• Member Since 20th Mar, 2013
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Handsome Masquerade 1990


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The ones that give us the best advice as foals, more often than not, are our teachers. A bit of good advice can direct a pony towards their fate, giving them the confidence to move forward. Teachers do all this for foals that are not their own and without being privy to the success of the students they teach.


This story is dedicated to my first grade teacher.

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Comments ( 4 )

A filly is a she.

Well that was cute. I don't really have anything to add. But let's see what I can offer.

On the technical side all seems fine save for a few missing quotation marks. Not a big distraction so no points off for that.

That's literally all I have. Good job. So are we going to hear more from Easy Venture or does his story end here? Either way could work just make sure you have a story worth telling.

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Noted and fixed.

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I hope to do more with Easy, being my oc and all. I really need to update my avatar on here to include the cutie mark though.

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The tale of a young fillies school days and the teacher who believed in him.

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