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That's too bad you don't like it. I kind of like it. Shows the two working as equals and not just Master and Mistress. I'm looking forward to more.
hmm I kept waiting for this to update... how did this drop off my list???
Thankfully it hit front page so I could find it again.
Good stuff my man keep on Peddleing it out and I'll keep on reading it.
And try not to freak out about the lack criticism. I'll criticize something when I have something to criticize And till then enjoy yourself and try not to get your knickers in a twist. Remember you have only failed at writing when you're no longer enjoying it so feel free to push on a little bit but if your heart isn't in It Don't Force It that's how you get depressed man.
Your story is THE shit.
8161958 indeed!
definitely
giant coward
There are more, I just don't wanna look for them. You do it.
Gnarl. I promise that you will be the first person I come too when I need a club to beat an enemy into oblivion.
Arimapsi like shineys? Why am I thinking of Overlord not managing to kill them all off to start with, and leading the last one into a Wile E Coyote shiney object on string gun trap style of thing.
I very much like this story until now. It's not so... well, how could I say it... generic? It's a nice change of pace from other Overlord/MLP crossovers I saw. Until now I only found Displaced fics mostly or other Overlord summoning fics where Gnarl always plans to kill the Overlord, only the most greedy people joins the ranks and the Overlord always had after a few chapters his midlife crisis a la "The corruption... is... to... strong. Must fight!" and goes mad.
And afterwards comes the depressing PTSD route where the MC "can never forgive himself" for what he had done and blames himself for being weak and the corruption for being evil.
Until now your fic is much more likeable in how you portray all characters, at least in my opinion.
Evil always finds a way. That being said, the Arimaspi are gonna have a bad time.
You have to add some Nb/Sarra fluff now and again!! Besides, youll more than make up for it when he goes and figuratively wrecks the whole of the arimaspi's shit!!!!!!
This fic seems awfully familiar, I read some time ago similar fic with the overlord HiE theme, what hit me though was the overlord leaving one of his minions in ponyville it was the same thing, thou i can't seem to find it.
Wierd, or is someone being ripped of?
8181012 If it is then I had no idea that it was. Though this is a re-wright of my original story, so maybe you're thinking of that.
8181744 Maybe, seeing as i can't seem to find it, and i did fav it for sure.
Thou this new one already did go a different way so no biggie, one other part of that other story i remember is the Overlord asking the Princess for help in getting rid of Gnarl, as the Overlord knew that Gnarl could eventually betray him.
On the Plus side i finally decided to buy both Overlord 1 and 2 to try it as it sounds fun, wanted to buy it ever the previous mentioned fic but never got to it, so did it now, just waiting for it to be delivered.
Can't wait.
Oh i also just gonna eave this here.
8181836 I plan on finishing all of my 'fics', but it will take time. Also, that dose sound like the first draft of this story, which I unsubmitted and rewrote. Glad you faved the first time!
I like this one better, just got though it all.
I say this a lot, and I know some authors hate it, but I can't wait for the next chapter
8187744 For me, it just shows that you're interested in my story, so thank you!
Wut? *Definitely.
Gnarl dark humor is bad if it is on the Overlords bill.
Gnarl isnt wrong... If she played the long game...
Lucky she wanted him free on her side not forced.
Who ever destroyed his property will fuck pay...
I dont doubt the price will be off the scale.
Fear is a horrible way to keep populations in check.
Temporär yes but not permanently...
The Minions might leave when the Elements of Harmony ever hit Overlord Nobody but his cared for population? The might partialy stay.
PRICELESS humor. Snooring awake
Dawww they are so cute together
Hmmm Snu-Snu: