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Overlord. Brutality Inc.
Apply Precicely and Excessively.
Yay A Beatdown!!!!!
I feel like I should put a warning. I've read other Overlord stories, and the audience usually has a shit fit if the writer tries to do any smart story building. Or a fake out, like Discord tries to make the Overlord good to cause some chaos, but the writer intended the Overlord to overcome that and stay evil. I am going to read your story now; I just wanted to share what I've seen happen before with this type of story.
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Well, all I can say is, if you have a shit fit, then you have a shit fit. I'm not going to change the story for my readers, though I do try to be respectful of their ideas. It's my story after all.
Blue minions joined the great Overlord... I wonder if the Princesses are going to like them more. After all they are the healers.
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I'LL GET THE POPCORN!
Good luck on the job hunt
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I wish you good luck in your job hunting. Besides you're in Vegas getting a job showing to be that hard. It's not like you're looking for work in a rural Countryside town.
Sometimes when I read gore I feel conflicted.
On one hand, details gets you in the zone and enraptures your attention.
On the other, simple action:reaction leaves space for the imagination.
Nice chapter, I want to see the ponies reaction
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Healers? They're technically necromancers, and the oldest one is essentially the minion version of the Grim Reaper, so the jury's still out on that one.
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Healer, Necromancer.... Ketchup, Katchup.... I don't see the problem
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50 Tons please.
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OK!! *DROPS 50 TONS OF POPCORN IN ONE MASSIVE POPCORN BIN*
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Yay OM NOM NOM
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Well the blues don't make zombies and seem to need to get to the body before large scale brain death accures so there necromancer's like restarting someone heart is necromancee just with magic and sending some blues to the equine hospitals would get him browny points with the princesses and make equestrea some what reliant on him witch is always a great idea for taking control behind the scenes.
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I remember seeing a story once where blood magic was originally designed for heavy-duty first aid. Before you ask, yes it was on this site, no I can't remember what it was called off the top of my head.
Pfft hahaha! Bitch got wrecked. Like if wreck it Ralph ever saw that he'd be all like yep can't do any better than that. Can't wait for the next chapter dude and good luck on the job hunt.
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Except for Mortis. You know, the aforementioned Grim Reaper Minion, who literally pulls dead minions from the River Styx in exchange for a life(force) sacrifice?
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Besides, the end goal of true Necromancy is always the ability to deny death. Whether that takes the form of bringing the dead back to life or preventing a soul from crossing over in the first place is just arguing semantics.
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Except it was only tested in browns and other idiot minions... What if they heal or resurrect ponies but they become idiots?
Amazon is going to be doing a LOT of hiring over the next few months. I'd wait till next month, personally were I you though, because right now they're dumping so much Mandatory Overtime on us that I think they're either trying to make all the older employees quit, or they're trying to kill us. I'm not sure which. Most shifts in our warehouse have had Overtime of at least 50 hours a week all month, and sometimes 60 hours. Does wonders for the bank account, but DANG am I tired! Caffeine only helps so much.
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Not saying your story will be bad; just don't get discouraged if some people complain because they don't like what you're doing with your story.
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No, I understand and I hope you enjoy the story, I was just saying that I wouldn't change the story just because some people get butt-hurt.
One, love the chapter.
Two, Nobody’s giving off a massive Alucard vibe and I love it.
and Three, good luck job hunting.
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You have a point but mortis is an exception and he only seems to be able to do that because the minion afterlife is essentially a few steps away from him as he does it and has shown no sign of being able to bring back other species. (Except in the third game where four overlord candidates were resserected.) Though that would make a great plot point bringing some one (Star Swirl, Sombra, Groger) back from the dead in excange for a large amount of life force to trane him would be interesting especially if the princesses ever found out about a resserected starswirl or a depowered sombra trapped in his dungen.
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In the (third?) game some people were brought back and they seemed to have all there intelligence in tact.
Is that a KOTOR II reference?
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Maybe... yes.
Blue minions retrieved and potential Overlord competiton taken care of, it was a good day.
I'm a bit sad he ended her life. I mean, there were still unanswered questions. Like how she got there. I mean, she was a human like him I assume. I also wouldn't have mind if he gained another ally, or love interest even. So, yup, I actually found it a pity.
*finishes chapter then, manually rolls cigarette, freezing halfway through*
"... ... And just Watch, the girl was his sister/relation/friend... Shit."
Sigh... That's why you always have talks before a battle, or don't kill the leader until you know their identity.
Damn Epic
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A few problems with that tho
One if she was his sister she would have likely thought very differently well unless she was a huge bitch before
Two how we know how nobody got their a spell from the minons makes no sense that it suddenly pulled his sister to the world and before him as well since it seemed the fake overload had been around for a while
Mm, good, extermination of the unworthy.
PURGE THE UNWORTHY!
My question is how did this faker knew about The Overlord and minions - and while the blues might have explained it - she seemed tad too informed without Gnarl’s guidance... this will be the only part of the story I have a problem with
You know, these paragraphs reminds me of this.
What i hear in my head when the Overlord stops playing around and fights for real!
Overlord 'Nobody' vs. Overlady 'wanne be'...
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I was expecting the DOOM music to start playing.