After feeling the sting of betrayal from her friends at the Canterlot Wedding, Twilight decides to leave Equestria altogether. Twenty years later, she will forge a new empire to combat an even greater foe.
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I thought this chapter was supposed to be 12k+ words and it’s not as good as your other chapters ether but it was still a good addition to the story never the less
Had to split it as to much was being dropped. That chapter concludes the fall of Canterlot and beyond that point is war.
When might the next chapter be out, I truly love this story and won’t to see how it ends not to rush you take all the time needed to do this story justice
Sorry, but I have a very hard time believing that Shining is friends with Blueblood of all ponies! I just cannot see that happening!
Shining I get that you're angry, and I'd be too if I was in your horseshoes, but give the guy a break okay? It's not like he wanted Flurry to be captured!
Another great chapter as always! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Sunday
Hope blueblood deals with twilight next and gets soundly defeated
more?
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Twilight is a descendant of Aurora, Sagesse and Cosmos.
Flash Sentry is a descendant of Proteger and so is Rainbow Dash.
Luna and Celestia are grandchildren of Cosmos.
Cadance is a descendant of Crystaal, so is Chrysalis and Rarity.
Fluttershy, AppleJack and Pinkiemena are descendants of Natura.
Its nice I found thiis story. Its a fin read and a love the flashlight ship. I look forward to more updates and to the spinoffs mentioned awhile back if that's still happening.
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When Twilight Sparkle left Equestria, she broke from Harmony which shattered the seals that held Blackhole Heart in his place. That's how he was released from his imprisonment.
Only a pure alicorn can wield the Sun and Moon, Blueblood cannot because he was transformed by darkness via Blackhole. Flurry is however a pure alicorn who is able to do this, only through her vessel can he move the celestial bodies.
Dude not to rush this story take all the time you need to do this story right but what could be a possible eta on the next chapter
I'm confused here, website said your story was updated but I don't see a new chapter anywhere.
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Thats an error on my part. Two new chapters are actually there but after I read through the first i realized i was missing some stuff so i had to immediately take it down. I wrote bits and pieces of the latest chapter on the site and therefore some errors escaped me. Sorry about that. Im trying to straighten out these errors for a an update later today.
Again I'm sorry for the inconvenience.
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Thanks.
Royal Canterlot Voice.
And how does she have a RCV?
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Magic. RCV is probably similar to the spell Wizards use in Harry Potter as megaphones