• Published 31st Oct 2016
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Nightmare Night Special Treats. - Richer19



You receive a letter from your bosses needing your help on Nightmare Night. Little did you realize what that help would actually involve.

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Comments ( 3 )

Shouldn't it say "The three of them were silent for a moment, each of them trying to catch our breaths", instead of "The three of us were silent for a moment, each of us trying to catch our breaths"? Just wondering but overall great story!

Pretty decent. You need an editor to give this some polish since there were a few misplaced words.

Apart from that, good quick clop material.

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