A human with magic abilities never before seen in Equestria? A necropony bent on taking over the world with an army of the living dead? Are you sure this is the same book? Yes? Then let's see what mayhem our favorite ponies can get up to.
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oh god twilight messing with someone's things again, that can only go well. *puts on seat belt* I'm ready for the ride to come.
i love how in every story they decide fucking with the possibly dangerous creatures stuff is okay
And suddenly I am glad that I found another story to read that looks good.
The presence of enlarged mamaries does make sense. Large mamaries indicate potential for higher volume milk production for potential offspring, increasing desirability as a potential mate. That said, yes, I am a breast man.
so nice to see a female in equestria story. they are so rare
Intriguing. Thou shall have a follow from Us
Woo! FiE story! And a pretty good one too from the looks of things, even taking into account my general dislike for first and second person views in stories. Now the only questions are what the pairing will be and how long we must wait for the next chapter.
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As far as I remember actual mammary glands take a small part of the woman's breasts (IIRC breast mostly consist from fat tissue). So size of the breasts don't indicate milk production at all.
8107468 That's Trenderhoof, big difference. The good doctor is an OC I made up for the staff of Ponyville General, although our favorite white and pink nurse should show up sooner or later. Sorry for the confusion, I should have known ponies would make that mistake.
Great story so far! Looking forward for more.
8107008 Technically true, though in healthy, lean humans it might prove more true.
Such an amazing work please keep going
I like this! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Who wants to calculate the thaum equivalent of a nuke?
8120002 I have done the calculations, and have come up with an answer to your question. According to my calculations, one thuam is equal to 10 Joules of energy. Calculating the average nuke to be one megaton of TNT worth of explosive force, and that rounds out to 4.18 X 10^15 Joules. That means one megaton of TNT is equal to 4.18 X 10^14 thuams, or 418 trillion thuams. This can also be expressed as 418 Terrathuams. In other words, one metric butt-ton of magic power!!!
8120569 WHAT!? Holy crap math was never my strong suit but you just made my brain implode from confusion. Good thing I have 4 left in my basement freezer.
I need moar.
Day: one ok ok its only bin one day no need to worry Day: 257 ok the sacrifice is done this Should make the next chapter come in 2 days
If the story and all following thoughts are from Twilight's point of view and utilizing her own vocabulary, then she would have referred to the woman's breasts as udders, not teats. The teat is the elongated nipple-like protrusion of flesh that animal young suck on. The entire mound which includes the mammaries is called the udder. Twilight would have celled them udders, not teats, unless she was specifically referring to the nipples.
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I know it's a fakey, made up term, and it's entirely at your will this goes through, but it's spelt "thaum" as in "thaumaturgy", not "thuam" (the "a" and "u" are round the wrong way) which is going throughout this chapter and each time I see it, it yanks me out with the force of ten professional linebackers.
Thaum, as defined by the late, great, Sir Terry P
Wikipedia on Thaumaturgy
Thaumaturgy in the "Dresden Files" novels/TV show.
Like I said, it's a fakey made up term, and it's entirely up to you how it's spelled in this context, but it's so consistent that it killed the entire story dead here for me because I can't get past it.
oh boy, twilight goes full retard again and steals shit from a creature that clearly needed help and is not a legal citizen of equestria, therefore even if there was a law that said that anyone who had something of interest to the gov could have it taken from them, she would be exempt. also, if the creature is dangerous, would it not be fucking smart NOT to steal from it, retard? seriously, twilight should be named the princess of retardation, because that's what she acts like in HIE fics, most of the time.
dont you just love when celestia is always like, "gud jub parple yunikern, u did a thing while i sat on mah fukkin ayuss. keep doin tat shiet su i dun have ta do enything" she says, guzzling down cake like a fatass
sorry. sometimes i get worked up when twilight and celestia go full retard.
damn it twilight! stop touching her shit!
I have similar reaction to Twilight when I first saw iphone.
HALT!
Ze GNG has spotted a mistake!
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Further more. I think you should have sticked with switching between 3rd and 1st person. 1st person for Sarah and 3rd for everyone else. This way you won't run a risk of confused readers and you won't lose value of the main character, it will get more 'personal' from the view of Sarah. But that is just my opinion, keep up the good work either way.
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HAIL GRAMMAR!
This fic is hitting all my repressed, "anything you can do, we can do better" feelings from whenever I read about a human in an alien society. I'm rather over-patriotic, for lack of a better term. Thank you for not making your protagonist (and humanity by implication) hopelessly outmatched by ponies, like so many other fics. It's a breath of fresh air.
See? Now this is why you set a password for your phone. You never know when extra-dimensional alien princesses are going to snoop through your things. What if they found your porn!?
Wait a second, while I am curious about this, what’s with the image if she just shows up human?
With all the talk about how large her cans are I half expected there to be a “some kind of teat‐y monster!” quip from Pinkie.
Nice story so far and it may be already pointed out in later chapters, but I'm guessing the E G stuff never happened in this universe?
Why didn’t Sarah put a password on her iPhone.
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Some people don't think they need one because they keep their phones on them at all time
Ok, I have to say this story...is awesome! Not only is it a female in Equestria, but it is also part done in one of the pony's POVs. That just makes it so much more epic, and watching how Twilight examines the new things (new to her) that she has makes it even more fun.
So to you, good writer, I give you a like and a fav!
Except they do? At least Rarity and Applejack do. She said "help me" last chapter and they responded.