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Manehattan is one of Equestria's most modern cities. A classic city of modern innovation, as it were. Even when a convention showcasing some of Equestria's most innovative pony inventors, striving for a new tomorrow, not much seemingly changes on the surface.
When a young unicorn inventor by the name of Light Sparks comes to the convention, he soon learns that when the future and getting results is all anypony can think about, moral value tends to go down on the scale. Striving to make the world a better place, Light Sparks ends up going on a small, indoor andventure of math and science.
The convention may only be a week long, but the outcome of what could happen may change Equestria forever, or, at least Manehattan.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

This chapter really only exists to introduce Light Sparks. I'm not sure if Golden Peach will make another appearance yet. This will probably be the shortest chapter as well.

I did this chapter almost on a whim. I had the idea in my mind, but I wasn't sure how to write it. I hope what did come out was at least relatively okay.
To anyone who actually read this story, thank you for that. Any constructive criticism may help.

Eighth grade English. Do you even grammar bro? Just so anyone who reads this knows, I know him rl, so I am not just some random person hating on him.

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I can edit this.

And to anyone else, I'm always looking for some constructive criticism.

It's been so long since I even was on this site actually thinking about writing.

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