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Well.... here we go again. * begins reading *
(Steeples fingers) Excellent.
Honestly, I was digging the othe one better, but this still has potential, so I'll see where it goes.
7697788 Your account pic fits your comment!
7697811 Yes. YES. YEEEEEEEEEESSSS!!!!!!
Well, much more realistic reaction... knowing now what we know Gnarl feels alot more of a threat. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
7697788 Ditto. *Picks up the copy and reads*
I like other one a little more. But lets see what this one hace.
Oh hey, I wondered what had happened to your story. I never noticed that you had started a rewrite, that explains why there were no updates anymore. Well, lots of new stuff to read now! 'ere we go
7697788 Oh, a Overlord crossover, and one that isn't a displaced story. Interesting to say the least...
*Reads the story and hopes this will update soon.*
LEEEROOOYYYYYYYYY JENKINS! ( When reading story for the first time in forever) (Disney reference of frozen, if you didn't catch it)
This world of sunshine and rainbows won't know what hit it!
I like this intro and while it is similar to the opening to Overlord 1, the few chances balance it out
Darkness =/= blindness
Nothing = blindness
What you can see with every part of your body that isn't an eye is what you'll see if you're blind (ie. nothing).
Also, could just be me being emotionally stunted, but the MC's negative reaction feels unnatural/forced.
Heheheh... Some TES lore in here, eh? ;D I mean, as much as there's speak of men being cruel and unjust, how many human civilisations in TES have gone on to become evil, hm? Hm?!
None, that's how many. And on the elves' part - we have the Ayleids, the Dwemer, the Thalmor... and it seems that each one is worse* than the previous iteration, somehow...
* the Ayleids were slavers, pure and simple; the Dwemer made their own slaves by enslaving an entire race of elves; and the Thalmor are looking to enslave an entire continent if things go their way...
O shit... Here we go again
Love that game let you be evil or less evil. More like the needed evil to keep the world save. That how i viewed by Overlord ♡
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Also re-reading i guess?
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Indeed...
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Other one? Can you tell me the name please?
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Why a treat? He seems old and only semi lethal for a old Minion.
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Copy? Why not the original ?
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Other one? Story Name?
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*deep evil Laughter*