A human with magic abilities never before seen in Equestria? A necropony bent on taking over the world with an army of the living dead? Are you sure this is the same book? Yes? Then let's see what mayhem our favorite ponies can get up to.
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8141621 5 days... I think you need a higher quality sacrifice next time....
8153044 Traditionally virgins are pretty popular for the role, but what really matters is that it is someone/something you care about. After all, how can it be a sacrifice if the thing/person you are sacrificing isn't something you care about? I think that is why old myths and fairy tales have people sacrificing their kids for the most important events, rather than just some random person off the street.
Also, even though there were a few songs/bands here that I am going to look into getting for my collection, I hope you are going to have Sarah share some of the more widely known songs with the ponies at some point in the future. 'The Sound of Silence' by either Simon and Garfunkel or Disturbed sticks out in my mind in particular (both are amazing, though I might prefer the Disturbed version more). Octavia's reaction to Apocalyptica in particular would be amusing I think. There are a few more that I can't think of right now (4 am, too tired) but I think the ponies would really get a kick out of them.
All i say is that at the start of the electronic genre, that first song, the guy mentions planet Earth. Since the ponies were paying so much attention to the lyrics so far I though they would make a comment like "is that the name of their world" or something like that. But they did not. Oh well, a minor thing and can't wait for your next installment. Also, for Rock.
Great work
8153439 Thanks for pointing that out. I went back and added a few lines to include that little detail. I had originally planned on having that in there, but it must have slipped my mind somehow. Thank you, and happy reading!!
See you next chapter,
Shadow Quill, Messenger of the Moon.
Here's a few good song if you need it
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RpimiNvcRC4
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ejXSiMa9M4c
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7hDbl-Hz9TQ
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Ko943ShjdI
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LrBB_jq1hVE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ock73QRJBto
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CFHoBhcIEt8
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4JYRcoHwrLo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kPzb4JanCu0
Well, this has been interesting so far, and I'm eager to see what direction this story will take before I'm really committed to it. I will give it a fave for now.
Now one thing I'm appreciative about this story that other HiE's don't address or are willing to do, and that's toward's the human's possessions. The ponies, regardless to their threat analysis of the human stands at the moment, they were quite eager to confiscate and were sure in their claim to the MC's stuff. For God's sake, they were willing to take her leg if it wasn't for the fact in doing so would cripple or kill her.
That is a thing no one considers, an alien species is not necessarily beholden to respect a foreign being's person, possessions nor their feelings, culture and race. At every point in conversation, almost everyone is just addressing the MC as a beast, a threat and just as sure as themselves due to the fact that she's huge, has boundless magic potential and is an omnivore. They're casually or eagerly awaiting for her to awaken, mostly to kick her ass and probably to use this as a matter of course to why they can take her shit.
Let's see how things'll fair.
You put one of teminite's songs in this. Your now one of my favorite fanficion authors.
Y no rick roll
Music chapter: nice. Song selection: .....eclectic.
... This chapter doesn't need to exist.
At best, it seems like a bonus chapter. But lingering on the music thing for 8000 words of a story just feels like stalling for time.
It's not particularly poorly written. It's just pointless.
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I am here with Remnant Viscera. I too can't see any point in this chapter. But mostly I am just sad there wasn't many legendary capellas like Kiss.
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'Terre' from 'terra', aka 'earth'. Terrestrial is a word for things of or pertaining to Earth, our planet. The ponies should probably have a ponified word using their world as the root (like if the world is 'Equis', something that incorporates that). Minor issue, like a fanfic that uses 'people' instead of 'ponies'. Just thought I'd point it out.
i am so confused when they say she when its's a male singer in the links
What did I just read? I literally fell asleep twice forcing myself to read about music, not wanting to miss something important in between.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=glqPFNaRbzk
I wonder how those ponies would've reacted to this song had it played. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lSf_J5wS5lU
THE PIANO GUYS?!?! Ok, now I may need to follow you. YOU, my good writer, have good taste!
Also, you may need to edit the first pop song link, cause it says the vid isn't available anymore, at least for me it doesn't.
And same for the first R&B song as well.
Ok, this chapter was amazing! Most certainly one of my favorite chapters I have ever read on this site. The fact that it was basically interactive made the whole thing even better as well in my opinion. Don't listen to those neigh sayers about it being pointless, cause this is far from it.
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Thanks for letting me know. YouTube can be a hassle when videos come and go at seemingly random. I fixed the links if you want to go back and listen to them before continuing on with the story. Other than that, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story and please be sure to leave plenty of more comments. The more ponies tell me the better I can write for the new chapters.
See you next chapter,
Shadow Quill, Messenger of the Moon.
YOU MONSTER YOU FORGOT SOFT/CLASSIC ROCK!!!!!
I like the chapter and it's fairly well written but like some others I kinda agree that a chapter this long just about music is a bit much, the thing that ticks me the wrong way is that my mind is getting stuck on something small but without it this chapter couldn't really happen yet, the fact that I'm supposed to believe that someone ex-military doesn't have some sort of lock on their phone, otherwise ignoring that, good chapter and I'm looking forward to seeing how this story progresses once I get into the meat of it.
> Not getting into the metal selection
You bring much shame upon family.
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As a sorta interlude type structure for future chapters, I wouldn't mind reading this sort of thing. Most interludes I skip because "Eh, this is just boring", but I think I'd make an exception for this. Or if the author wanted to outright make another story with more of this sorta thing in it I think I'd read that too. I enjoy music a lot, and hearing ponies react to human music is amusing to me.
I have the same reaction when I listen to 2 cellos.
...or have the recording sped up.
Overall, a pretty good mix of music, though I admittedly skipped over the country section (because it's garbage music... kill me.). The pop music was... pop (yeaaaah. Not much else to say about it. Meh), and the selection of the rock was a little milktoast for my liking (something like Journey for softer rock, DreamTheater or Buckethead for the heavier stuff, and maybe some ACDC or VanHalen for the classic stuff could have been better choices to show the true diversity of rock). The electronic music was good. Something softer (Owl City), contrasted against the heavier dubstep was a good choice.
"Boyz II Men - I'll Make Love To You" link is broken only getting "Video unavailable This video is not available.".
Boyz II Men - I'll Make Love To You (Official Music Video)
ps. try getting the Official Music / Video's
Most of Earthling didn't either.
Re-reading this and you have my kudos for including Owl City.
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I don't hate 2cellos, normally, but that version of Thunderstruck (they had at least two) is abit broken.