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... So you're NOT taking OC suggestions?
You say the deadline's March 31, but you didn't put the chapter up until MAY.
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Well, english is not my first language, as I am from germany. I still hope, that I improve while I write this story and so far, people have still come back to read more. I hope, thats a good sign. ^^
Also, I have a proofreader on the later chapters.
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Oops, meant May. I will edit that.
Only red can be seen and screams of pleasure and pain can be heard. Suddenly a familiar voice can be heard.
"You failed me slut! *smack* Only one of my desired traits was picked and the rest wasn't even in the top 3! *smack* and the one picked wasn't even an important one! *smack* You even insulted some of the other beings here!" *smack**smack**smack*
"I'm.... sorry... master." A female voice whimpered
(sigh) "Even if things didn't go as well as hoped they still tuned out fine, I am still disappointed but things aren't over yet."
"Oh it seams we have company,"
The red is wiped away and the unicorn from before can be seen naked with clear signs saying she has been whipped. Her body is soaked in her own blood from varus cuts made probably by the whip currently floating away before disappearing from sight.
(sigh)"I still have no idea how to get through to you people but to any who felt insulted I apologize and I offer her body for a day to each of you so she can personally apologize as well. As long as she comes back alive you can do what you want to her, I can heal all her wounds." A soft whimper can be heard.
"That aside let us continue with what to do next. Personally I want to continue training our slaves so they can serve us better and I want to either focus on the hospital or or the school. A visit to the castle couldn't do any harm either but that doesn't need any immediate attention as far as I can see beyond a simple conversation on what happened to Zecora."
"Though that is what I want to do I also see the use in paying a visit to the Apple family home and ensuring that everything there is going to go as we want it to so we can finish what we started there. If this takes more time than one visit, it will be best if we continue here until we are finished. If we leave this project half done the situation there might turn back to how it was. So I say we first finish dealing with everything that might get us into trouble over what happened with Zecora, then we finish what we started with the Apples and then we continue with our other projects depending on what the rest of our group wants to do."
"Besides that I strongly discourage starting any new projects before we get closer to those we already started. The more things we try to do at once the more that can go wrong because out attention is spread between to many things. We must not overextend and besides the more projects we do at once the longer each project is going to take and the more chance there is of being discovered or a project getting neglected and setting us back."
"I am also a little disappointed that Zecora was broken instead of made into a slave but it was probably the best option all things considered."
The translucent being walks into your field of view and sighs
"I see no other topics to talk about thus I will end with the usual, good luck Zexis and remember we will be watching"
The screen flickers, and Lady Catherine appears. She is once again in the nightgown, and her cat ears and tail twitch anxiously, as if she is scared.
"I'm getting the strangest feeling about the consequences of our actions. Almost like something big is coming. Let's hope I'm wrong.
"Anyway, good job Zexis, Zecora is beaten and Big Mac has joined us. Don't let this win get to your head though. Wait until things calm down a bit before doing something big again. Keep an eye on Mac, Applebloom, and Zecora to make sure they're staying on track.
"Now to plan for our next project. I personally think we should finish Spike. We already have leverage in the Apple family and the school so we should get Spike down before Twilight does something to revert our progress. Be careful Zexis, and as always, my main goal is to get you to survive to the next interlude."
The screen flickers off, getting one last glimpse of Catherine as she buries herself in another book.
The Question is "What do they do with Zecora now?". My thoughts are that she would be put under Zexis command and with that Zexis needs his own House (with a Basement that can be expanded opon later) so that he can Train her and learn from her in the Future.
The next problem that could come up is Fluttershy, the reason: she can talk to animals and some of thoughs animals could have been near the Everfree and watched both conflicts, then tell Fluttershy and she could tell her friends (eg. Twilight and Applejack).
(Warning, the following comment contains sex. No one is allowed to hate it for that fact besides me and the author.)
The mist rolls back to see a blue dragon with silver chest scales sitting at a stone table in a black cave with lights coming from some shinning crystals.
"Zelix, it looks like now we will get another reward from Eros. I hope it will be good." The dragon smiles "I am glad I was able to contribute to your strategy in the fight against Zecora. It looks like we all need to talk about different strategies next time."
A pondering look crosses the dragon's muzzle, now we need to do damage control. Firstly go and double check how things are at the farm. You can see how Bloom, AJ, and more importantly Big Mac are doing...." A look of worry son morphs on his muzzle, "He seems to be a temporarily ally, that needs to be fixed. We need a stallion like him on our side. So check to see if he is still is keeping things under control or if we need to use an suggestion powder."
"I would agree with 8162839, you need to visit Spike and the school. I wonder how Spike is doing." Fimbulwinter's comments. Curiosity dripping from his voice. "I really hope we can help him along with his corruption. If it was possible I would love to bring him to my kingdom to teach him, but it isn't possible. I would have taken him to my harem, and allow him to fuck any of them. Anyway visit him and see how he is doing."
"As for the kids, go to the school. I want to see how the new curriculum is working. I would love to see Pip and Rumble place Tiara in her place. Maybe Scoots can help the boys embrace their rolls."
"Anyway Zelix, its time to specialize. We need to specialize your corruption method. so pills, trinkets, or powder, Also we need to specialize his fighting style. Either for him to battle, for him to send pawns to fight, or maybe us magic or relics. Its time to specialize! I say focus on firstly pills and then trinkets. As for fighting use relics and then direct other people to fight. I wonder what other viewers will suggestion"
Clicking claws are heard as a big black dragon with grey chest scales, and a red dragoness with lighter red breast scales, sit on the other side of the table.
“Now, to business. Obsidian.” The Fimbulwinter speaks gaining the attention of the black dragon.
“Fluorspar told me about your little….. speech…… to Permafrost, when he questioned your loyalty. I’m very impressed. Not many dragons have advocated for me, besides bringing up how often they have sex. For that you have my thanks.”
“Thank you, my Lord.” The captain of the guard replies bowing his head slightly, “I spoke the truth. You have done more for both of us in the few years of you being the dragon lord than Permafrost for over 200 years he was the prince. You even gave us an egg for us to raise.”
“You have our eternal gratitude.” The red dragoness bows her head as well. Fimbulwinter’s gaze lasts brief on the beautiful E size tits the dragoness has, bouncing, in the open air.
After the brief stare the Northern Dragon Lord continues, “Still, such loyalty needs to be rewarded. You two now have an egg, but I assume you drakes originally wanted more than one hatching?” The blue dragon asks.
“That was the plan when we mated.” The red dragoness speaks, “When I originally went into heat, we fucked for hours and weeks on end. I remembered one season, you snuck me into the dungeons, and…. Let’s says that experience is why we have chains and whips in the bedroom.” Scarlet smirks.
The Northern Dragon Lord smirks, “Why Scarlet, I didn’t know you liked being in chains. Maybe I can arrange for you to have a personal cell in castle.”
The Dragoness smile only deeps and whispers, lust dripping from her voice., “Whoever said I was the one in chains while being fucked like Tiamat was going to return.” One of her claws moves under the table towards her mate. The captain stiffens and the distinct smell of arousal starts to waft from the two.
“But after three of my heat seasons having come and pass, we found we can’t have any hatchlings. This egg will probably be our only one.” The red dragoness speaks while gazing lovingly at a small white and green egg, lying in a nest made of crystals.
Sighing the Dragon Lord braces himself for the possible drain on his body. “That may not be the case.” The mated dragons look their Lord questioning. “You are aware Obsidian, that my skills of fleshcraft have grown in the last months.”
“Yes. I have been told, but haven’t personally seen how much they have grown.” The black dragon replies curiously.
“I believe that, with my new powers, I may be able to let you two conceive your own hatchlings.” Faces of doubt morph over the mated pair. “You don’t lose anything if you don’t believe me. I just want to use fleshcraft on both of you. Then during your next heat cycle, you can see if my powers have grown that much, to allow you two too conceive.” Fimbulwinter offers the couple.
The red and black dragons look at each other, “Well Stone, we don’t lose anything? Besides maybe he can make sure you have a bit more juice to pump, you seem to be bit lacking with each decade.” Scarlet teases.
“Well, maybe he can make sure you aren’t so loose after 4 hours of fucking. I remember those days.” The captain replies right back at his mate.
“Both can be arranged. Do you object to me using my fleshcraft?” The Dragon Lord asks.
“No, we don’t.” The two hosting dragons reply.
“Then let’s get started, Obsidian stand up.” The black dragon obeys his lord and stands up straight, his cock still semi hard from his wife clawjob.
Fimbulwinter glows and the light fades as lines of light travel across his body, connecting at his claws. In a fluid motion Flimbulwinter moves his claws, the light trails after his claws, briefly forming various arcane ruins. With on swift motion he places his claw on black dragon’s muscular chest, and Obsidian starts to glow. “There, let’s have everything be healed, have it so there is no problem for you seed.” The black dragon groans as his cock gets harder.
“And, due to your wife’s request, let’s make sure you can pump out twice as much cum.” The groan morph to a full-on moan as black dragon’s ball sack doubles in size. Moving his claw away from his captain, Fimbulwinter says, “It may be a few days to adjust, you’re going to be quite testy. Easy to provoke and very prone to fuck.”
Looking at the red dragoness. “Now Scarlet on the table!” Fimbulwinter commanded. The red dragoness eagerly gets on the stone table. As she gets onto her back spreading her legs into the air in front of the Northern Dragon Lord a deep growl echoes throughout the cave. Obsidian gazes as his wife, a look of complete possession on his face which morphs into a threatening scowl at Fimbulwinter.
“Don’t worry, Obsidian, you get to claim her. It may be better. I believe Scarlet all I need will be your mouth.” The dragoness quickly spins on the table, he legs wrapping around the captain’s waist, plunging her mates cock into her waiting slit. Her mouth reaches Fimbulwinter’s growing cock as she beings to rock back and forth to the motions of Obsidians powerful thrusts. Her wiggling tits excite the Dragon Lord enough so his cock reaches full mast.
The lines of light on Fimbulwinter slowly travel away from his claw, and this time traveling down is chest and between his legs. The lines converge on the Ice Dragon’s Lords cock, causing him to groan. “I’ve never done it this way. It’s bound to be different.”
With haste the blue dragon grabs Scarlets muzzle, and places it on his cock. The dragoness quickly slips her maw over the glowing dick causing the Fimbulwinter to moan and pant from the pleasure of the tongue as it dances.
“Let’s get this started. Only three things. HMMPHHH. Firstly, let’s make sure you can…… can…. CONCIEVE. Oh Iris! Your mouth is one of the best that have ever pleased my dick.” The dragoness groans as the magic glows into her body causing her to glow.
“Her pussy is better. Tastes better as well.” A deep growl comes from form the guard captain. His thrusting only seems to speed up. While is muzzle drifts to his wife’s stomach as starts to lick it.
“Secondly, let’s make sure you are TTTIIGGGHHHTTTTT!!!!” Fimbulwinter moans, soon both Obsidian and Scarlet both moan as Scarlet starts to move more in rhythm with her mate.
“How is that now Obsidian?” Fimbulwinter asks.
“RRROOOAAAAARRRRRRR.” Obsidian replies, his motions on his wife getting more and more quick, as his tongue movements become more and more erratic. His wife doesn’t reply either expect from moaning around the Ice Dragon Lord’s cock.
“Finally, let’s make sure you can feed…. Your HATCHING!!!! When he arrives!!!!!!” A groan is heard from Scarlet. Quickly moving his claws, the dragon lord squeezes the red dragoness plump tits. Pulling his claw back to his muzzle, a white liquid can be seen running down the dragon’s claws. A brief smile appears on his face before becoming one of pleasure, as the dragoness continues to suck off her lord.
Obsidian growls deeply as some of the milk travels down from Scarlets bouncing tits to her stomach. His tongue early moves towards it, as the growl deeps and starts to sound more like a purr. The purr is overshadowed from the moaning blue dragon as he feels his cock hitting the back of the throat of the dragoness.
The mist closes in on the Dragon Lord and his Captain spitroasting the lactating Scarlet.
Hum. I was not completely off then. Strength in numbers and control over the battlefield proved to be decisive, as I suspected. Zecora had the upper hand in any field our puppet had a little experience dabbling with.
Only convinces me more we need to build up from Zexis' strengths. Now that he has unlocked the ability to communicate with the Everfree, finding materials with any kinds of fun uses should be easy! For powders, pills, weapons... not to mention, if his control ever reaches so high—tentacle plants.
The sleeping powder bomb wasn't a bad idea at all. It likely would've worked with any ponyvillain except Zecora, and even with her, it was worth a try.
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Table Spike and the castle for now. The school is more relevant. Not only because we already have one servitor in place there (Scootaloo), but because it's another way to manipulate Apple Bloom, who will be in a confused and hurt state. She'll be vulnerable, more vulnerable than she will be with Applejack watching over her. And we need to corrupt Apple Bloom as Mac has come to join our side due to this very promise.
Also, I admit to finding the schoolcolts and schoolfillies rather interesting targets. Unless Zexis' influence is completely purged, even if he should fail, these ponies will carry his teachings to wherever they're drawn in life—the seeds of a new Equestria.
I want Zexis to try to find out any existing crushes and/or who the schoolponies think would make a good couple before he shackles them together as colt-master and filly-slave, but... I also want to hear if other Watchers have preferences. Let's call it slavery-shipping!
8163366 Lord Fimbulwinter, you mention Rumble and Pip for Diamond Tiara. Two colts for one slut, though? Throw in at least Silver Spoon for good measure! Pipsqueak has already had experience in how good it feels to humiliate Tiara. In public even! Rumble is obviously attracted to Scootaloo, whom he can't have, so Silver Spoon will be the consolation prize. She spent her whole life being 'the other filly', it's not like it'll be new to her. And her Cutie Mark is a spoon—she's a tool, she needs to be used.
Furthermore, Zexis has yet to find out what's wrong with Snips and Snails. As class clowns and believed to be idiots, what are their options? I've come to enjoy pairing them with other potential social outcasts, such as Twist with her lisp, Babs the former horrible bully in need of punishment, and Zipporwhill, whose accent shows she's not from around Ponyville. At the very least, the latter is an attractive target, as it appears her family is rather well-off and therefore another source of possible funds. But I would like to hear your thoughts, if you do have any!
One last thing: Training his slaves for additional tasks, if possible, should be encouraged. Not only his slaves, but his allies. Birdhoof was invaluable in this fight. As noted before, he has potential. Reward his efforts and let him train telekinetic attacks and ropeworks. He'll make a fine catcher for Zexis.
Be sure to look into Zecora's hut, she was a powerful Shaman and a very skilled herbalist, she may have ways or additional methods to advance or maintain your goals. Beware of traps, however, someone able to bind the Everfree Forest, even for a short time, is powerful, and we couldn't truly say when she began controlling it.
Be wary of the Farmer boy, he is not truly to be trusted and will seek to gain dominance, after all between the two of you, he must feel the mightier and is not necessarily wrong. You need insurance, and he is unlikely to fall under drugs. New plans must be developed to bring him under heel. Using Applebloom is likely to only insight rage.
We must also look into Spike, even if for only a cordial visit, we need his to know his situation again, Thunderlane will remain silent so long as we do, in his point of view. We need information, Birdhoof is still unreliable in this regard, finishing business quickly, and returning having Scootaloo or anyone really, to update you is wise.
The human lied on a broken and shattered ruin. "Zero, One, One, Zero, One, One, Zero" he sang tunelessly as he stared up at the clouds in the sky.
With a ding the holographic screen appeared in front of him. He read it and flipped to his feet afterward, pacing as he dictated his words to the screen.
"Kickass! That's why you don't mess with overly powerful spirits and the like. They will not stand for a mortal's disrespect. So if you take a shot at one of them, don't miss."
"Anyways, time to get down to buisness. First about Big Mac, and this is important, remember that he is your ally, not your minion. Treat him and his opinions with the respect he deserves. He's not another Birdhoof we can bully around, he can and will kick us to the curb if treat him badly. For now? I suggest we bring him into the fold fully. Tell him about Redheart, the Flower Trio, and Scootaloo. Let him indulge his lusts, and basically be his friend. He is our first bro, and you gotta have your bro's back.
Speaking of Birdhoof, he did well. Good job to him, and he can live a little longer. He's still a shitstain of a stallion, but hey, progress. We don't have a house yet, so maybe we can store Zecora at his place for now. Maybe.
Zecora has been sacrificed, and I'm looking forward to our reward. Come on, ability to create tentacle monsters. I don't really care about the body, give her to Birdhoof, Big Mac, or toss her in the basement, whatever. Two important things though, we need to come up with a lie to deal with her. If we let her be found, Twilight will try and heal her. And hey, maybe we can throw her off the right track, but that'll only buy us time, unless Zecora's memory has been wiped completely. Alternatively, we stash her in her old home, and pretend she ran away deeper into the woods. We can then take over her old place, but I feel that's even riskier. Between the two, I leave it up to the rest of the chatter to figure something out. Though speaking of her old place, let's loot it! She likely has some sweet alchemy goodies we can play with. More importantly, she might have written down her suspicions of us. We need to destroy those, before getting the Mane 6 to investigate the building.
As for what we do now? Take it easy for a bit. Continue your lessons to the students, hang out with Spike, move into your new home, be it Zecora's or in Ponyville. All sound like good ideas to me. The only possible priority is Applebloom and Sweetie Bell. They might notice Scootaloo has had her brains fucked out. Applebloom in particular needs to be brought into the fold, though thankfully we've got Big Mac to help. And to take care of her afterwards.
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If Fluttershy witnessed what happened we're fucked, plain and simple. Discord drew a very clear line for us, we can do what we want, but we keep Fluttershy out of it. And we're not ready in any way to even think about trying to get around that. If she has? Then our options are either to lie our way out of it, or to bail and try again in a different city.
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Dude, you don't fuck with your bro. That shit's not kosher. Big Mac is on our side, and the way to keep him on our side is too keep him swimming in pussy. As long as we're winning we'll be cool with him. Drugging him and controlling him is going to bite us in the ass eventually. Willing allies are worth so much more. Hell, actual friends are even better. Turn that whole 'Friendship is magic' thing against Celestia and we've got this in the bag.
As for specializing, I think you're talking a bit too early. Let's see what we get for a reward and what we can buy before we start discussing specialties.
BZZZZT.............Click!
No that doesn't belong there. It belongs in row Alpha 6, case Delta 9, shelve Lambda 2, section Gama 1. After you done that I need you to gather reference material on that list I just gave you and hurry will you I don't have all day. Bloody Interns, I requested an assistant but noooo! your department isn't busy enough but hear you can have this useless intern instead. Sigh
Anyway lets get down to business. It excellent to see that bitch Zecora put in her place and I'm glad we ended up breaking her I can't wait to see what we can spend our Break Point on. Now we need to do a bit of housekeeping and looting we need to go to Zecora hut not only to collect any valuable alchemical components and enchantments but to make sure she did not leave any message or clue to our dear Zexis's true nature. Then we need to handle breaking Zecora "condition" to her friends in Ponyville. I recommend leaving her at the Hospital until Zexis has his own place she can be look after by Red Heart. As for explaining what happen I would go with something along the following lines that Zecora was trying to preform ritual which is normally done as a test at the end of a Shaman/Witch Doctor Training. Now I know what many of you are think but please hear me out. Do you not think it strange for an individual like Zecroa to be where she is, normally people with such power are held highly within their communities and not let go of easily especially young promising individual like Zecroa. Now what I recommend is that Zexis weave a theory how Zecora was most likely an apprentice who had almost finished her training and than ran away for some reason or another before her final test. Also mention that places like they Everfree are often the site of such test because of their nature as the final test involves calming the spirits in such places. If her friends ask how you know so much about it Zexis can explain that his farther is the Witch Doctor in his home town and taught him many thing in hopes he would follow in his foot steps which Zexis did not due to personal reason.
Once the housekeeping is done we need to start warping up some of out current project so that we can start some new ones and progress toward our goal. I believe our focus should be on Sweet Apple Acres and the Apple family at the moment as we can use the current situation to our advantage. Big Mac is own our side for the moment but we need to produce result to keep him in our control but at the same time we need to make sure that he understands we are the boss as I can easily see him trying place himself as the leader. So my plan to get the result is as follows have Big Mac yell at Applejack, in the morning on a day Zexis is coming over to help out the farm, about how she is handling the business and that her decision she has been making have been terrible using the Zecora and Apple bloom incident as a example and the financial condition of the farm at the moment. The idea here is to get Applejack mad enough to storm off but not so bad she want to go to her friend but rather go out into the field to work once she is tried and had time for the things that Big Mac said to sink in then along comes our dear Zexis with a drink(laced with the honesty pills) and a sympathetic ear, all the while he will use his smooth talking skill to make Applejack feel guilty over her poor decisions and get her to be truly honest with herself. The truth of which is she is not strong enough or smart enough to be the head of the family and that it time to let Big Mac do what an older brother is meant to do, to be the head of the house. During this time get her to admit that she likes strong stallions because she tried of trying to be strong when what she really want to do is let some else do the heavy lifting. From their we just slowly increase our control over her and get her to surrender one responsibility at a time to Big Mac until finally she surrender herself. When this happens we will need another plan so that when she does surrender that we get to deflower her in order to make sure Big Mac Knows who the real boss is.
Well that it for now I have a lot of ideas and research to do on out other project and I got to deal with that bloody intern.
CRASH!!!.... SIGH!
Speaking of which.
WHAT THE IN THE NAME OF BZZZZZT
The mist pulls back to see a groggy blue dragon stirring on a pile of gems.
"Oh Iris, " Fimbulwinter moans. "Fleshcrafting on two fully grown drakes, and then three rounds of sex can knock out a king."
The Northern Dragon Lord's eyes widen as he hears moaning and flesh slapping sounds from outside of his cavern.
"Oh, Obsidian, faster! FASTER! FFFFFAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSTTTTTEEEEEEERRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shut up, slut! Your ASKING for IT!!!!!!!!"
The sounds of flesh colliding gets louder and the moaning and panting of the two mating dragons increase.
"If I had more energy, I may join them, but I guess I will respond to some of the replies to my suggestion." Fimbulwinter speaks, but not even moving his body.
"8164042, I love your idea. Mac and break her down again, and maybe that will make her vulnerable to the pills. But remember they may be a double edge sword. We need to make sure she is sad before she takes the pills. If her stubborn streak comes in during the pills influence, then they might make her convictions even stronger. So in recap, I agree with having Big Mac yell at AppleJack and then giving her the pills, but maybe Zelix should use a bit of powder too to help suggest she feel sad, so we can be certain the pills won't bit us in the ass."
"8163965 , I say that, because of the warning we got. Big Mac is a temporary ally. That is why I say we need to drug him, or do something to make sure he doesn't swap sides on us! Besides he is living with an element of harmony, and Zelix may have forgotten to get the pendant back. That may somehow reverse the corruption, (If that is even possible.) As for specialization, start thinking my friend. Zelix nearly got killed, due to lack of strategy and lack of stats. We are unfortunatly, making him a jack of all trades, when we need him to start really developing into a good tool for Eros's will."
"8163616, dear friend. I have come to believe much of what you have said with corrupting the school. May I offer a suggestion though. We make Silver Spoon the top slut. You see, Diamond is always use to having the spot light on her, and her being popular. If we can get Rumble and Pip to give affection and corrupt Silver Spoon and isolate Diamond Tiara, then Tiara will fall quickly. She will do anything to become popular again, so she may even just spread her legs and offer her pussy to any colt, so long as they pay her attention. I believe that would be the way to break Diamond. I do wonder what about Snips and Snails. Maybe it would be best to make these colts fuck toys and simply give them to Silver Spoon. After all both colts seem to be pretty dense, and more like court fools than actual future stallions."
"Now everyone, I know lots of commentators are saying to leave Spike, but I think we may need to visit him and see if we can't use him again to gain access to another book. After all we have three weapons to corrupt ponies, I would love to learn how we can take any of these methods to the next level, or add another one to Zelix's arsenal"
Mist mist rolls back in as the blue dragon closes his and drifts off to sleep.
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"Sure, sure. He's temporary ally, and I agree that we should work on that. But what we need more than anything is a friend. Someone whose got our back, but is willing and able to keep us from fucking up. So we just need to win him over.
And I think the best way to do that is to get him in charge of the farm. And I've thought of a good argument for Big Mac to be in charge. He's there. He isn't sent across Equestria on missions, or fighting monsters every other week. Applejack may love to farm and sell apples, but she simply doesn't have the time to constantly go over finances, to deal and wheel with ponies like Filthy Rich, or to spend studying new agricultural techniques. Farming isn't a job, it's a lifestyle, and Applejack simply has too much on her plate to be in charge.
Fine, you want some thoughts on specialization? I say we focus on being charismatic and charming. We fight our battles with words, not with magic and muscles. If it comes to brute force like it did with Zecora, then we have allies to help us fight. Focus on breaking people through corruption rather then lust or willpower. Worthy people at least. Sluts and fuckheads don't deserve to be people. And yes, females can be worthy. And to that end? I say we start investing in additive cum and the like. More charisma skills obviously, but now that we've got a baseline, we can work on seducing mares and make them want to be our slaves. Convince others to spread corruption willingly. Aim to be a visionary out to free Equestria from Celestia's outdated and oppressive Purity Laws. But that's long term.
For now, we needed to be a jack of all trades just so we could survive and get our bearings. But Zexis may be ready to move past that stage, though I'd rather wait until the next interlude before we make a decision on that.
I think that Zexis has earned some time off. he has done so much already, it could help him make plan on his next move and who the next target it's gone to be.
The translucent being can be seen looking at you.
"8164233 Like the dragon I approve of the plan 8164042 made on how to corrupt Applejack. As I said in my own comment, I also agree that we should not let any of our current projects fall into disrepair. A few visits to every project we started every once in a while is needed to ensure progress. "Putting anything under the table" as 8163616 suggests we do with our friendship castle project will probably only result in setbacks which will result in us having wasted time. Time being something we don't know how much we have. "
"8162839 to add to my own comment as well and to ensure my idea on how I think things should be done are clear. I want us to finish with the Apple family first because we are the closest to finishing with them and thus will be able to shift more of our focus to our other projects. Secondly I want to then focus on the school since we seem to be the closest to finishing that project after the Apple family. What project we go should go after is not clear to me as nether the hospital or friendship castle are anywhere close to finished as far as I can see and no great opportunity for corruption has presented itself there yet either. As for why I see the school as the best second target. Cheerelee is as good as ours and the foals should be easy enough to corrupt through our classes and maybe a spiked lunch or two. The lack of threats is also quite useful, I mean the only real threat to us there would be Applebloom and she is in the hospital. To those who couldn't guess why she is a possible threat, she knows her alchemy. She will notice us drugging her friends. So if we find the time Appleblooms corruption needs to occur while we are busy at school and she is in the hospital. Applebloom must not come back to a corrupted school while she is not corrupted. The chance of something going wrong and our plans being discovered is to high to let that happen. As for the other two projects, we just need to go there to ensure there is some progress is made and we keep tabs on any events that might occur."
"On a side note 8164552 no Zexis will not get any time off we don't have time for vacations."
"Now that i have clarified my intentions and plans I shall make my leave."
your vision turns to black
One blue light and one orange light turn on. Three gunshots are heard and, after several moments, a figure comes into the room to take his seat.
"Apologies, we had a slight... pest problem over here.
"Onto business. We defeated Zecora. If only just. This fight was much to close for my liking. While some of my... compatriots may not agree with me, I feel we must upgrade Zexis' ability in direct combat. I would prefer we stay the manipulator and play from the shadows... But as we've seen that will not always be enough.
"Once we're sure Zecora is fully broken and locked away someplace our next course of action is take her artifacts, potions, recipes and anything not nailed down for our use.
"As for the town we must do three things soon. First, we must assist Big Mac in taking over the farm. His loyalty is keyed directly to this, and corrupting Applejack will ensure the Elements cannot be used against us.
"Second, we must check up on Spike in particular and the Castle of Friendship in general. We left Zecora alone for too long and this happened; we need to keep tabs on this situation to ensure we know what's going on.
"Lastly we should find another one of the Elements of Harmony and do some... scouting. With Thunderlane's previous interaction I would rule out Rainbow Dash. Until we can find a way to neutralize Discord or bring him to heel we cannot go after Fluttershy.
"Tackling Pinkie Pie is asking for trouble with those senses of hers...
"So by default we must approach Rarity. We can say we're saving up for a house and will, not long after, need to expand the wardrobe. That will be a good in for us to work with, and we can get a feel for her and her wants... Additionally, Spike desires her and we may need to... push the two together, assuming we don't sic him on Twilight and Glimmer.
"Beyond that; information is ammunition. Learning as much as we can about the opposition is something we must do.
"Mostly because after we deal with the farm we should lay low for awhile, integrate and avoid drawing too many eyes to us. Sooner or later curiosity will raise about Roseluck, even if we get her to function normally once more. People will ask about Zecora, sooner or later. And the new dynamic at the farm, post-Big Mac assuming authority will be the talk of the town.
"We must not let Zexis' name be... attached to these events, and in a small town being nearby can be enough. Someone might put two and two together and get four.
"We will be better served with a month or two of maneuvering and learning then active corruption at this point. Identify potential threats and problems and plan to deal with them.
"It may even be to our benefit to re-purpose Zecora's hut as a stash for supplies in case we need to... leave quickly. It sometimes pays to prepare for the worst.
"For now... We will be watching."
The lights shut off.
This went down excellently, and shows that for all Zexis' skills, having allies just works better for him in the long term.
I think the next step should be to immediately corrupt Apple Bloom. Big Mac is loyal right now, but he's hyped up, angry and still has drugs in his system. If we leave things too long he may start having second thoughts, and even if he ultimately doesn't revert back, living in the house of the element of Honesty puts Zexis at risk that he will crack unless he is truly loyal.
Right now Apple Bloom is in the hospital, which gives us ample opportunity to corrupt her in secret. Nurse Redheart can ward off Applejack and insist that Apple Bloom stay longer for observation purposes. During this time, have her food laced with the suggestion powder, and whenever she is in a receptive state, have Nurse Redheart explain her true role, even giving her hormone pills in the state to cement it. Once she has been broken, have Big Mac and Scootaloo break her fully, giving Big Mac his property and securing his loyalty, plus giving you an extra helper alongside Scootaloo for corrupting the children of Ponyville.
I would also recommend using both Big Mac and Bird Hoof to fix things with Thunderlane. He is friends with Big Mac, and has secret dealings with Bird Hoof, so there has to be some trust there. Have one or both stallions (separately of course, as these two just hanging out might draw suspicion) approach Thunderlane and make clear how 'sorry Zexis is' and that he doesn't want to wreck his new friendships in Ponyville and that he can just be too nosy for his own good sometimes. Just play off to get Thunderlane feeling accepting, and then have Zexis apologize in person. Once this is done we should organize for another bar night and get a few hormone pills into him to start corrupting him. The mistake this time was pushing him too quickly, we instead need to build up a little trust with him and corrupt him enough that he won't find fault in sexually dominating Rainbow.
After this we can resume the more long term focuses like breaking down Applejack's strong will and looking into Spike and Carrot Cake's situations.
The only thing find wrong with the chapter is... what happened to the wolves? Did her shield disperse them into limbs or did it just force them back? Did the wolves die from the force field? Where they still around? Did they run away?
That's really the only thing I see wrong with this chapter... I will say I would love to see a subservient Zecora in later chapters, perhaps as Macs side bitch.
" 8164576.I remembered when you use to be cool, what happen to you man " (don't take this serious, I just roleplay)
8165397
What exactly do you mean?
I don't really think I changed much from the point that I started at. or have I?
8164576
Fighting on too many fronts at once is part of what brought us the Zecora problem. However, I won't deny at least making sure nothing is spiralling out of control is a good thing. As for the Apple Farm being a good target to get to next... yes and no. You're right about Mac, he is on our side for the time being. On the other hand, Applejack is incredibly bull-headed and strong-willed.
On the other other hand... that means Mac needs Zexis' aid more than ever. MacIntosh is not a convincing speaker, especially not wrapped up in his emotions as he is. Unless the plan is to break her by force, we'll need to establish a regimen of training for the mare—punishments and rewards to condition her, and degradation to make sure she knows where her place is in the better order: Under her brother's heel. She needs her stubborn pridefulness systematically shattered and remade into a proper, subserviant slave.
8164233
Your words about Diamond Tiara ring true. Playing them against one another focusses their attention as well as deprives them of their most importan ally: Each other. Whether or not it will be Silver Spoon or DT as top bitch depends on their personalities. Should Silver Spoon turn out to be inherently submissive, perhaps the situation can be turned to get DT to literally whore out her best friend for the popularity. It shouldn't be too hard to find blackmail material on them. Who was the colt with the camera, Featherweight..? A ride on Zexis' 'Scooter' should suffice. For that matter, having him hand over all embarrassing photos is a good idea as it is.
Regarding the two dolts—and yes, that wasn't a typo—don't underestimate them. They've untapped potential. They are effective spies, they're unafraid in the manner those of fuzzy minds tend to be, they're very loyal, and Snails is most likely the most accomplished magic-user among Cheerilee's class. They even managed to find an Ursa Minor on their first try!
8166701 "I don't think stretching too thin brought us the Zecora problem, although that itself is a problem. We simply didn't keep tabs on her before hand. If confronting her earlier or not would have worked to our benefit I do not know. Things are as they are; let's look to the present and future.
"I stated before that I agree we should finish up at the farm and bring it under Big Mac's care. However I still think we need to lay low for a bit afterwards to avoid unwanted attention. Eyes and ears open, of course, and more... passive forms of corruption, but nothing too direct until things settle down."
The mist rolls back to reveal a blue dragon with silver scales flighing through the skies.
"8166701 I would agree with 8166739. The error came from the lack of numbers. Eros even said that!!! Not that we were on too many fronts. We had subpar stragety and only won because Zelix increased his affinity to plants. Which stopped the TImberwolves."
The Northern Dragon Lord takes a bit of a pause with his flying, "Thanks to who ever said to try and take over the everfree and used the Timberwolves against Zecora. Without you we would have lost." The dragon lord starts flying his wings in earnest again.
"Anyway, next time we have to make a better strategy for fighting. I would know. I was the only one offering advice on that front. The only other one was the commenter who said, gain martial arts and go crazy against her. That ISN'T a STRATEGY!!!!!! We need to plan smarter for the next fight! That is where we errored. It was us not offering enough options on fighting."
"8164369, I must apologize for asking to specialize now. I was trying to say we need to specialize the next time we have Zelix level up. I'm sorry for placing you in that situation. I do agree though. I would love the charisma and intelligence to increase so we can have other fight our enemies. I hope you have a good day. All of you guys."
The mist rolls in as the dragon lord flies into a cave.
8166370
8166827
Hrrrm. We are in agreement over strategy, at least. I was one of those arguing for greater control over the Everfree so he could turn the Timberwolves against Zecora. Don't flatter yourself too much, Dragon Lord, you were not the only Watcher figuring out a battle plan.
Be that as it may, I've come to think the Apple Farm is an immediate issue too. It's dangerous to let MacIntosh stomp around the farm like an angry, horny bull, pumped full of rage and drugs and fantasies of putting his sister over his knee. Zexis needs to be there to keep him in check. Let us not forget, Big Mac is a patient stallion when he isn't overwhelmed by artificial emotions. We need to make him understand that educating Applejack will still need some time, and more importantly, that the long-term conditioning approach will be much more satisfying to him; erode her will instead of breaking her mind.
Zexis should help him prove his authority. When another confrontation looms, Mac shouldn't back down. Let him call Applejack's bluff. He is stronger than her; he should win any physical fight. Remind him that Applejack's stupidity led to Apple Bloom being hurt, remind him to use that argument. If she acts like a child, she should be treated like a child. Let MacIntosh imply he's more fit to make decisions because he's older, gradually going over to that he's smarter, and afterwards that he's a stallion and she a mare. Zexis needs to coach Big Mac so he'll be able to undermine Applejack for us.
8166971
"This strategy is sound. I will agree to it.
"As for 8166827, I too offered some advice, but I am loathe to make specific tactics when so little information is available.
"But yes, we need to keep more of an eye on things in the future."
8166827
Lad I and a few others also had a plan not that anyone els wanted to win my way but I digress. As Nohen stated at the end of this chapter and i quote
Though I will confess that my plan was not the greatest. (and would not have worked due to the wrong traits being picked) I wanted to use charisma and intelligence to sway everyone in town to join us in the fight against Zecora. I personally also did not know picking an upgrade like that of affinity for plants would have yielded positive results which caused me to look into ways we could win without needing to directly fight Zecora ourselves.
There were also a few other plans but like mine they were specific to the traits we wanted to get which wouldn't work do to the wrong strategies being selected. Something we can all probably improve on. Thus we might need to make multiple plans for such fights each time so we all have strategies that work for multiple sets of traits. (this will probably be completely forgotten by us all when we get to the next 'boss fight')
"8166971 first of all, allow me to apologize. I simply felt (even though it was incorrect) that I was the only one suggesting battle plans. For that wrong assumptions please accept my apology."
"I agree with you on Big Mac. We got him riled up, and if we don't get him working on some sort of task, we will lose him as an ally. And while I agree with you about having Mac undermine AppleJack, I don't think we should underestimate Aj's stubbornness. Cider and harvesting seasons are proof of that. So I'm saying it isn't a simply fix in one chapter. It's going to take at least two more chapters if that is our main focus. And even that is being generous."
"8167031, I need to offer you an apology as well. I'm sorry for wrongly assuming I was the only one planning on how to fight Zecora. I too was hesitant to move without any information on Zecora, but with a fight ahead it is better to make a plan than to just wing it. Hopefully for the next brawl we can coaborate with battle plans a bit more before the fight."
". 8167921, sadly I must agree with you. By the time another fight chapter needs to be planned, within 2 to 3 chapters, we will have already forgotten our lesson. We will probably make plans on what we could get and not offer many plans. Next fight chapter, I will offer and plan and go only on the traits that Zelix has available. That way we can adapt them based on what everyone offers as suggestions to upgrade."
"P.s. I'm sorry for making the wrong assumption of feeling like I was the only one planning. I understand that there were many people offering advice and I wish to apologize to anyone, that I was offended with my brash assumption."
8168245
Btw, you can probably assume that everyone who comments is planning something. (unless they just spout out traits they want without explanation as to why)
Things not always going the way you want them to is part of the fun. it does mean though that some of the plans we have simply wont come to fruition but again that is part of the fun. It does mean that when a decision is made we may need to adapt our own strategies to those of others. If all of us stubbornly refuse to change our plans we will fail. I could have just kept trying to get friendship castle corrupted first while the majority wanted to corrupt the Apples even if that would in the end just slow us down but what would that accomplish besides me effectively losing my voice because the majority wants something els.
It's like playing Dungeons and Dragons only then with more people and everybody playing the same character.
Also I appreciate the fact that you send that apology to me and to the others. not everyone would have done that and if I speak out of turn please do say so as well. We should all try to keep things civil even if we don't agree els we will simply lose the game. We all need to work together we all want to win the game we just have different ideas on how to win.
8168238 "No apologies required. We are all in this together, are we not?"
"Given some of the... drama we have just been through, I propose we collaborate a bit. We should list a combination of what priorities we should take, divided into two parts; the present and the immediate future.
"I think we've all come to a common agreement that the farm and securing Big Mac's loyalty, however as I have mentioned I think we should lay low for a while. Drawing too much attention to Zexis at this juncture would go badly for us. It's not as if Zexis will not be unoccupied; we still has... school work to do. Additionally it will let him focus on finding other possible allies. Thunderlane needs to calm down before we speak with him once more, Mr. Cake would be able to listen on good gossip but I am... hesitant on approaching Pinkie Pie so soon. Those senses...
"Additionally I would like to put some more focus on combat abilities. I am not saying we should disregard more social or alchemy related abilities, but I think we need to be ready for the next fight, when ever it is.
"For the immediate future I would put less focus on combat abilities and more on sexual abilities and skills that will help us manipulate others.
"Our focus should move to Spike and the Castle of Friendship. If we can get our... foot or hoof in the door we can get back to the forbidden library for more research. The reason is simple.
"Discord.
"With Zecora dealt with he's our only major threat, at current. I am hoping we'll find... something that will help us neutralize him. Yes, Twilight could be a threat, but she's unaware of us. Discord might be aware of us. Or unaware. Or both. It's hard to tell with him.
"The School House would be kept on the back burner unless a good opportunity arose.
"What are your thought, my comrades?"
8169121 First a question for clarification, you said
As i understand what you want, you want to get non combat traits next interlude and after that a few combat traits and or sexual abilities.
my personal thoughts on what traits to pick are
for noncombat: that I would at least like a bonus to intelligence because that will help every strategy, I don't think sexual traits are necessary yet and I will not agree to taking more then 1 of those in the near future, charisma would be nice but nobody els wants Zexis to be the master manipulator that never fight anyone directly so I don't really see that happening.
for combat traits, maybe strong 2 or affinity for martial arts I would prefer we would let melee-combat over to our slaves but again others don't really agree with me.
magic traits: affinity for alchemy 2 would help us greatly and quickly in ways i think most of you will easily understand, affinity for magic (dark) though we need to get to lvl 3 to use it (and other magic because we are a zebra) this would be my desired substitute for normal combat traits plus if we are charismatic enough and/or people trust Zexis enough they won't even question us using it lastly affinity for magic (astral) the opposite of dark magic but also perfect as either the first or second magic school to take. (This is also why i want intelligence these schools of magic need Zexis to be intelligent to make full use of them.)
Magic resistances: I see no need to take these at this exact moment.
my general idea from the start was to make Zexis a great manipulator so we can corrupt everyone over time and thus take our time studying various thing and gather information about the world. I wanted to learn magic and more complicated alchemy before really doing things but no matter.
it may be nice if all of us put up something like this so we can all see what others want so we can adapt to what the majority wants and thus change our strategies appropriately.
(if you forgot what certain traits do you can check in the chapter EXTRA - Status, Allies, Skills (16.04.2016))
8169633 "What I meant was a focus on combat abilities the next time the option arose and a focus on sexual ones afterwards.
"And I do agree with you that Zexis should be a manipulator, however I think we need some combat ability. We scraped by with Zecora and I would like the next fight to go smoother, when it arrives. And it will be a when.
"I didn't mention specifics as new abilities may open up in the next interlude that may or may not be better choices then the current ones."
8165524
Zecoras condition is different to Roseluck, that much I will say. The rest will be revealed in the next chapter.
Also CP for Big Mac are not awarded, yet. His questline ist not over and I will give out any reward to that, when its finished. Zecora was not corrupted, but boken. So, no points there either.
But, I can say that the final CP for Big Macs questline will be substantial, as it involves the corruption of some significant characters. They will be added together.
8168234
What's this? A Dragon Lord going against his ego?
Perhaps the world really is ready for a ride!
Still, thank you and 8167031 for your support of this plan. It's more an overall strategy how to handle Applejack. If Zexis lets Mac blindly charge in, it'll only activate the worst of her stubborness and pride. If he manages to worm his way inside her head, it'll be much more devastating.
To that end, she also needs to be isolated. It shouldn't be difficult, what with Granny Smith dead and Apple Bloom in the hospital for at least a little while. We shouldn't allow Applejack too much time to discuss things with the other Elements. To that end, I suggest having both Zexis and Mac imply and/or outright say her spending time with her friends is a reason the farm is struggling; she's abandoning her duties and the memory of her parents, especially now that she's needed there more than ever.
With only Mac and Zexis around to talk to, she'll be vulnerable to their combined influence. Moreover, whenever she fights with Big Mac (and they will fight), Zexis can act like the more reasonable and sympathetic person. Applejack will want to talk about her problems, and those problems will include her brother becoming suddenly stricter and less warm with her. Have Zexis be there for her. Offer to listen to her. Act like the caring friend. Subtly turn her thoughts against her. "I'm sure your brother is only doing this because he cares. I know it's tough, but... maybe try? You can always stop if it becomes too much for you."
Thus, challenging her ability to withstand hardship, implying she's weak without sying anything offensive. Play Good Guard-Bad Guard with her until she's not sure what to think, and once she's there, Zexis and Mac can fill that poor, pretty and confused mare's head with what they want her to think.
8169121
8169633
I've a question about Zexis' alchemical skills. Aren't there potions to increase a body's strength or speed, even if only for a short time? What about healing potions? We know Zecora could produce those. Maybe letting him explore these possibilities will net us more than letting him train his direct combat abilities, at least for now.
8171400
"This is a possible route, yes, and would also help us with non-combat sills. We just need to make sure anything we make does not have... unwanted side-effects."
The mist rolls back to reveal a bemused Fimbulwinter sitting on his throne.
"8171400 , 8169052 , 8168333, I get it. Dragons aren't suppose to apologize. To be honest after I realized I was wrong it was Fluorspar who told me to apologize. Better to have allies than enemies in the viewing comments. Besides I will repeat, I was mistaken and I'm sorry."
Clapping his claws together the Blue Dragon continues. " 8171400, potion making is similar to my gem creation. Unless a recipe exist, then always have a way to counter said gem, and its magic. So Zelix can get a book from the library, or get some info from Zecora, then he can make some potions for a variety of stuff. As for AppleJack, get Mac to slip some suggestion powder into AJ's drink. She would definitely drink some apple juice after a day of applebucking. Then Zelix can help with some more deep rooted suggestions on trusting her brother, and help show her her faults."
Fimbulwinter then scratches his head. "8170252, I get you want to increase physical strength. I understand that, but remember Nohen said it all came down to numbers. Even if we got strength v2, applebucking v2, and martial arts v2 (I'm not taking about affinity, but actual skill) we would have still have lost. Fluorspar always drives home to me that if you got into a physical fight you failed in some way. Sure I understand sometime you just have to fight, but I do see the value of what Fluorspar says."
A lustful glee enters the dragon's eyes as he continues, "8169633. I agree with a lot of what you said. Personally I say for basic upgrades: Intelligence, Silvertounge, and Charisma. Battle: Strength and Martial arts. Screw applebucking. Regular fucking is much better. Magic: Affinity to plants, and alchemy. Sexual?" The dragonlord seems to pause. "I say, good looks, big cock. Now I know I was an advocate earlier for addictive cum, but I explained that may lead to problems later on. I hope more sexual upgrades will be available in the future. Maybe something like Fluorspar with her pheromones?"
The mist rolls back in as the dragon lord waves good bye to his fellow viewers.
8171739
"True. However in the words of one Adam Savage; Failure is always an option. And I'm sure all our manipulations will fail us once more at some point.
"While I would rather avoid physical conflict, in our operations such is inevitable."
BZZZZZT........Click!
Ah! Excellent sorry about the abrupt ending to my last communication. But that useless intern was been permanently retired so hopefully I will be getting a proper assistant soon. Any way was reading though our latest log and I noticed one piece of information we may want to have Zexis look into, that information being Applebloom's contact we Princess Luna via her dreams. It was stated by Big Mac that Luna helped her make the amulet that we used to defeat the ghost. This suggest that Applebloom and Luna had regular contact of some sort and if that is the case we will need to do something about it before we corrupt Applebloom. We may want to have a method to stop or control dreams of those we have corrupted or are in the process of corrupting as our action my be causing more erotic dreams to occur which may cause Princess Luna to become suspicious of something happening in Ponyville. One possible solution could be found in Zecora hut since she is a shaman she may have a enchantment like a dream catcher which we could use or modify to our purposes. But at the very least we need to have a talk to Applebloom about this subject ideally soon and under the influence of our potions while she still in hospital under the care of Redheart.
8171400
Your Plan is a more thought out version of the one I suggested above but I would caution completely Isolating Applejack from her friend too quickly as this may cause them to come to the farm to check up on her especially Pinkie Pie, also after recent events they may try to come over more often to make sure the apple family as a whole are doing OK which will cause some complication. We may need to cause some sort of distraction for the rest of her friend to help with this plan.
Lastly since it seem to be a topic at the moment I would put my two cents in for Zexis future upgrades. I agree that we should specialise sooner rather than later and think considering what we currently have we should increase our affinity to plants first as not only is it our closets skill to maxing out but also cause it abilities and how it works are apparently all but lost to time if the upgrade description is correct. This means that very few ponies will know how to deal with these abilities and with the Everfree forest close by if we can make it a willing ally to us, since it is a intelligent, it would be the perfect place to bring problematic individual to either fight in our corrupt since it would give us a huge environmental advantage. To support this we will most likely need to increase intelligence and charisma after that properly our alchemy affinity and lastly some sexual abilities.
Now if you will excuse me I have a body to file away and paper work to do.
Your sincerely
From the Archives of Enlightenment, Forbidden Division
BZZZZZT........Click!
Oh yes!
8171400
I had one more recommendation about the plan we should also get Applebloom involved. To explain in more detail after we get some time alone with Applebloom we should put the suggestion that things are worst at the farm since Granny Smith died and Applejack took over running the family business. Make her complain to Applejack how much better everything was before and how sad she been, how nothing is the same and how she argues with Big Mac and doesn't listen to anyone else cause she think she better than everyone at running the farm. In short have Applebloom have a small tantrum and blame Applejack for all her problems this will give us three different attacks on Applejack. Big Mac anger and hostile attitude, Appleblooms sad child like plea and tantrum and finally Zexis sweet sympathetic suggestive advice. Hopefully combining all this together with a distraction for AppleJack friends will allow us to corner Applejack a lot quicker and bring her under our control.
Your sincerely
From the Archives of Enlightenment, Forbidden Division
8171400
"What? Look, Applejack regularly takes out chimeras to make pie deliveries. And she can see through our BS. She might even have a way to convince others she's speaking honestly. She's not some submissive bitch who just needs a strong man to show her who is in charge. And sweet words will fall apart if they aren't perfectly honest.
No, I think our role in her corruption is one of cold logic. Give solid truthful reasons why Big Mac should be in charge, for example, he's better at math and he isn't going off on adventures frequently, and the farm needs constant attention that Applejack can't give it. Ask her why she should be in charge. Prove to her that she shouldn't. And throughout the whole thing, just be Big Mac's friend who is simply trying to explain Big Mac's view from a relatively neutral party. The merest suggestion of what we truly believe may be our downfall against her.
Just remember, Applejack is a hero in every sense of the word. She's just as deadly to us as Zecora was, so treat her with the respect and care that she deserves. We'll need to erode her will with a sea of corruption, and it's going to be both difficult and dangerous. Don't think we'll just need one moment of weakness from her to win instantly.
As for Applebloom, I think she should be our alchemy slut. Spiking Applejack's drinks, spreading corrupted talismans, and maybe we can find a way to corrupt the apples they grow as well. To that regard, I suggest we break her by lowering her willpower to zero, or maxing her corruption."
8173011
"This plan is now officially approved by a minor chaos deity."
"Acting this way is indeed probably going to be more successful, though Applejack can't see through half truths sticking to simple logic is probably the best bet. Though if we believe something is true enough that even we ourselves don't think we are lying she will think we are speaking the truth because from our point of view we are. "
Ooh... I wonder if I should read this or not... Should I? Should I not? Should I? Should I ought? My brain and my gut are telling me two different things, each battling over reading the story or not. Can someone please say why reading this may be a bad idea for someone like me?
A young girl is standing in a training ring, her black hair pulled back in a long ponytail, body clad in shining black armour. Her sky blue eyes scan over her opponent, a tall, voluptuous, slightly older woman, with blonde and dark blue streaked hair. She, too, is clad in black armour. Both are wielding their weapons of choice. The blonde a two-handed sword, and the younger two double bladed axes. `Are you ready Raven?', the blonde asked. `Bring it on', Raven hissed, leaping toward the blonde in a blaze of fury. However, the blonde easily side stepped, causing Raven to fall to the floor with a dull thud. Dazed for a moment, the blonde took this as an opportunity to strike, bringing her sword down on her neck, but the apprentice rolled out of the way easily, the sword striking the ground with a clang. `Ha, what you, you think I could be beat that easily?', Raven smirked, once again charging at the blonde, one axe raised above her head, ready to strike. The blonde once again side stepped, but raven was ready this time, and spun around, swinging both axe out to the side. The blonde quickly dodged, but lost a lock of hair in the process. The blonde quickly sped to another corner of the arena, and studied her hair.`Shit, Raven, that was close. Remember, we're not here to ki-', the blonde squealed and, once again, quickly ducked. Raven had thrown one of her axes at the blondes head. The blonde whipped around to see Raven barrelling forward, axe raised and ready to strike, a look of pure insanity on her face. The blonde tried to tug the axe out of the stone wall, but it was lodged in the stone. Raven ran even closer. With one final tug, the axe came free, and the blonde ran towards Raven... then turned around and ran towards the wall. Raven stopped her pursuit, a puzzled look on her face as the blonde continued to run, not slowing her pace. As she got right up to the wall, however, she ran up the wall and flipped over in an epic parkour move. She landed behind Raven, and Raven, still in shock from the gravity defying move, had loosened her grip on the axe. The blonde quickly grabbed the axe and threw it across the room, where it too became lodged in the stone. The blonde pushed Raven to the ground and placed a knee in the gap between her shoulder blades, holding her sword to Ravens neck. `Lesson one, Raven', the blonde hissed.' Never charge toward an enemy and leave your front unprotected and lesson TWO', the blonde ground her knee further into ravens back, causing a grunt of discomfort to be released,`never ever EVER let your enemy take hold of your weapon. Got it?'. Raven nodded meekly. `Honestly, how many times do I have to tell you? Every time we train, you make that same mistake!', the blonde sighed, removing her knee from Ravens back. The sound of paws on stone was heard, and the blonde turned around to see a dark blue wolf with dark blue wings. `Lady Star Shadow, Lady Star Shadow! Red requests your presence again! The Corrupter has been updated!', the wolf spoke, wagging its long tail. `Thank you, Blue, tell him I will be with him shortly. How are your pups? I hope Silver is a good father to them?', the blonde, Lady Star Shadow questioned her. `Oh, they're well. Fine healthy pups they are'.
`That is good to hear. Please tell Red I will be with him shortly'.
`Yes milady', Blue bowed, and backed out of the room. Star Shadow sighed.`I'm afraid I must attend to some business. You get yourself something to eat, okay?'.
`Yes Mum', Raven nodded, running off to the kitchen.
`Red, you wished to see me?', Star entered a large throne room, with an overall colour scheme of dark blue, silver and black. She was now dressed in a dark blue, floor length dress, with long tight sleeves, and a low neck line that flaunted her smooth, perky E cups. `I was in the middle of training'.
`Forgive me, milady, but it would seem that there has been a major development in this corruption of Equestria you are so wildly invested in', the red winged wolf replied, slipping off the dais that the throne was on to accompany her to her throne. Star Shadow lowered herself onto the throne, and stretched her white and black feathery wings behind her. `Well, then, lets see what Zexis has been up to...'.
`Well, that was certaintly... entertaining', Star Shadow mumbled, two fingers plunged deeply into her dripping wet cunt. `I shall have to... reward you later for your prompt... oh fuck I can't think like this', Star removed her fingers from her pussy, and let Red lick the juices from them. `Thank you for the update, first of all', Star Shadow said, addressing the tablet the update was emitting from.`That was excellent work in corrupting Zecora. One down, an entire country to go. Any way, I suggest working on AppleJack next. She can detect if someone is lying, and since Applebloom is her sister, well... lets just say it could blow our entire operation. Not to mention, corrupting an entire family AND one of the most profitable buisnesses in Ponyville? Phew! what a feat! And I know a few things about conquering planets... *sigh* Those tentacle beings were excellent in pleasures of the flesh... Any way, as I saying, the Apple family. Perhaps injecting some sort of aphrodisiac into the apples and then offering them to ponies you wish to corrupt? For instance, Cheerilee, giving an apple to the teacher is pretty common, and pretty easy to do! So either Apple jack or Cheerilee, those are my biggest concerns. Now then', Star sat up from the throne and stretched out her massive, feathery wings. `lets get out of this... Confining dress that I'm in'. Star removed the dress, to reveal she was wearing black and red lacy under wear, and see-through garter socks. `Red...', Star whispered sexily in Reds ear.`May I see that human form you've been working on?'.
Shit, just realised what a long comment this is! lso, slight typo with `Tirek' instead of `Big Mac'.
8173854 Depends if you mind fics where 'the bad guy wins' is something you don't want.
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Peace, Fimbulwinter. I was merely surprised. Your lesser kin are prone to outrageous egos, I've come to learn.
I must say, I wonder how far Zexis can go without the use of his powder... is there a point at which he is so convincing, he doesn't need it anymore? Still, for now, its use appears prudent.
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Indeed! I would wager most of Zecora's recipes are fairly free of side-effects. She was a healer, meaning to do no or little harm. At least her healing potion should work fine for us!
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What makes you think I would want Mac to barge in with that? Gradually is how Applejack's corruption should happen. That's why I'm againt leaving it solely to Big Mac; he is not in the right mindset for it, nor does he have the necessary arguments ready before Zexis teaches him. As for Applejack being able to tell lies, that's only a problem if Zexis or Mac start telling lies, not things they believe to be true! 8173691 Pointed this out as well. Our paths aren't that different if you look closely, my friend. I will consider your suggestions for Apple Bloom. They sound like a good way to make use of her talents.
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Luna... this is a problem indeed. We must pray we didn't alert her already, considering what Zexis did to Scootaloo.
Complete isolation will be difficult, but it's only the ideal. Like I said to 8173011 above, it's guidelines, a strategy. Divide and conquer will help us offset the main strength of the Elements. So, I propose we try to get ahead of the issue and leak to Applejack's friends that she wants to be alone for a while. That she needs to clear her head, prove to herself she can run things still. They would offer to help, but if we communicate in some way that Applejack doesn't want them for now, they are more likely to stay away. And Applejack herself is less likely to ask if she thinks her friends are busy with their own problems. Maybe we can create minor distractions for them... Either way, we can't keep them apart by force, but we can use Applejack's pride and self-reliance against her like this!
And using Apple Bloom against her as you mentioned is a wonderful idea! She'll be surrounded by ponies chipping away at her mental defences until they crumble. Once that happens, the second-most remote Element of Harmony is ours, and their power can no longer be used against us!
About Zexis' plant affinity: Another upside is him having a secure haven to fall back on if things in Ponyville go south. Even a powerful Alicorn like Twilight Sparkle prefers not to go traipsing in the Everfree, and that was before Zexis established a connection.
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Corrupting the Apples' apples... there is that. What else could there be? We know the Apple Clan has a history of magical food. Zap Apples are magic, even a family as hostile to magic as them embraced their power. Who knows what other recipes possibly lie forgotten in some nook in their farmhouse..?
Can't wait for Rarity and/or Sweetie Belle to be 'converted'; the former could then design lingerie to further objectify converted sluts.
Or Fluttershy, though Discord will be a pain in the flank to overcome (seriously, not even Celestia and Luna's combined efforts affected him all too much; they had to rely on the Elements of Harmony, something that won't exactly work for Zexis).
Pinkie Pie, on the other hand, could stand to be guzzling down some other, non-sugar, white substance, and adding the same white substance to any confections she sells to other mares. As long as said mares don't realise that the white substance isn't sugary icing, then they would start getting a taste for it. Start getting them accustomed to their new staple food, you know?
Getting Cheerilee and Mayor Mare would allow Zexis to surreptitiously add a more misogynistic tone at school; start off really low-key and not-at-all-obvious, then build it up over time or as more of the class is converted through other means. Plus, this is a school for foals, and foals are often more impressionable than adults, so it should be easier to 'reprogram' them.
Would Princess Cadence be able to sense the unnaturalness of these events? How forced the love and lust is? If so, she could eventually become a problem. If not...well, let's just say a ton of other fanfics display her open sex life. This could be enhanced here - make her the Royal Slut, with Shining Armor as her 'handler', so to speak. Of course, Twilight, Celestia and Luna would disagree about this; the former because they're her former-foalsitter and her brother, the latter two because Cadence is their 'niece'. As a result, this could be a nice 'what to do in the future' thing - if Cadence and Shining are converted prior to Sun and Moon, then they could be useful spies and sources of intel, aiding in Celestia's and Luna's downfall.
8174836 "Cadence is not a real concern, she's in the Crystal Empire. As noted, however, Luna might be given she seems to have spoken to or guided Applebloom in her dreams. I would be wary until we know how often this contact is.
"As I've stated earlier, I believe Discord to be the biggest immediate problem with Zecora dealt with, presuming Zexis ensures she stays dealt with. We have no real counter to him, as of yet, if he decides to muck with us for his own amusement."