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For Millennium I Have Waited

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TheKissoftheVoid

TheKissoftheVoid #1 · Oct 13th, 2016 · · · Authors Note ·

Just so you know, the plural form of millennium is 'millenia', i.e., "he is ten millenia old. . .". The grammatical problems in your description are probably one of the things keeping your views low.

Commander Darklight

Commander Darklight #2 · Oct 13th, 2016 · · · As you grow I become anxious... ·

ok insta down vote dont be a lazy fuck

Feather-Song

Feather-Song #3 · Oct 14th, 2016 · · · Authors Note ·

7638547 Chill, if you don't like it then leave, like seriously, thats just the way I do shit.

Feather-Song

Feather-Song #4 · Oct 14th, 2016 · · · Authors Note ·

7638336 ok, thanks

Relux_the_Relux

Relux_the_Relux #5 · Oct 14th, 2016 · · · As you grow I become anxious... ·

You should at least tell who is talking. Itz is kinda distracting having to guess whose line it is.

Feather-Song

Feather-Song #6 · Oct 16th, 2016 · · · As you grow I become anxious... ·

7642384 Sorry about that, but if you saw that episode the text where Rainbow Blitz and Elusive are talking should stand out, the rest of it is just Solaris and Dusk, but thanks for the feed back.

Feather-Song