A human with magic abilities never before seen in Equestria? A necropony bent on taking over the world with an army of the living dead? Are you sure this is the same book? Yes? Then let's see what mayhem our favorite ponies can get up to.
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this story is nice
Good to see the oh-so-superior drill-sergeant-bitch get taken down, finally...
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Well I couldn't have her win all the time. Even the best of us get our flanks kicked every once and a while. Plus, I was starting to get the vibe that she was a little overpowered, so I thought the best way to take her down a peg or two was to have the most unexpected of ponies pound her into the dirt, in this case literally.
I'm hoping you're enjoying the story thus far, and look forward to seeing more comments in future chapters,
Shadow Quill, Messenger of the Moon.
Love the story so far. The way Lovegood and Swift talk to eachother makes me think they will be more than just friends, although I am likely wrong.
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Yeah, especially in this chapter. Sarah's almost become a parody of herself and I'm not sure I can read much more.
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One thing I have always hated is stories where the humans are superior to ponies and without flaws but I also hate stories where the ponies are superior to humans and without flaws; it's why I stopped reading the Unity Pact stories by Truthseeker, because in those stories the ponies seemed like such fucking Mary Sues... Oh, sure they had a violent past in that one but now the oh-so-fluffy magic of the world acts in their defense. Don't want a stallion mating you, mare? Scream a certain way and the stallion's... C will wilt. Don't want people doing bad things? Use rectifiers who can MODIFY YOUR MIND at a whim! Let's not forget Celestia acting like utter slime, too, and "comforter mares" having to hold a mare down for her first sexual experience, which is so very, VERY much like r-pe. Humans killed by ponies? Humans cop the flak, ponies get off scott-free, and more, and more, and more... UGH... Even in the current story I'm reading: Human sees ponies being attacked by Hydra, DOES THE RIGHT THING and grabs a shovel to attack the Hydra in an attempt to save them (he has no idea they're the EOH) ... AND THE PONIES YELL AT HIM for trying to do what's right, it's like, "fuck you, you aren't needed."
I see somepony's been taking Earthbending lessons from Toph Beifong. Nice fight!
Okey. You o say. I want more!¡! ¡!
Glad to see a good, positive, and honorable male character finally. I was afraid they would all be presented as idiots and assholes. Seen plenty of that in other femenist fics. Glad to see this one is not so extreme.