A human with magic abilities never before seen in Equestria? A necropony bent on taking over the world with an army of the living dead? Are you sure this is the same book? Yes? Then let's see what mayhem our favorite ponies can get up to.
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I've been thinking; the auramancy kinda reminds me of dragonball and it's Ki thing.
Top quality and rapid chapter uploads, good job mate
you've already eclipsed several of the other authors I could think of
Will all the clop be female on female?
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Well, there are gender swap spells as Twilight mentioned, so plan on there being some futanari later in the book. No spoilers though, so I'm not going to say anything more on the subject until the chapters are posted. Good question though.
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*Skip to 3:40 for my reaction*
Thanks for marking the clop chapters.
So, never
While the writing quality is great (particularly when compared to some fanfics I've read), I can't help but feel this chapter is utter insanity.
Unless I'm forgetting something something from a previous chapter, Sarah, Lyra, and Bon-Bon have collectively spent less than six hours together between their chat/music sharing visit a few days previously, and the dinner they just had. Despite the fact that they are virtual strangers to each other, Lyra and Bon-Bon not only invite Sara to join their herd, but also take her back to their place for sex?
Even if ponies naturally move that fast in relationships (which seems crazy to me), Sarah is human and grew up with human morals and social customs. While I don't have a ton of dating experience, as far as I am aware it's still considered normal to wait a couple of dates before having sex with someone or commiting to a more serious relationship unless it's a one night stand. Also, I'm pretty sure I remember Sarah thinking in at least one of the earlier chapters that she was strait and not really attracted to women, and had only been with men in the past. Despite both those facts she now apparently has no problem jumping into bed with a pair of mares?
I'm sorry, but in a story where the main character, who is a female army ranger with a prosthetic leg that honestly reminds me of what auto-mail from FMA would look like if we could actually make it (which to the best of my knowledge we can't), was saved from death by the spirit of chaos and transported to a world of fictional technicolor ponies that use magic on a daily basis, and whose rulers are a pair of immortal princesses who raise and lower the sun and moon by themselves, this relationship is the most unrealistic thing so far.
Of course, this isn't going to stop me from continuing to read the story, I just felt like I needed to point this out since no one else has so far.
This transition in this chapter was way too fast. No one goes from one date to steady relationship that fast also even if she was in a new culture with different values one cannot turn off sexual preferences that usually a lower brain function that is hard coded due to natural selection. She might adapt but going straight to gay is not a switch that can be flipped like a light switch. Also the cover art implies that she becomes a pony is that happening?
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pretty sure the pony on the cover is someone else because I don't think Sarah is going to be a necromancer like the cover ponies seems to be, as well as the fact that the title states both hands of life and hooves of death. Pretty sure cover pony is villain / antagonist
A red timberwolf?
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The author didn't think of plot holes could come of it and doesn't understand it and won't fix it because that would require the author to think and that's hard to do.
Edit that is sarcasm