After feeling the sting of betrayal from her friends at the Canterlot Wedding, Twilight decides to leave Equestria altogether. Twenty years later, she will forge a new empire to combat an even greater foe.
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Wow. That was intense. I can't wait to see how the rest of equestria handles this news of Twilight is alive.
I was skeptical about this story when I first read it but after this last chapter, I'm definitely on board. Anyway, I realized that lately there have been a lot of rude comments that purely hate on the story without actually really saying why they dislike it. Please do ignore them, they're just acting like immature children by throwing petty insults. I would recommend (and hope) that you just delete them. If they don't want to help you improve than they're not worth acknowledging. This story has true potential please keep up the work, you can only improve!
Blueblood, you fool. You should know better than to take a strange being's offer.
Intense chapter and great to see what happened with Twilight's supposed death. And while Twilight may have been going too far during that, Celestia handled that wrongly on so many levels. Should have taken the more diplomatic and apologetic way of getting to Twilight, even if it took some time for her to want to accept it. Can't wait to see everypony's reaction to this news and especially once they see her again.
8051251 I'm more wondering what reaction Twilight will give them when she meets them again, especially considering this last meeting.
8051251 I agree, to me it seems that Tia was to be a control freak. But in all honestly Tia and Luna should've known that Twilight is the embodiment of all magic, so really this shouldn't come to a surpise to them about this. Also i assuming that after that incident Cadence just became Empress while banning Tia from the Crystal Empire. Can''t wait for the next chapter...
EDIT: Also Now that I think about it, Celestia really has no say in what happens in the Crystal Empire nor any control as Cadence is the ruler so...yeah Tia overstepped her boundaries there.
8051197I the old saying:
Rumors are started by haters, Spread around by fool and accepted by idiots.
Well we all now where Twilight is now and we know also know what the creepy thing is that escape when Twilight left.
All I can say is rip Equestria
Celestia made a mistake now will she admit to it
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You don't know Celestia very well do you? She never admits that she is wrong. EVER.
Thanks for all the support, it really warms my heart.
Geez, are there any good guys in this story?
8053565 not really. we've got villians and anti-heroes (assuming I remember that term properly) So there really aren't any bastions of goodness here. 'cept maybe Flurry heart, since she'd innocent in this whole thing.
I have really enjoye this story but still im kinda dispointed that we haven't seen more of Twilight and Flash.
8055299 I suspect suspense is why we haven't seen much of them.
Just read all of the chapters in a couple of hours, and I got to say, color me interested. I feel like this story has such great potential to be good that every chapter after this one will have me squealing in excitement! Good job Emperial Star! Good job!
Seems to me that this Laufaustia was the Celestia of her era.
Holy nuggets... that was badass.
Okay, so, from what I can gather from this, Fluttershy represents Natura, Aurora represents Twilight, and Crystaal represents Rarity. So...does Rainbow represent Proteger, Pinkie Pie represents Cosmos, and Applejack represents Sageesse?
No!
YES!
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Yeah, feels like a freaking movie here.
This... THIS SHOULD HAVE BEEN THE MOVIE!
What I don't get is that she supposedly forgave Shining Armor but didn't bother to tell him she's still alive.
Wow, this is intense! And Celestia died!
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You and me buddy. Celestia was an pain in the butt for my favorite pony.
Everyone let's just give celestia a round of applause for another f#@k up
just saying his sister was just going to allow her brother to lose his power and die so what else should he have done he literally talked to her before he unleashed his army's but no had to go warn the regal six now he's banished and a little pissed after his sister did nothingto stop his inevitable death let's just make her regret her actions like destroy the universe just saying
The thing I like about this story is how the Alicorns are their own worst enemies. They continually create their own worst problems.
Everything that has gone wrong in this story was caused by Alicorns. Even the problems with Valdez Cortez were all caused by Alicorns pretending to be gods without regard for anyone else.
I mean, how pompous and arrogant to disregard the very concept of death. While disliked, the concept and necessity of death is one of the most important forces in the universe. Its a necessary balance that too many people disregard.
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