After feeling the sting of betrayal from her friends at the Canterlot Wedding, Twilight decides to leave Equestria altogether. Twenty years later, she will forge a new empire to combat an even greater foe.
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-cliffhanger rage-
In all seriousness, this story gets better and better...keep it up!
Probably at idiot iron hoof, hope he gets taken out quickly
*ding* *ding* Round one fight
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mastermind twilight VS stupid captian iron hoof stay tuned for who is going to win XD my money is on twilight
Really awesome story please keep going and only if you can update faster please. The cliffhanger is killing me.
And for the next part i dare to say that the Idiot dies with a chance of 100%. Partly because he has a pact with Valides, but mostly because he is an idiot.
Still another thing does any body know where the rest of the mane 6 are.
I mean where Twilight, Fluttershy and Rarity are, but what is with Applejack, Rainbow and Pinkie? I'm confused
Okay, since Twilight said Rainbow Dash told her that there was an army coming, does this mean that the two are at the very least civil to each other, after what happened during Canterlot?
I guess Rainbow Dash managed to make up with Twilight Sparkle.
8192290 They are bound by their conscience to be loyal to Twilight. In doing so they provide her with information. But you'll all see how they made up in the coming chapters.
.... somepony gonna die
I CANNOT believe that Leaf Scanner. There is no way in tartarus Cadence would use anyone's love like that!!!
I agree with the others, Iron Hoof will most likely get killed. I can only hope Twilight will draw it out, so the idiot will know TRUE terror before he dies.
YES! And here we go
Iron Hoof is a small name pretending to have a big ego and is a total coward and traitor. May he die pathetically.
Also, I feel like Raven Mist quitting is simply done for drama; there didn't seem to be any reason for it. Iron Hoof's order from Luna should have been questioned and should have gone to Luna to make sure before deciding to quit. It just feels like the idiot ball is being held too tight there.
Glad to finally have Flurry and Twilight meet and I hope to see them bonding in down time after Iron Hoof is dealt with.
8193646 To be totally fair, Leaf Scanner isn't nobility or a royal. He probably sees royalty like most ponies do, ponies that only talk with ponies of their high status and not to a lower pony like himself. Though...yeah, he should know better if he's this close to Flurry, but that doesn't mean he's around Cadance a lot. This chapter told us that Flurry isn't around Cadance a lot.
I love this story so much, I was browsing fimfiction without an account and I had to sign up just to keep track and share my opinions about this story.
I love it, its simply a gem being polished for greatness.
I admire the part where Fluttershy prayed for a foal, it reminds me of Greek mythology. I've never seen another author use that concept.
I wonder what reaction Sunset will have when she sees Celestia again.
Well, Celestia and Luna may have finally woke up and realized that they can't keep treating Twilight like an object. Only to find out that somepony went behind their back, and is now trying to arrest Twilight in their name.
No way Twilight’s going to trust them, heck not even listen to them. She’s just going to believe they only want her under their hoof, and are willing to do anything to do that. Even threaten her and her unborn foal!
i think you meant "physiques" there...
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Thanks, I missed that error
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I got my root beer and popcorn ready for the grand war battle. I wonder if Twi will do a Mak'gora with Iron in the end of it.
Heheheheheh, this is getting good.
I can see why this story is so popular.
I'm glad that Twilight and RD made up. I'm guessing that Twilight had enough of giving Chrysalis second chances considering her current hostility towards her.
Idiots!
"BUT THIS IS MY COUNTRY!!!"
"BUT WE ARE STULL COMIG FOR YOU!"
"umm...NEW LAW! YOU CANT ARREST THE EMPRESS!"
"Huh?Or shoot we can't go again that it's the law!"
They are having a happy smiling heart to heart...In the middle of a battle field, surrounded by the bodies of Twilights dead citizens. There would be no chance in hell that I would ever disregard the deaths of so many who swore to protect my Empire. At the very least I would take Celestia's eyes.
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