After feeling the sting of betrayal from her friends at the Canterlot Wedding, Twilight decides to leave Equestria altogether. Twenty years later, she will forge a new empire to combat an even greater foe.
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oh goodie more plz
Sigh Celestia....honey...I love ya to death...but you really have a knack for making things more complicated than they need to be!
Best chapter yet. Pleas put more real soon
Well, the political intrigue is certainly underway. Looking forward to see what the Mistresses of the Blade are capable of. ^_^
Politics are a dangerous field to explore....
But some types are more dangerous than others
I dunno, the whole "Equestria is populated top-down by nothing but the aggressively stupid" thing isn't doing this story any favours. :/
Are Fluttershy and Flash immortal?
Awesome Story so far
It keeps getting better and better
8099265 It is? I'm pretty sure Rarity, Fancy Pants, Shining Armor and Cadance aren't stupid. Neither is Luna in this.
If I were Twilight, I would have her guards closely monitor the ponies Celestia ends up sending. The princess most likely is going to try to get her back under her power. Which was shown to also include very aggressive means, which could be bad for Twilight's unborn foal if she ends up trying to do the same thing she did years ago again.
So that's mistake number #3 that Celestia made, do I hear a number #4?
But in all serousness, you need help badly and you idea is to kidnap a ruler from her kingdom you never heard of before, and by sending scouts to find Twilight? Celestia, do you WANT to have another enemy on you list that wants you dead, I feel as if you just doing this because you secretly like having a villians complex or you want to have that one villian that's your equal.
8099803 Exactly. Now I know that there are some persons that think I the author am deliberately picking on or making Celestia look bad, but that couldn't be further from the truth. As a ruler Celestia is always making hasty decision that she assume will help subjects without even consulting her sister, decision that come around and bite her later. Now Celestia is not weak (I'm sorry if I portrayed her this way in the story.) She is very powerful and fears what her magic will do, this is why she left the protection of Equestria to the elements.
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Thing is, she's relaying too much on the Elements. She's having scouts go into a kingdom and possibly kidnap it's ruler just so the Elements will work again. Which defiantly will not work, as Twilight will most likely have little or no connection to Applejack or Rainbow Dash. Not to mention it would most likely set off an war when Twilight's people come rushing in to save her.
If Celestia is so scared of using her powers to fight, then she should train. That way she would learn some restraint and not hurt some innocent pony. Aren't all rulers supposed to have some restraint so they won't hurt their people?
8099928 Indeed she is, but she'll eventually come around.
8099681 It just feels like there are certain characters the author dislikes, and so they're going to be written as egregiously stupid, so that they can then be subjected to a "take that!". I find that kind of grating, I suppose.
8100807 Like who? Celestia? Otherwise, I can't think of any other characters.
8100811 Well, fair enough, "all of Equestria" was a bit hyperbolic on my part. But yes, I expect the "Celestia faction" are going to be portrayed as heedless idiots which, IMO at least, kind of weakens the story. A character can still be wrong without needing to be an idiot.
8101290 Oh. Well, I would just wait and see then. That's the best solution for this.
I WANT MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MOAR
Finally, we get to see what Twilight has been doing. I'm a little sad that it was only the last part but it was still enjoyable. Luna really seems different that when the story started.
I'll admit I enjoyed the Garble scene because I don't hate him like most do, not only that but Sunset, Trixie, and Starlight. You just made me like the story more.
To end you are putting the goddess Faust in a pedestal which is the only thing i currently don't like since it's her fault this mess began in the first place. I'm actually crossing my finger that Twilight will make peace with Valdes.
8103932 20 years have passed, so Luna could change over that time. Though, I don't think she's changed...
8107101 Fancy Pants and Fleur De lis aren't married.
8110480 when is next chapter i wanna see plz also good job on this story
8157891 Very Very soon.
Ok, this is cool, I can't wait to read more
Ahhh... much, much better!
oh Trixie this get interesting
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Yeah, Laufaustia basically violated the natural order of things and made her brother the "evil" one when all he's doing was basically his job.
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The chances of Twilight making peace with the GOD of Destruction and Death?
11.78960% Of succeeding
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Well Celestia IS very stupid in the show too dont forget.
F*ck me I got hyped after the letter!
couple things. mistresses of the blades consisting of 'starlight glimmer, sunset shimmer, and trixie lulamoon'? lets back up a second, thaiora said something about edenia and 'equality'... lets also not forget that somehow, twilight got the mirror from celestia somehow without ever being found out and got sunset to come back.
...I don’t know whether to laugh at that ponified pun or cringe.
What would that be Flutters?
Wow Twilight had been busy
deer not deers
Celestia........ You're an IDIOT!
They have mastered they magic it seems. And with all the different species united Twilight empire is strong
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Plus after the last time she tried to force twilight to do something she didn't want to do you think she would try diplomacy before even considering force.