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Richer19


A simple writer/ game designer/ brony/ dragon fan.

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Ratchet and Clank have tracked a distress signal to an unknown planet. Ratchet, who can't wait to discover what lies on the planet's surface, finds that things are not what he expected. Now he along with his best friend Clank must do their best to make a good impressions on these 'candy colored horses' while preventing their world from becoming consumed. Just a normal day in the life of a hero.

Rated T for fantasy violence and basically what you expect from a Ratchet and Clank game. Oh and Ratchet and Clank will not be turning into ponies. Characters will be added as needed.

Chapters (7)
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Comments ( 80 )

You sure used quite a bit of "before saying/adding" in this chapter. It honestly got a tad bit annoying, so I would recommend you cut back on that "before stuff" in your future chapters. Other than that, it is a decent start.

Not bad but I have a single suggestion, use past tense instead of present for things and then you will be golden.

Here are my two theories to why this story has no dislikes so far....

1. It's a good story (which is probably 99.9% the case)

2. There hasn't been a ratchet and clank fic in 6 years

YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESALL OF MY YES!:yay:

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3. No humans

To your second point, I remember that there used to be a Ratchet and Clank crossover on this site (it was doing so well) but for some reason, the author deleted. It was the author who wrote a Underworld crossover with My Little Pony I believe.

4722512 how long ago was that? If it's over 6 years old, I'm still correct

You what I just realized?this is the same author who is writing spikes teacher

A rachet and clank crossover!?!? HELL TO THE YES. :flutterrage::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::trollestia::moustache::eeyup::twilightsmile::heart::ajsmug:

Not a bad start. Not bad at all.

I hope for some aneurism inducing stupidity, though, from the universe's dumbest hero.

Hmmmm this could be interesting as a fan of the series I shall wait before I read this as I am yet to play into the nexus (me been poor is my excuse) and after I've played it this should be more updated :ajsmug: soo see you in a few weeks

Damn. You beat me to this crossover.

Whateves. It's not like I was going to post it anytime soon. Too much on by plate.

Because this is a r&c cross, you get an instant like and a read later.

4723799 actually you won't miss much when you play into the nexus. its just a filler game, there are literally only 5 planets in the whole game, none of them super huge

To add to the list of things that you missed here that no one has pointed out yet: commas. There are numerous places where they should be, but they aren't.

Other than that, though, I'm interested.

Major OOC for Ratchet to just start shooting right off the bat without any attempt to communicate with the obviously clueless and curious locals. After all, it should be obvious by now that they have a limited technology base and would have no idea what a space ship is.

Also, a lot of 'he said/she said,' you should try adding a little variety because sticking to that tends to lessen any impact to the dialogue, especially when you also seem to have just as much an aversion to exclamation points as you do commas.

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"6 years"

I thought the show ran for four years and counting.

Also, the crossover I saw was first uploaded in 2013 or 2012, but then got deleted for apparently no reason at all.

Its been a while since I begin looking for a decent Ratchet and Clank crossover on fimfiction. I finally found one that looks promising.

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I've played every other ratchet and Clank game on the ps2/ps3 consoles

4726335 so have i. it's a really good game series and it's definitely one of my favorites but in my opinion you would be better off watching a playthrough of 'into the nexus' on youtube instead of buying it because it's a really short game.

Hmm rachet and clank never played it

4725023 meh, I just made a random length and just stuck with it

4726694 haha a mate bought it's a win win win for me

Eh...as far as I know this hasn't been a crossover that has been touched on so why not.

I know of this, and that.
However, I don't know any that managed to get finished. Will you be the first?:applejackunsure: Or will this story also remain unfinished?:duck:

4727129 lol whatever :twilightsheepish: but on a less complainy side note, the fact that into the nexus is a filler game is the only negative thing i have to say about it :twilightsmile:

BAD...FIRST...IMPRESSION.

Wow dude you seriously need a prereader.On another note I can't stop reading this in their voices.

There are several instances where you used plant instead of planet.

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That is very true and I am always looking for one if anyone would like to help.

Oh dear. Thank goodness for Clank. Now, how long before they all go to Canterlot?

4737303 the real question is when they'll be blasting off again?

Great story so far! I'm really tempted to be a proofreader, but I have a lot on my plate regarding personal life and my own stories. Of course, if they're only 1000 words long, it shouldn't be too much trouble. Don't really know. Let me know if you're still looking and we may be able to work something out.

if you want, I could pre-read chapters for you

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Do you have a lot of experience being a pre-reader?

4740976 not particularly, but I can spot a grammatical error a mile away

4740976 can I be a pre reader I can notice small errors and large ones (even mid level!!!!!!!!!)

If you want, I can do it. Prereading I mean.

This story seems good so far. Too bad it seems deserted... :(
Oh we'll, still gonna put it on my tracking list tho, just in case :)

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