A human with magic abilities never before seen in Equestria? A necropony bent on taking over the world with an army of the living dead? Are you sure this is the same book? Yes? Then let's see what mayhem our favorite ponies can get up to.
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a instant pope? me thinks a typo.
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Edit covered and taken care of. Thank you for pointing it out. The more of those terrible typos I can eradicate the better it will be for everpony. Here, have a cookie for your hard work.
Just a fyi rangers aren't a part of the corps. Rangers are army. The corps is a different branch.
Source: currently in the marines
As a former member of the United States Army, the Marine Corps is not host to the Army Rangers.
Easy story fix, just highlight Corps and replace it with Army.
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An active combat zone isn't really a place for Rangers or even Seals. Spec ops are mainly about on the ground recon, combat, sabotage, and engagement of the targets is almost always advised against.
So many things wrong with this scenario!
Also, run on sentence.
So, rough start to the story as far as research and logic for a soldier, but I'm into it.
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corps
noun
a main subdivision of an army in the field, consisting of two or more divisions.
"the 5th Army Corps"
a branch of an army assigned to a particular kind of work.
"the Royal Army Medical Corps"
the Corps is not just the the Marine Corps
the 75th Ranger Regiment is under command of the United States Army Special Operations Command which is a corps. she is technically correct
I did not know that and that would explain a lot why there are no other story’s not involving mlp
That whether was mighty suspicious, considering it started pouring just long enough for... her (did the story even name her yet?) to slip off the cliff and the fall to reduce her health to 1%, all for Discord to suddenly show up and get her to owe him a life debt.
Well, I can already tell that this will be a fun story.