pony rangers

by Shining Armor Jr

THE END OF THE 60 CENTURY NIGHTMARE PART 3: JR'S LAST STAND

Jr and Skull Crusher charged at eachother, weapons ready for impact

"Youre weak, you could never reach my power", Skull Crusher said as their swords clashed

"I might be just a foal, but im already have more power then you", Jr said as he super changed his sword, destroying Skull's sword of darkness

"Or so you think", Skull Crusher said as his dark wolf morpher became all black

"IT CANT BE!!!!!", Milla said knowing what would happen

"SUPER DARK WOLF POWER", Skull Crusher said turning in to an ancient warrior but where the gold was on the pure ancient warriors there was black

"NO!!!!!!!", Milla said seeing the face of equestria's destruction

"Behold, my full power", Skull Crusher said throwing a ball of darkness at Jr

Jr stood up on his hind legs and used all of his strengh to protect the ones he loves, crossing his front legs to keep the ball from hitting any vital organs, or his team, he threw the ball back at Skull Crusher, after turning it to fire, the ball fire hit with great force, and Skull Crusher crashed againt Zecora's hut with a loud thud

"THAT IS IT", Skull Crusher said recovering fast and flying back to where Jr was, grabbing him by the throat and flying into the stratosphere, and droping Jr thousands of feet to the ground, but that didnt stop the young prince, desptie the pain he kept fighting,"You are a persistant little brat"

"He might be a brat but he is my brat", Cadence said flying in to help her foal

"MOM GET OUT OF HERE", Jr said blasting a comet sized ball of fire at Skull Crusher, who skillfully dodged it

"Missed me", he said throwing a ball of darkness at Jr

because the ball of fire took alot of energy to create, Jr couldnt defend himself againt the ball of darkness, and was killed on impact

"no Jr!", Cadence said landing by the body of her foal,"IM GOING TO MAKE YOU PAY FOR THAT SKULL CRUSHER"

"Really? You and what army?",Skull Crusher asked

"Us!!!", Sera said as she and the rest of the team flew in the direction of the battle, seeing her dead loved one at his mother's hooves

"Oh-no, our leader!!!!!", Skyle said seeing jr dead

Sera and Cadence cried their eyes out, which once she stopped crying, fire filled Sera's eyes, she took Jr's ancient warrior morpher and combined it with hers

To be continued...................................................

Comments

[BaconHazard]

Well... this looks atrocious.

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Seriously though, this was awful. Not only that, but the concept was also terrible. No offence.

By the way, if this is a troll fiction, then nicely done. Until then, go feed your testicles into a saw mill.

[Dark Lightning]

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Lol that gif....XD

[finesthour]

Burn this fic. Burn it, and never let it rise from the ashes.

This was shit. Worse than shit. It was a platter of creamy, horrible, shit.

There is no creativity in this, only random shit you threw out of your ass.

What the hell were you thinking when you wrote this?

How to write a fic worse than a troll fic?

I don't even think troll fics get this bad.

[Acrolith]

I thought it was great tbh. I read it and now I'm pumped the hell up

[lordbababa]

This is going to sound harsh, but it needs to be said anyway. This fic contains tons of grammar errors, spelling errors, and plot holes not to mention that it lacks any decent character development and also is just hard to read.

[Coolguy3443343434]

GO GO PONY RANGERS!

[Mr Ignorable]

Well this was more confusing than a Walrus orgy.

[IncredibleMeh]

*sigh* Now where did I put that ban hammer...

Seriously, this is a peace of crap, and not just regular crap. Like the kind of crap that comes out of the ass of blargian snagglebeast after it ate 120 pounds of raunchy cabbage.

[Patient X]

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[Ponysun]

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[Shining Armor Jr]

for those of you who posted the mean comments, its my first time writing a story but thank you for the creative critisisum but still, you are jerks

now for those of you who posted the nice comments, thank you for the support

[Shining Armor Jr]

btw, ITS ONLY MY FIRST FAN FIC, CUT ME SOME SLACK

[kain541204]

my reacion: betrayal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
no but sericly, the story could be alittle better, but im im bein emeasingly honist, i kind of like it, if you fix some stuff in it, you might have good story, here,im at the half way point and its pretty good.

[null_name5656]

I read up on this guys short bio but from what I can gather its just his bad OC's backstory . Apparently his OC is literally Shining Armor jr. But for whatever reason it knows firebending and looks like a changeling .