A human with magic abilities never before seen in Equestria? A necropony bent on taking over the world with an army of the living dead? Are you sure this is the same book? Yes? Then let's see what mayhem our favorite ponies can get up to.
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I find it hard to believe that Discord cannot do a thing against undeads or necromancers. And I think Sarah should find a way to teach the auramancy to other ponies and fast, otherwise they won't have time building up the force.
Great work can't wait for more
Didn’t this story have a different name? Did you change it, I’m not sure.
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It was the same name when I binged it a week ago.
Does eqg exist in this stiry?
I like this story but the action scenes seem to drag on quite a bit. I am just not feeling the energy in them. The slice of life parts are really good however and I like the byplay between our human and swift
I'm not sure if I can continue reading this. The reactions and resulting development from Sarah's soldiers after the fight would have been excellent character development and vitally important for any military person, yet you passed it by for reasons I cannot begin to comprehend. It was obvious for a while now that you are not actually military, but you give an unusually good representation of it. The writing is skillful and artful, if not always as smooth and skillful in the intimate scenes, but this is very well written.
I do have to be honest that the part where magic can give a female a male's genitals bugs me badly. Males have been rendered completely useless by that. Modern, 3rd wave feminists (not to be confused for 1st wave femenists who only wanted true equality and have my whole-hearted support) want something like so they can kill off all the men. It pesters me, but I am glad nobody has taken the next logical step to kill off all the males. Overall, I am conflicted because this is very well written, but the mostly anti-male undertones bug me. Not sure how to come to any sort of conclusion here. Input or feedback would be appreciated. Don't take this as an insult. Take this as a request for clarification. Don't worry, I'm not planning to downvote or anything.
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In all honesty, there is no feminist agenda within this book. I never had any negative feelings geared towards the male gender or anything of that sort. The primary reason that I made the characters act the way they do is because it adds drama to what would otherwise be a fairly straightforward plot. Got to have some kind of chaos mixed in or else the story becomes predictable. I can understand your misgivings about some of the representations of how the characters interact, but I can assure you with utmost certainty that there is nothing written into this book with the intent to demean or insult any group or individual. Thank you for bringing this to my attention, and I wish from the bottom of my heart that you would continue to be straightforward with me as you continue, if you wish to finish the book. You may jump off the train at any time and I won't be insulted, but your honest and insightful commentary is why I enjoy posting my books for others to read. Hearing about what others think of my work is how I improve my own writing, thus without your input I would never have gotten as far as I have.
Thank you again for all of your support, and I hope to see you next chapter,
Shadow Quill, Messenger of the Moon.
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Holy shit, with that one response ( and because your story is magnificently put to gather) you are now my favorite Arthur. I love your story so far, thank you for writing it.