being less obvious about it, at bare minimum.
What, like a vampire? Did Chryssy really say that?
I am pleased so far. MORE!
You know what you did wrong here.....Fix it.
8050515
Bro, maybe that's how he spells it in his culture, dunne ya be so rude.
Seven? The elements are six...
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I believe he is counting every element, plus the royal sisters as one entity.
[unit1 = Honesty, Kindness, Laughter, Loyalty, Magic, Generosity] + [unit2 = Royal Sisters] = 7 Entities
... something like that.
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.....He spelled it right in a previous chapter so there is no reason to misspell her name now.
The mane six seem to go for guilty until proven Innocent... Very bad policy
Since pony left the Sheep to there fates the hate is appropriate.
Clever to keep rhe mane six in his eyes and help em rest to keep em focused.
The Overlord needs more than a pillow or five. A Physiotherapist to get his back in order every time he sit on that throne...
That thing did more damage to him than the Queen combined
Beautiful craftet chapter