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Shouldn't it say "The three of them were silent for a moment, each of them trying to catch our breaths", instead of "The three of us were silent for a moment, each of us trying to catch our breaths"? Just wondering but overall great story!
Pretty decent. You need an editor to give this some polish since there were a few misplaced words.
Apart from that, good quick clop material.
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