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Good work, Zexis. Continue preparing the school for your... our... vision.
Consider starting off this new class with a short meal. You know, tea for all the good little students. It'll help them absorb what you have to say so much easier, and students love relaxing with tea and sweets in school.
As for the classes themselves, don't just make everything about sex education! Keep in mind what I suggested for you a while back in 8178267! This isn't just teaching them about sex, this is about changing Ponyville's culture with future generations! Your students need to internalise this so they replicate it wherever they go from here!
Also, now that Cheerilee is receptive to you, you may want to ask her about specific students and their situations, such as problems at homes and crushes and what have you. It's a shame you didn't already! Furthermore, find out who the members of the schoolboard are, they may become your targets if Cheerilee proves ineffective at keeping them off your back.
Progress has been achieved, and there is no major foreseeable conflicts. Perhaps its time to look into the options around us, casual meet ups with Spike, MAYBE Thunderlane, though to get to him his brother Rumble maybe the best avenue of attack if we need to make him submissive to your will. Spike for a casual greet, and perhaps a slight drug to let him express and speak freely with you, he will be useful asa informat, particuly about what Twilight and Starlight, are perhaps suspecting or thinking.
The school is going to be a great platform for us to work from, but it's going to take a lot more work to make it a stable platform. We need to make sure that not just cheerilee but any other teachers won't be a problem... and we should really work harder to make sure that Cheerilee's new perspective is reinforced for several days at least. Moreover having access to so many... malleable minds brings so many fun options into play, it would be such a great thing to assign some homework for everyone to write out some ways to venerate a 'randomly chosen' deity, and make it homework to pray to them every night for a week, maybe extra credit... Strangely I think we all know a good deity who needs a bit more veneration right about now. It could even help him by letting him 'teach' the class (with some strong suggestions or other ways to lower the willpower) about what that deities views on things are. It could also give him a believeable excuse if someone notices something about one of the children. ( "I'm sorry it was one of the many things we went over in class as an example, I have no idea why he got so fixated on it... intriguing ideas though don't you think?"). And he will need to be on top of making sure that changes in the children aren't noticed or they are seen as less important (Here everyone, lets make some traditional charms in arts and crafts (lust charms), to take home and give your parents! (or just give them some to take home and hang around the area). So I strongly recommend that aside from working with Applejack, we focus entirely on the school for a little while... with one small exception.
The exception would of course be the orphanage! If we have got control of the little fillies and colts at the school, and birdhoof has control of the orphans AFTER school, Isn't that a ready made pool of foals that we can work on at night or after school in order to start preparing them for their places? Being able to go a step farther with several of the others in the orphanage would also be a good reward for our orphanage caretaker as well, Loyalty needs to be rewarded occasionally, (and also gives us a fall guy in case everything goes really really bad as well.) Eventually being able to send a select 'clientele' to visit the new local sluthouse... I mean orphanage, to help with their corruption, as well as having a place to start setting up a breaking/training area in the basement of..... I can see the potential benefits there.
In general though let the other areas like spike and so rest for a bit.... I mean keep in contact occasionally... but lets focus on getting our first big plan working without any issues related to negligence or distractions... and making sure it is hidden and doesn't lead anyone back to us just in case they do find it.
Right now you are in a prime position, but you need to maintain a steady hand or it might all suddenly fall apart.
Big Mac has been placated a great deal now, but we need to make sure we don't lose any control. He's too strong and well connected with the elements to risk letting loose. Once you have completed Apple Bloom's programming, I suggest a slow but steady approach to corrupting Applejack. Interact with her regularly and use the exhausting farm work as an excuse to give her beverages to re-hydrate (laced with the ever so useful suggestion powder). She has a strong will and high ethics, so breaking her will have to be slow by necessity or she will fight back.
You should also make sure to keep an eye on Cheerilee as you begin implementing changes to the school. As the school teacher, parents know and trust her with their children. If she is seen behaving irregularly, it will gain notice quickly. However her connections to the school board will be extremely useful, particularly in regards to Spoiled Rich. If you can corrupt her, not only will you gain far more control over the school, but access to her wealthy bank account, and the ability to fund your efforts with far more ease.
The lecture was neat world-building but read too much like an info-dump to the readers than one aimed at the class. He shouldn't have just said "also the elements of harmony" and "also Twilight". He should have told the class there's an example in this very town of demigods, same for lesser gods, and let them make the connection/guess to engage the class.
Then again he may just be a crummy teacher.
Just saying this now you need to get Big Macintosh under your control, hes going to become a liability or a danger if he keeps thinking the way he is.
good shapter
Hmm an idea came to mind.
Making Sweetie Belle have a huge crush on Zexis :)
With the powder and pills and all that, he can make it so
Also he can rut her silly and fill her with his cum so much she will have a bulging cumfilled belly
and also it will create an opening to Rarity
That can lead to the corruption of the fashionitta
That can lead to her working place turning into a whore shack in secret
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Hmm can also image Nurse Redheart starting to replace constraptive medicine with fertility ones
Zexis don't see the point on having those constraptive medicine, sluts are ment to give birth to more sluts
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Hmm wonder how long it will take for Zexis to have a go with Mrs Cake and pump her full of his cum...
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Also suggstion of traits he can get. (thinking maybe middle or end game traits)
Musky scent: his member giving of a musky odor, making it harder for a mare to resits and also showing his virility.
Will go hoof in hoof with
Virility 200% upgrade: meaning he will have a much higher chance getting a mare pregnant with his foals. It will be even possible to have a fair chance getting an alicorn pregnant (as they are known to be hard to impregnate).
(extra: combined with the musky scent will have a x2 effect as the mares will smell his much potent sperm and having a higher chance subduing to lust)
Other traits/abbilites:
Gender bender potion: unlocking the knowledge to mae a stallion turned into a sexy mare.
can be a last resort or getting rid of a bothersome stallion that don't get with the program.
(the image also turning prince Shining into gleaming shield, when Zexis get that far) :)
Feminize potion: Taking this potion makes the pony's fetures over time looking more feminine. meaning, wider hips, plump lips, bigger tits, all that. can used to turned a mare sexier or a stallion into a more femcolt look.
(so can be used to make a stallion more sub or a plain mare sexier)
(the image in mind for example the filly Twist, plain looking but with the potion making her turned into a big titted beauty that will turn heads, haha can say it will be a sudden growth spurt, her petite A cup burst out to a D or higher over a week or so)
She don't mind as she is getting a lot of attention now from the colts and stallions :)
Well that is my rant of the things,
The mist rolls back to reveal a blue muscular dragon with a silvery white chest. His large cock bounces as he walks down the caves of his castle.
"Well Zelix is good to read what's happened to you. It seems like that little book didn't hurt you too badly. I hope that it may be of use in the future."
Waking down the hall, the blue dragon continues, "I do have to comment for you on how well your projects are progressing. It seems like Applebloom will be under yours and well.... Mac's soon enough. It's good to keep an ace in the hole, but you should personally check on how these adjustments are holding when Applebloom gets released or if AppleJack is noticing her sister is acting weird. If so, unleash Mac on her, and lots of hormone and trinkets."
"Trinkets!?!?!! Those should be able be able to upgrade soon. Maybe that book has some clues on how to do that."
"As for the hospital, it seems like Redheart is luring in some of the doctors and staff. I would recommend you corrupt them in person when the time is right. Some hormone pills with Red Heart's ass in there face may make them cum on the spot."
"As for the school, it's awesome. I do hope Pip is like my Car'Bunckle guard. When I allowed his more dominate side out, it was because most dragonesses picked on him. Now he is the most dominating dragon I have at my disposal. Keep on currying the students. Unfortunately the board will get involved soon. And I believe one Spoiled Rich may be on it. It may be the perfect chance to gain control of a large source of income. Money always helps."
"I know this will be shut down, but go to Twilights. See how Spike is doing, keep that connection open. But more importantly, see how that tracking spell is coming along. We don't want the princess to find Zecora without us fully breaking her."
"Well now if you want to continue, I got a special treat instore for me from my favorite Oracle slut."
Walking to one of the entertainment chambers the Northern Dragon Lord peers inside, seeing a jade scaled dragoness with emerald breast scales and F size tits.
"Fluorspar! It's good to see you. How has the training come along?"
The dragoness walks over to the Lord resting one of her claws on his massive pecs and the other one drifting down to her lords heavy ball sac.
"Quite well my lord. In fact she is going to break today. That is why I called you here. I thought you would love to see it." Fluorspar's claw starts to absentmindly fondling the blue dragons boulder size balls. "Maybe, it will finally help you relax. I swear the other girls and myself are missing the load of your usual orgasm. The last weeks have been hard. Haven't they?"
"Mmmmmm Yes, just a few set backs." The blue dragon groans his cock twitching from the dragoness' skilled claws.
"Oh look." The green dragoness speaks looking down from the vantage view.
The northern dragon lord looks from the vantage point into his harem chamber. An orange dragoness with black stripes has her claws wrapped around a dick between her legs. Her eyes glued to the sight of a white dragoness and a lavender dragoness grinding there dripping cunts together. The look of need and desperation on her face makes the blue dragon smile.
The moaning of the two dragoness's causes the dragon lords claws to move down towards his hardening cock, only to be blocked by a claw. Looking down he see the Oracle Slut on her knees her gaze lasting on his cock.
"My visions have shown me of her breaking. Let me take care of this." Giggling the dragoness finishes as her mouth wraps around the massive balck dick. "Enjoy the show"
"Ohhhhh." The Northern Lord moans. His moan is furthered echoed by the two dragonesses who are grinding against eachother with enough force to turn stones to dust.
"Enough!" A shout is heard from below. The stripped dragoness jumps to her feet and rushes towards towards the moaning dragonesses.
Yanking the topping white dragonesses ass higher, Tiger Agate hesitates for a moments as she realizes what she is about to do. With on last look at the tight ass I front of her the orange dragoness thrusts her hips and her new cock into the white dragoness dripping snatch. As the orange dragoness pulls out and into the bottom lavender one, all three start to moaning.
That and the skilled tounge dancing across his hard and aching cock causing Fimbulwinter's legs to start to buckle.
The mist rolls in as the Northern Lord praises his god, "Mighty Eros, thank you for this progress!!!!!"
An overall nice chapter, but I do have one major complaint: You keep making it so that those he corrupts are bitchy and cruel and mean. Those don't have to correlate with the job he's been assigned. Being lustful does not mean cruel, and honestly... I'm starting to get a bit tired of that pattern. It's irritating that that seems to be added when none, NONE of his suggestions should lead to such a lack of compassion or caring. Making them lustful is one thing, but heartless is another thing entirely.
Still though, other than that complaint, the writing is still well done overall. And it's interesting to see what ways you have the characters change over time.
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Keep in mind that currently the only bitchy and "evil" characters are Big Mac and Cheerilee. Redheart is more of a slut and Scootaloo utterly enslaved by her lust. When the story moves on and more characters get corrupted you will see more variety. I just wanted to move away a little bit from the more submissive females.
In-lore I would explain it that way, that Zexis is still very much his own person with own likes and flaws. While the suggestions influence his actions, they do not control him. He also hasn´t quite got the grip on controlling the outcome of his corruption. His handling of Big Mac shows that. The further he advances, the better he is gonna get at it.
8293216
That still doesn't explain the bitchiness. It's very out of character for Cheerilee, even with what you had Zexis do to her. She's originally one of the kindest mares in town. Having her not care about them would be apathy, not cruelty. Yet, after his influence, she starts talking about them like they're trash. Even WITH Zexis' influence, this is very out of character. Plus, Cheerilee's special talent and desires are to help teach and raise young kids through teaching, and none of what Zexis did there should have altered that. Heck, if anything, I'm surprised you had her give up so quickly on the effects he did apply.
8293188
I think that's because we as hitting corruption not will or libido
8293233
From what's been shown and described so far, that's not how the corruption works here. The corruption is meant to make them more lustful and horny. Not cruel and heartless. Those are two different effects, and shouldn't correlate here.
8293238
Its mostly due to the pills, which lower the inhibitions for certain emotions. Now, when you are manipulating subject under their influence to feel rage or jealousy, then this will reveal some ugly feelings that are usually held back.
Everyone has the potential to be cruel or evil, but our moral code and inhibition prevent us acting on these impulses. Take them away and you have sociopaths or "corrupt" people.
Zexis lead Cheerilee to feel jealous of Scootaloos attention. There are also other factors in play, that led to become like this, that will be revealed in due time. There is a reason for that transfomation and I put in in there for a specific reason.
If you don´t want Zexis to do that anymore or corrupt people in specific manner, than tell him that. Simple as that. And Corruption-Stat always makes characters more evil. It is an indication how strong or weak their moral codes are. If you don´t want to turn evil, then try to go for a different route. Zexis current corruption tools favor that approach a lot.
8293254
Very well. I shall do that then.
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The shadowy figure appears once again, mists parting as he steps through his shadowy domain to view upon the scene from his mist formed portal. He frowns and shakes his head.
"Zexis, the methods you are doing right now... are likely to run you down the path of failure and hardship. Which is a shame, since I do support the grand goal you've been assigned. But Big Mac so far is a prime example of just how bad your current methods are running. ...thankfully, it shouldn't be hard to adjust things."
With a wave of his hand, the shadowy figure causes diagrams to show some of the ones he's corrupted, with arrows pointing to their new selves... with devil horns over Cheerilee and Big Mac, and an empty heart over Redheart.
"...The way you're going about things is spreading evil, which is the exact reason Celestia opposed your master to begin with. LUST is not a bad thing... but when it is tied in with cruelty and heartlessness, it causes problems in the long term."
Shaking his head, he then nods, "Besides... if you're supposed to be spreading the good things about succumbing to lust, what does your current methods show? It shows its evils, and others are more likely to go against that. No... you need to boost their lust in a way that supports goodness and love."
An image of Celestia coming down and splitting up individuals appears. "Love and lust are often coincided, and Celestia has tried to cut off Lust due to fear of the downsides that may come with it. THAT is an evil in itself. But she did so... due to fearing the exact results your current reckless actions have caused, which will no doubt gain you many an enemy."
With another wave, a table and chair appear formed from the shadowy mass around the figure, whom then sits down and crosses his hands as he looks at the screen. "Look... the best way to acchieve your goal is to make others WANT to join it, rather than force it on them. Otherwise, you'll have to forcefully change others one by one, which will prove a tiring effort in all. However..."
With a wave of the hand, an image shows a mare going around, giving sexual favors freely, then lending a hand to the various stallions she helps with whatever jobs they're doing. "If you change things to where sexual favors are non-invasive, filled with love and support, with lust being just another way of bringing others closer together, many are more likely to support it then."
An image then shows some of his corrupted victims, how they just have sex and then ignore the pain and suffering of others, even of those that they're having sex with. "But... if you leave your current victims as is... sure, lustful acts will occur, but they'll also spread bitterness and resentment, and eventually, the festering wound that'll cause to society will no doubt backlash onto you."
With suddenly glowing eyes, the figure then looks at the screen again, looking at Zexis while a screen of his time teaching has occurred. "You should know this even better now after today. You saw yourself just how enjoyable it was to teach others and getting positive reactions from supporting them and helping them improve. THAT is an example of what I'm suggesting you to take your efforts towards: don't make Lust a thing that one should 'just do'. Tie it in with positive support and enjoyment, happiness and societal support. If you make it into something that one is meant to enjoy and spread, then others may partake simply due to the appeal it spreads."
Holding his chin, the figure ponders before nodding, "Almost like a religion in a way, but without nagging others to join. Merely showing them what the potential happiness it can bring. All you need are some examples and having them spread it privately until others are happily gossipping about how much doing so had helped them feel better, feeling free and non-suppressed, yet happy to be mutually helping one another 'feel better'. In this way, you can likely gain those willing to follow you without the mind control methods you're using as well."
Standing up, the figure dispels the shadowy images and structures around him. "Well, that is all I suggest for now. I hope it aids you in the long run."
The figure pauses, then exclaims, "Oh! And make sure you cause such changes to Cheerilee as well. The town knows of her as being a kind and caring teacher. What you just did... made her a bitch. The sudden personality change... that will cause several alarm bells in countless ponies' heads if you don't fix that soon. ...Anyways, that is all. Good luck."
Well, Cheerilee broke surprisingly fast - not that I'm complaining. Maybe she could be useful in pointing out corruptible teachers, or keeping certain students after class without raising suspicion. Could be useful; of course, that's after you make sure she's on your side 100%.
Also, see if you can dig up some information on this school council - if Zexis can work his magic on them, we'd be able to turn the school into a veritable breeding ground for corrupt students (literally and metaphorically). We could pass all sort of new clubs, classes, and extracurricular activities that would expand our influence; and who knows, maybe we could even corrupt a few teachers along the way, prepare for the next generation of corruptible foals!
As for Applebloom, I would see if Cheerilee could have her stay after class for a little bit, to 'check up on her' after her stint in the hospital; if Zexis tags along, this could be a possible opportunity to make sure she's fully corrupted, or finalize her corruption once and for all! I would also recommend beginning to work on the other hospital staff - maybe have them (or her) mix some hormone pills or something in with a patient's medicine, then have Redheart give them the 'special treatment' to lower their inhibitions toward sex and raise their lust; finding and recruiting a pharmacist would also work.
8293304
I will agree with one point: Taking away Cheerilee's love of teaching, making her uncaring towards her charges, is a mistake. One that should not have happened.
Zexis, you will fix this.
Maybe you needed to make her more pliable first before planting the right ideas, sure, but it'll be more effective, less suspicious, and overall easier if Cheerilee wants to see her students grow into the sort of studs and sluts we envision. She'll get you better results if she's invested in her work and the rest of the town won't notice any sudden changes.
Ultimately, though, while love is nice and can create powerful bonds, you are coming from a view of dominance and submission. If the fillies end up with a colt-master they like, good! If not, you know back home a Zebra mare will come to love her master quickly, as the love of being owned is at her core.
... Zexis. Injustice wants you to do something for her.
You've watched many of your students now. Shy Rumble, smart Button Mash, Pipsqueak the colt with a Luna fixation, Snips and Snails the looked-down-on class clowns; Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle, Diamond and Silver Rich Bitches, Lispy Twist with terrible hair, Dinky the queit one, the puppy-loving buzzer from South Amareica...
She wants you to picture them in your mind. Line them up. Put them in the pairs or goups you think fit them. And then, imagine them like you really want them to interact.
Giggles. Moans. Slaps on cheeks—both kinds. Reddened, quivering rumps raised in the air as the fillies show how enticing they can move so one of the boys will claim them. Smiles and gags and ropes and the knowledge that this is a possible future.
She wants you to picture it and tell us.
The translucent being once more appears before you with the dark blue unicorn beside him. "Things are shaping up quite nicely." you hear accompanied by some soft laughter coming from the translucent being. "A great idea creating an entire class for re-education at a certain time each day. It leave much room for other project while being able to keep tabs on an entire class. But now is the question what to do in these classes? Well I think one of that old suggestion from 8292361 has much potential and to quote him directly
Though I would like to add my own suggestions onto his idea. For one we could use this re-education class to also show them how this could result in a mutually beneficial and healthy relationship." The translucent being pauses to pet the unicorn next to him, the unicorn clearly showing appreciation using cute cat like purs.
"Though more importantly, in my opinion, we shouldn't separate the class into two groups based on sex but on character. By now Zexis should know enough about each student to do this. Also to clarify by character I mean their intelligence, how dominant they are, magical capabilities and athletic capabilities. I wish for the fittest to learn to become dominant and the weakest links to learn their place. Snips and Snail are good examples of weak links that don't deserve to call another below them. This type of teaching will rout out problems years down the line. We should not forget that we wish to corrupt a nation. To do that the society within it should be sustainable and that may not be achievable if we just create a patriarchy with all males being above females. if you get a situation where the strong and capable are below the weak problems are sure to arise. Sure our corruption will make it more stable but as we saw with Redheart she wasn't all to keen on listening to Birdhoof and only was brought low again because we intervened. One thing our corruption will ensure though is that when the fittest rule none of them will question the system or take pity on the weak because due to the corruption they will automatically rationalize it as their right to rule."
"Another problems with a truly patriarchal society is that females with talents will never be able to truly express them. many females will probably get masters who don't want their pets to be better then them in any way and will try to show their superiority in any way possible. this will harm the nation in the long term. It will simply mean many will never reach their full potential. something that will give other nations the opportunity to invade said weakened nation with much more ease. giving half the nation an inferior position will have negative effects in the long run. be this inferiority caused directly by us or as a side effect because of their new lifestyle. If we make all females nothing but sluts they will be treated as such especially with what we seam to be doing to all the males."
"Besides we can use this class as an experiment for both if people are interested in that and see what works best."
Just after he stops you hear a soft female voice" master may I add something." after a small pause a "yes" can be heard and she gave her master a soft smile after witch she said "thank you master."
"8293304 has also said much that has an effect on the society we wish to create in the long run and which is important in the lessons es well. Teaching the good parts of what is deemed sinful to the foals and though acting harsh can yield swift results adding virtue to sin can give many benefits in the long run. for example if somehow all the corruption was removed from a character and they suddenly knew what had happened was the result of not their own choice but due to drugs, magic and true clearcut corruption they won't have any reason to not try and fight us with everything they have. but if we teach them that our way will make them even better and even more importantly if it is their choice to follow us. No matter what happens they will at the very least have doubts whether our side might be the side they should be on. Especially if it forces our opponents to use more dubious methods themselves and we can use that to paint ourselves in an even better light. When we start spreading our ideology beyond this town we need to start worrying about our pr and due to the purity laws ponies will need to see taking up our ideas as a risk worth taking. playing into the way ponies are right now is an important part of swaying them to our side especially when the other side has made this nation darn safe and nice place to live, we now need to top that." She takes a deep breath and continues. "To finish this of I would like to also advise experimentation with the different stiles of corruption depending on the result we want. Though in my opinion our current form of corruption, looking at what happened to Big Mac and Cheerilee, won't work for very long. The more we corrupt the more things we need to take care of and the less time we have to micromanage. Also if the corruption doesn't have such extreme results we would have less need to worry about being discovered. if the corruption is more discreet even Celestia won't immediately notice somethings up even when she is having a small tea party with a corrupted princess Twilight." after she finishes she bows and says "Thank you for taking the time to listen to this humble pet."
The translucent being speaks up again. "On a last note we should probably check up on the farm gain as was planned and keep tabs on all our projects after classes. Though I strongly believe that the school has become our priority. Unless Big Mac does something stupid." the vision starts to fade slowly before you hear. "Oh and before I forget, good luck Zexis and remember we will be watching."
The vision fades further and eventually turn to black
One orange and blue light highlight a figure sitting down and adjusting his tie as he sighs.
"Zexis, above all else figure out what that book is, and what it does. We can not afford a wildcard in our deck right now.
"We must also punish Scootaloo for her indiscretions. Having our plans discovered because she's not keeping things quiet will not help us in the slightest.
"While the plan for 'sex education' is sound I do, honestly, worry about what sort of attention we will get. Cherrilee put two and two together quite quickly, if we do not allow some time for things to calm down this will likely occur once more; and the observer won't see fit to tel us about it.
" Additionally 8293304 has a point. While getting both Big Mac and Cheerliee corrupted and brought to our cause was necessary, their massive shifts in personality which can get us caught. Ponies will catch on if we don't mitigate this. We should also look to another way of... compelling people that's more precise like a scalpel and less messy like a sledgehammer.
"Until next time, we will be watching."
The lights shut off.
A dark being casts a spell to whisper to Zexis… You feel an aura of malevolence and evil so strong that it makes the other ‘demons’ pale in comparison.
Lust is one of the seven deadly sins, or so it is said. If there is a god of lust you worship, I wonder, wouldn’t it make sense for him to be in alliance with the other dark gods? Greed, Pride, Wrath, forinstance. The essence of corruption is more than just lust, after all…Wouldn’t it be nice to have these beings in your debt? Surely your actions up to now have pleased not only eros, but those other gods as well.
Zexis... Don't listen to the angel on your shoulder... keep spreading the true corruption and darkness. Make your evil cult, and lure ponies in with the pleasures of the flesh. *insane laughter*. You don't need a lot of moral justification for this. It is in your nature to corrupt those around you! lead ponyville into darkness, and then... the world... Every type of imaginable corruption should be imprinted on the land, spanning the smallest foal to the largest dragon! *evil power seems to pulse in time with the beings words*
That being said, you don’t have to make every single pony change like Cheerilee or big mac, in fact so far my favorite corruption has been Scootaloo’s, though… *he pauses thoughtfully* maybe that is just because Scootaloo has been one of the ones I most wanted to see corrupted. I am so looking forward to the schools’ corruption. It would be so nice to observe the methods our precious Scootaloo is using on the other foals in person, wouldn’t it Zexxxxisssss… *he projects thoughts of this to Zexis, planting the idea in his mind*. Maybe you could use your power as a teacher to lure in some foals along with Scootaloo and watch as she slowly corrupts them … *his eyes gleam lustfully*
But certainly, we don’t need powerful ponies like Celestia or even Twilight on us just yet. By all means, for important ponies that are in the public eye, subtle methods should be used. and certainly, we need to make sure cherilee’s corruption is not suspected. So for now we are in agreement on that at least.
Oh, and one other thing. You should drop thunderlane. He obviously isn’t dominant enough if he refused rainbow dashs' advance… how is this idea instead? *projects thoughts of Rainbow Dashie sadistically chasing a tiring Thunderlane who is frantically running away... until she finally catches up, binding him, smothering him, using him like a toy to pleasure herself and her friends*.
Rainbow dash would be a great ally to us if you could unlock her dark side, wouldn’t she? And it would teach thunderlane a friendship lesson about kicking people out of his house… *smiles evilly* Rainbow dash should be very easy to corrupt now that you have Scootaloo… and she is so prideful and arrogant as well, isn't she...? I am sure that deep down she could be convinced that males should worship her… Corrupt her Zexis!
In fact, not only would this be immensely enjoyable, it may be a higher priority than anyone has realized, as scootaloo is a close social connection to rainbow dash... and rainbow dash might be wondering what is going on with her
*the presence fades, though still it watches*
8292488
The orphanage is indeed a good place to ply Zexis' craft. Seeing how Birdhoof has been abusing the kids there for years and nothing came of it, they're also a ready-made pool of test subjects.
Zexis depends on two things mainly so far: The hormone pill and suggestion powder. Both are powerful, but they're only two things. Why not look into more traditional potions as well? Healing draughts, potions to increase speed, strength, glibness; potions that let you see or sense magic; potions that protect your sleep and dreams; potions that animate plants to do your bidding, for a while at the very least; potions using a bodypart of another pony (like a hair) that let you see their memories or deepest desire or resentments; and of course, powders and liquids that make the vistim drowsy, forgetful, sleepy, block their limbs or magic.
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Hm. Wasted potential is indeed not helpful.
Perhaps Zexis should work out a system where slaves are still encouraged to find their most fitting skill and engage in it for the betterment of society as a whole. He, Zexis, made the Flower Sisters his property, but they still work as they had before. Likely even more efficiently. The only problem is Roseluck. Another of Zexis' blunders. As long as the slaves want to work, this New Equestria will be stronger than before. Tamed beasts are a useful foundation for a fortress or a siege! As for putting the stallions in charge of the mares... Eros has proven it can create a stable, powerful whole. Only the intervention of several demigods put a stop to it. And we will make sure its lore will survive, one way or another. Our corruption will never die.
The goal should not be making them just sluts and studs. It should be making them sluts and studs and useful members of society. That includes taking feedback from minions into account.
I would not so hasty to dismiss Snips and Snails either. Snails has strong magic and Snips is smarter in an unusual way than many give him credit for.
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I suggested above using potions with old Zebrican recipes to show the imbiber what another saw in the past, or what they most wish for. Such intimate information might come in handy for manipulating others without drugging them up directly first, no?
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The biggest problem I see with your plans for the society we will want to create is how long it will sustain itself. We will never be able to control all and corruption might effect different ponies differently and we also don't know what happens when the next generation is born. Also I should inform you that Eros has not necessarily put males above females. To be exact he has said
I agree with Eros that equality is not of great value besides all having equal chance to show their superiority to others. If they can't show that they are fit to be on top they will be put below all who surpass them. I value intelligence, power in any form and charisma those who lack these traits are to be put in their place below those that do posses them.
The idea of using the orphanage that 8292488 brought up in combination with the school classes might allow us to experiment with both ideologies. One class gets it drilled in their heads that males are supposed to lead like you suggested and another class will get thought my ideology. The orphanage will be the perfect place to see the results of both classes on the daily lives of the foals. All we need to do is ensure that Birdhoof either doesn't interfere at all with the experiment or is shown exactly how to reinforce the specific ideologies in the specific foal.
Something we will also need to discuss is how we keep the foals from telling their parents what they did in class, at least when we get to the more questionable lessons.
Also we should go into greater detail on many things Celestia probably hasn't really allowed to stay in the curriculum. Things such as sex-ed beyond the simply you should wait with sex until married nonsense. Again I will refer to
8293304's ideas on how to do things relating to sex. We should use one male and one female volunteer to explain how to best please the other sex. Teaching the foals the best parts of lust and all the good feelings that come with it. Such classes will make the transition from uncorrupted to corrupted smooth and very much in our full control so we don't get any extreme cases where the corruption goes to far and might become a problem to hide.
Other classes in which the body is explored in high detail might also be useful especially if you wish to hide your true intentions. An example might be that you want to explain how muscles work by having one of the foals lie on a table and pointing out what muscles do what. Such a class can be a stepping stone to the more sexual classes and such. Hiding our true intentions beneath certain classes that aren't inside the curriculum can be used to make the foals more comfortable and ensure that they have something to tell their parents that can hide what we are actually doing.
Rope tying classes and the trust exercises that Derpsby mentioned are also good things that will allow the foals to tell their parents that they did nothing out of the ordinary in our classes when they did something sexual because it was so similar to what they were doing before as long as they don't go into to much detail, which most kids don't, they will never give us away.
8294152
To be honest I completely forgot about that book. We might indeed want to look into that......
I hope I'm not forgetting anything ells
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*A fiery tornado erupts out of nowhere and dissipates to reveal Dovahkinn the Nephalem*
"I agree with those two possible traits later on in the story "
Musky scent: his member giving of a musky odor, making it harder for a mare to resits and also showing his virility.
Virility 200% upgrade: meaning he will have a much higher chance getting a mare pregnant with his foals. It will be even possible to have a fair chance getting an alicorn pregnant (as they are known to be hard to impregnate).
(extra: combined with the musky scent will have a x2 effect as the mares will smell his much potent sperm and having a higher chance subduing to lust)
"Also Zexis, you need to fix Cheerilee's love for teaching children or else the council will grow suspicious. Also I see potential allies such as Pipsqueak, Rumble and Button Mash since Cheerilee admitted that she wants to get intimate with her male students, probably allow an after school class teaching about the pleasures of sex but you have to make the students feel comfortable and open minded.
"Another thing is Big Mac and Spike, you need to do something to keep Big Mac in check so he doesn't he doesn't do anything drastic, plus I'm curious about how you both will break Applejack. And for Spike, you need to hangout with him more often so his inner dragon will stay on the surface and probably allow him to have a go at Starlight Glimmer. Also it's possible to make a pill that would enhance a female's endowments, probably bigger breasts and thicker, childbearing hips and a plumper ass. If you could, give it to Scootaloo to make her more attractive for the colts. "
" But in other words great progress. Well, have to go now."
* The Nephalem disappears in a fiery tornado and vanishes in thin air *
Deep underground in what is commonly known as "The basement". Siting in the glow of a computer screen in otherwise complete darkness, is a...
"Hmmmmmmmm AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH! YES! I have at last completed my medi-master-ation! Now lets see what has happened on the Internet. A email from Eros god of corruption?! AND IT IS ALMOST 10 MOTHS OLD!!!! Holy fuck what have I been missing!? A lot it seems hmm..."
*After some long and hard reading and more*
"Interesting... And kinky... Yes... You poor faggots are in desperate need of some autism to guide you to victory."
*Entering incognito mode*
"I have informed Lord Kek that I am temporarily leaving Kekistan to volunteer in this struggle and lend you my god given autism. My Lord Kek wishes to inform you that he as declared neutrality to this cause but is allowing me to volunteer as the current struggle against the normies has calmed somewhat."
"So then Zexis. Let us start with what I think is the most pressing matter: Princess Twilight and Starlight Glimmer.
Current situation: TL:DR, Bitches will find us out if we don't do something!
The spell that is in the works currently that has the potential to track Zecora wherever she is as well as to end our mission if left alone for to long. As cutie marks has the ability to change with corruption it is the very real possibility to change back. Twilight Sparkle is intelligent, curious and has direct communication with Celestia, it is not recommended to let her find Zecora as of now.
Recommended course of action: TL:DR, Get smart, get charming, fuck the spell up then fuck them up!
It is imperative for you Zexis to improve your intelligences as first priority, then as second priority is charisma. The intelligence is required to understand and then sabotage the spell and instead make it suggest her as dead or target something else to chase, preferably something that is hard to catch in order to increase time to prepare. Current information about the Everfree forests biome is lacking to specify preferred creature to track. Charisma is required to get close to the princess Twilight. Current charm level appears to be enough but should be increased if situation allows. Princess Twilight appears to be approachable. Background as nerdy, introverted and alone suggest possibility to easily charm, befriend and possibly romance into corruption. WARNING: Princess Twilight as close relations with Celestia. Risk of discovery possible. NOTE: Castle is form the tree of harmony, recommend going on trips outside of the castle with princess Twilight if romancing her.
Precaution for main action: TL:DR, get the Starlight cunt out of the way.
Starlight Glimmers as developed a suspicious attitude towards you Zexis. Possible reasons: 1.She noticed the book you stole was missing and suspects you. 2. When Spike talked it out your involvement was mentioned. Starlight has the possibility of hindering any progress of sabotage of the spell and relationship building with princess Twilight.
*Autism levels low. Requires recharg* *Goes out with socks and sandals. Feeds on cringe. Autism recharging*
Analyzing possible actions: TL:DR, Get information on her faggot.
Violent: Powerful unicorn, possibility for ambush low, Big macs strength useless unless ambush. Longterm absence will be noticed. Possible use of Memory Changer Potion, requires another breaking to activate. Suggestion powder, possible immunity if knowing of stolen book.
Bribe: Desires unknown, possible desire for control and/or forgiveness. Information required. Dairy reading suggested if exists.
Persuade: Intelligent and suspicious. Information of origins of suspicion required. Possible romance if suspicion can be removed?
Information required in order to make informed decision. Recommend first talking to her for information (use charm faggot! I don't know how to talk to a girl!). If unsuccessful finding diary or other written text about her. If unsuccessful, talk to Princess Twilight, Spike, Trixie and/or Maud in that order for information.
Spike situation more difficult. Corruption locked but lust almost full. Possible lust corruption if allowed to indulge. Better relations required in order to safely introduce to the slaves. Suggestion powder possible alternative.
Information about princess Twilight and Starlight required in order to make informed decision.
Current mission objective: Gather more corruption points.
Possible targets in priority numbers: 1. The school. Current situation stable. Refers to other faggots for detailed plans. *Autism levels low*
2. Apple family. Big macs loyalty dependent on status of family. Recommend Zexis prosed with own plan.
3. Mr. Cake. Precaution for Pinkie Pie. Pinkie has the potential to be very dangerous. If time allows planting a distraction for her to give you breathing room.
4. Thunderlane. Possible strong ally. Analyzing corruption possibilities: TL:DR, Get information from Rumble or drug the faggot.
Violence: Soldier training, Big mac required as backup if fighting. Threaten to blackmail with nurse Redheart. Warning: Lie detectors a strong possibility. Suggestion powder to corrupt and to gather information.
Birbe: Free time with slaves weak and risky possibility. Unknown desires for Rainbow Dash
Persuade: To strong willed and Rainbow Dash to sensitive a subject.
Recommend talking to Rumble about his brother to gain information or using suggestion powder in order to gain information. If proven infective usage of force to extract information coupled with suggestion powder to remove memories. Note: Very risky. Force should only be used if no alternative has been discovered.
*Autism levels critical*
FUCK! I guess I have to save my theory to kill Discord for later. This will be all for now.
*Closing incognito mode. Deleting browser history*
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Note to the author: Hello! Great story you have here! I am looking forward to see how it goes . But I have some questions: What difficulty are we on? I remember you saying that the elements are "mid-level". How many levels are there? How far are we allowed to go? Right now we are in Ponyville but how far can we go outside of it and were do you think we will have to go? If we get a game over do we get a respawn and can start again? How far are we allowed to branch? Right now we have some "missions" so to speak but can we start new ones like with Lyra and Bon Bon?
Keep doing what you do!
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Well, currently we are around level 20 on a scale 0 - 80. How far up the story will go depends greatly on your actions. If you play your cards right, you can "win" before getting to a confrontation with the "Big End Boss" aka Celestia. If you fuck up, the difficulty can spike much faster than expected.
Leaving Ponyville will happen, I will come to that later. It is going to happen around midway of the story and won´t say more than that.
Branching is more or less your choice, what you recommend. Currently people here have aggreed to complete the hospital and school and then moving on to Applejack, before starting new project (if nothing goes wrong....muahahahahaha). If you disagree or want Zexis to look for someone specific then post in you suggestion and if you are lucky, it is going to get picked.
A room filled to the brim with looms appeares on the Corruptor, a single figure standing in the center surrounded by the many strings.
The looms of fate spin their tale and the master of strings watches on.
Well done with the schoolmare, well done with the farmer girl, but the threads that connect them bind many together.
We are in need of more than allies and conspirators. We need a partner, one who shares in Zexis gifts of the god of corruption.
Creating an avatar will consum vast amounts of energy and draw eyes upon the caster, but we already have a fresh willing body.
the Everfree Will is cautious of Zexis, but angered at the zebra mare for enslaving him. With Twilight seeking out Zecora and their chance of discovering the truth, seek an alliance with the forest, corrupted by the great Eros and offer the spirit the broken body as a vessel.
Zecora will become the patsy of the corruption that has effected Ponyville, and the forest will be given what it seems to desire most...To be forever free and to grow.
The threads have spun their tale since time began, to see them desire an action is refreshing, may the future they weave come to pass.
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:)
Agree with the pill that will make a mares assets bigger :)
Hmm maybe can over time give it to the fillies in the class, so making them more sexy
Can image that they will in secret flirt and seduce the stallions or colts in Ponyville
So the first can be the cmc that will get a upgrade :)
Hmm can agree that Cheerilee need to show some restrain or moer secret behaviour
But can also see her for example if she walks in on Zexis as he is getting a blowjob from a filly
She will just walk up to the filly and press the filly's head down more on his cock, deepthroating him
"Learn to suck right slut, you need to take as much as you can down his throat."
Something like that
Hmm Zexis can if Spike not is coperative can maybe turn him into a slut instead
Either a cockloving female looking femboy or a busty dragoness :)
He can use potions and such to slowly turn the little drake into that if so
Can also serve as a warning for other allies what can happen if they cross Zexis
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Taking care of Applejack can be an idea with pumping her full of lustpotions
or maybe getting her drunk and seem to think she fucked her brother that way, so some blackmail
The screen flickers, revealing the catgirl known as Lady Catherine. She seemed proud, dancing around the room like a graceful ballerina, her cat tail spinning like a ribbon behind her.
"Little Zexis has improved from that rash zebra we started with! He's grown so much! If he keep on this track, our goal will be reached!"
She stops in her tracks, suddenly becoming serious. She walks to her desk and opens her books.
"Now, back to planning. Staying on the path we're on is the best decision. Stay low and be careful. Watch every move you make and iron out your current project before moving on. Applebloom and Big Mac are going well, and we're finally making a move on the school. And I must say, I rather like the suggestions 8292361 has made. Trust exercises and some tea before class. Pairing fillies and colts into awkward situations where there must be complete trust between them to get out. And who doesn't love some tea and snacks before class?
"However, 8292995 is right. We need to keep an eye on Twilight, Spike and Starlight. If only to check on that tracking spell. Looking for more opportunities to corrupt them is also good, since Spike's progress has regressed. Starlight also seemed suspicious of us, so we get on her good side. She is a powerful unicorn who can match Twilight so she is very dangerous if we're on her bad side. Be careful Zexis."
The screen flickers off, leaving the maiden to her books.
The mist rolls back to reveal a muscular nude dragon, sitting at a table, looking over a roll of parchment.
"I guess it has been a while since I have commented on other viewers comments. Let me see here......."
"8292361, I agree about Zelix needing to ask Cheerlie about which students to focus on. I would personally say, Zelix needs to ask which colts did Scootaloo suck off. Best to focus on making sure those boys don't blab. On that note. Zelix!!! You need to correct Scootaloo here, she can only suck off the boys during the new class, not just randomly at recess. "
"8292381, I agree with you about Spike. Visit him, and check on Twilight's SPELL!!!!!"
"8292488, the school is definatley a place where we can mold the community. I may have mentioned it earlier, but I say one day for arts and crafts, lets make all the little colts and fillies make Lust Trinkets and give it to their parents. That way more ponies would start to be corrupted by there magic. I wonder though.... Which stat will the affect? Corruption? Lust? Will? I want to know so Zelix may update it soon."
"8292691, I agree with Big Mac. We can not simply drop the Apple Family now, Like we are doing with Spike. AppleJack is going to take a while to break, at least according to Nohen. So we have to visit regularly. If not, all of the hard work will go down the drain, and we will have a loose corrupted cannon, that may target Zelix for revenge, or for any reason. On that note, we should corrupt some police ponies, just in case one of our cannons accidentally get loose and causes problems."
"8292831, I love your ideas. The Musty scent is what Fluorspar has, or at least she has pheromones, that really make my solders cream themselves whenever she walks by. As for the feminization potion, that would be great to use, maybe slip it into some ponies drink and watch them get firm asses, and big breast, or maybe even more submissive. That would be a good potion as well.... Maybe affecting will?"
"8293304, While I agree that there are bad sides to corruption, the fact is it is simply lowering inhibition. To be honest I see your point though. If corruption, the lack of morals and regards to law were to break, then my kingdom would enter a worse revolt than it is in now.... The only reason why my corrupted subjects haven't fallen in to lawlessness is because of strong will we northern dragon posses. So while I was able to break out lust, the law of society have been maintained.... I have to be careful in corrupting the southern dragons then. They aren't as strong willed and it could lead to a big revolt if the corruption makes them forsake the word of reason and law, well the all except the sex laws. Those are just stupid!!!"
"8293562 is right. Cheerlie needs to be passionate about teaching. Sure teaching girls how to be sluts is what we want her to passionate about.... Maybe she is acting that way because remember, she is jealous of Scootaloo, and how she has the boys attention as she sucks them off. Maybe Cheerlie's cutiemark will change once she get to have sex with the budding studs and then that will make her new passion for teaching emerge. Maybe the fix is as simple as that."
"8293647, To add to the classes ideas. I say have it be one class, where both genders participate. Maybe one day have it be about bondage, another blowjobs, Wednesday eating out dragonesses, Thursday Torture, Friday Foreplay.... YES FOREPLAY!!!!!! Trust me, I can corrupt a dragoness more easily during Foreplay as I twerk and touch every part of them until they are a whimpering puddle of scales begging for my cock."
"8295418, I would like to welcome you to our circle of viewers. I hope you don't enter my kingdom while incognito or I'm going to have to send Zircon or Obsidian after you. I can't wait for future comments."
"8295563, I would say, use the suggestion powder. She needs to become more submissive to her brother, to make sure Big Mac's loyalty is cemented. That means..... NO HORMONE PILLS!!!!! Guys, if we raise her corruption, and lower her inhibitions, that stubbornness is going to get worse and Mac and her are going to but heads.... So we need to slip the powder to her, and then make sure her will drains till nothing is left. Then she will be the perfect bitch for Big Mac, as per his desires and to make him our permanent com-padre."
"8295700, THANK YOU!!!! Not many commenters have mentioned the need to check up on her!! THANKS for the support. I hope Zelix follows our suggestions and see about the spell. Did intelligence get upgraded from the last time we viewed in on Zelix?."
"Well that it for now.... Lets see, which Lord should I focus on next... I know Zircon will be happy with I focus on Cadwell...."
The mist rolls in as the Northern Dragon Lord pulls of a map of his kingdom.
Insane laughter can be heard in the foul depths of the warp. These alights where eminating from the jaws of a particular Lord of Change. Once more was he hunched over his cosmic pool watching the events unfold before him, leaning casually on his staff of chaos.
"A sheer stroke of brilliance on your part for adding safety switches in poor little applebloom's head. Worthy of Lord Tzeentch himself."
The creature cackled once more as it's sharp claws slid teasingly down the back of a Fiend of Slaanesh it was sitting by its legs. It let out a pleased hum as it's Lord let a thoughtful one.
"But of course Scootaloo is quite concerning. What has Birdhoof been doing if not satisfying her? Or his spy network? We need someone inside the castle more than ever even if it is just a recording artifact or device. Starlight and Twilight are among the smartest being in Equestria and they must be taken into consideration with every move we make lest we be sniffed out and the great game brought to a close."
The creature rose and turned to place its taloned hands on a board with a map of ponyville and several pieces on it. Several pieces where pink unlike the dull grey ones around them. The daemon picked up one such dull one and examined it. It represented Applejack.
"This one will be a tough nut to crack but with an element in our pocket our power should increase exponentially and deal a blow to Twilight's overall power if she is anything like the ruinous powers now."
The bird drake daemon's face twisted into a massive grin.
"If these gods do work like me and mine they can be weakened once their pawns and subjects are yours. Luna can be delt a blow to her power before conquest and once ours can be sharply increased to help topple Celestia. But that is end game. Still I do like that one dragon's suggestion. Give the spirit of the everfree a body to inhabit. A freshly broken mare probably. Strike a bargain and you have an invaluable ally. Soon ponyville itself maybe surrounded in allies. The Everfree, the school and its children, sweet apple acres, a perfect tetrad of corruption really. Cheerily has the school on lockdown and Birdhoof has the orphanage so no doubt will the future generation be tainted beyond hope, the hospital too is a very strong foothold as everyone goes in for a checkup at some point or another. Fuhehehe. This is quite exciting."
The creature opened up multiple portals in its cavernous home showing multiple images around the town as it's six eyes darted around rapidly to peer at it all.
"Still not to sound like a broken record but I heavily insist on having Zexis' intelligence increased. After all wars are won with brains. Hannibal didn't beat the romans into submission but outwitted them. May I also add a suggestion? Create a pathogen or something minute similar to one."
The creature held up and examined a pink vial held daintily between its claws.
"A virus or a potion manufactured to send the target into a lust induced frenzy. Slaanesh's Daemons tend to have a spore filled musk that lowers inhibitions and enraptures prey. Something like the potion previously mentioned only a titch weaker and mass produced. Pick Zecora's brain or library. She undoubtably knows something. Or perhaps that daemonic tome Zexis inherited from her. I'm willing to bet it is opened through sexual acts and depravity. Either way I look forward to the unfolding of these events but in the meantime I suppose I have to entertain myself."
The daemon spun around and struck its staff into the air and tore a hole into reality stepping through the swirling blue and green vortex and onto a battlefield. The deafening screech of the undivided daemon could be heard for miles as it weaved madness and disharmonious thoughts into all those unfortunate to hear it. Drawing its curved blade it thrust forward and the black and gold armor clad men behind it surged forward with a great battle cry.
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*Deep down in The Basement a horrible cry of anguish can be heard*
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!1!!1! How could this happen! I have made several mistakes in my calculations and information and now I look like a faggoty faggot! I thought that it was weird for my autism to deplete so fast... It seems that Lord Kek has taken much of my power with my transfer... Or perhaps this is a test? Lord Kek hates pussies that pussies so I will stand firm in my derision to aid in this quest. I will also follow his rule of using sense and logic in my arguments. I shall admit my mistakes and correct them appropriately."
*Entering incognito mode*
First is the reevaluation and correction. 1. Starlight Glimmer. Reevaluation makes direct communication not recommended as possible suspicion can be because she suspects Zexis origin from the timing of events. Any questions might be answers untruthfully or with hostility. 2. Drugging Spike not recommended. Metabolism too fast for reliable results unless in high doses. 3. Suggestion powder does not remove memories. Rethinking of Thunderlane plan required.
Recommended immediate course of action: TL:DR Check up on Apple Bloom you faggot! Remember, she knew how to make the talisman from Luna in a dream! Find out why!
WARNING: Apple Blooms amulet was made with instructions from princess Luna. Suggesting the two has talked and that Luna might be suspecting something. Immediate course of action should be gaining information from Apple Bloom of Luna's activities if any and if further communication has occurred. Then safeguarding appropriately. More information required to create detailed plan of defense if necessary.
Suggested course of action for the next session: TL:DR First go to hospital in early morning. Deal with Apple Bloom. Finish corrupting hospital faggots (do it in a orgy if you can he he he). If you have time try talking to that Thunderlane cunt and get him to spill. Then corrupt. If no time, go to school and have a lesson. If no lesson go to the Mr. Cake cuck to corrupt. Pinkie Pie might become a grave danger. Do not go to Friendship Castle before skill improvements! What is your plan for Applejack faggot?
It is imperative that information about possible princess Luna involvement is examined. as early as possible in the day go to the hospital to finish corruption and gain information from Apple Bloom. Early morning recommended as the hospital staff should all be arriving at that time, the work load is lower and the possibility of coffee and other beverages to be consumed in the staffroom, giving opportunity for suggestion powder and hormone pills to complete corruption or simply increase it with the help of Redheart. Possibility to corrupt all the potential targets if all in the staffroom, otherwise individual corruption of staff throughout the day suggested. If time allows before school class. Go to Thunderlane and say that you are sorry , that you can relate and understand him, that you only wanted to help. Offer to buy him a drink or if denied drink something else in his house or somewhere else. If conversation and charm does not give the desired information use suggestion powder. With the information, a good plan for corruption can be made. If no time before class, move on to school and hold lesson. Correction of Scootaloo for carelessness low priority, can wait until dark. NOTE: Usage of suggestion powder in lessons risky as the possibility of students refusing to drink exists END NOTE. If no lesson go to Mr. Cake and gather information about him, his wife and Pinkie Pie, build relation to start the beginning of corruption. More detailed plan requires more information. Avoid active intervention in Friendship Castle until stronger for better effect. Zexis plan for Applejack unknown. Execute if possible but information necessary to make informed decision.
*Autism low* *Asks cashier in grosser store out loud if they have condoms * *Feeds on cringe* *Autism levels increasing*
Suggested Current long term goal: TL:DR Get CP, get smart, get charming or strong if Applejack is a cunt then sabotage the tracking spell.
Current actions should be to gather Corruption Points for next possible upgrade moment. Priority is to sabotage the tracking spell under construction to avoid suspicion. Possible Applejack intervention, final decision at next upgrade possibility.
Side missions: TL:DR Find out who got the lust charm from the Flower sluts. Find identity of the school board faggots and other teacher faggots.
The flower girls were told to give a charm to someone that was weak wiled and regular, find out who this was if they have given it away. School board members and other teachers identity useful for future planing.
Plan for Discord unreliable. Extensive alcohol poisoning might eliminate him.
That is all for now.
*Closing incognito mode. Deleting browser history*
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Note to author: Hi! I saw some embarrassing mistakes I made in my comment from before and that I only gave long term suggestions. So I made this one. I also noticed that you did not answer my question about if we get a checkpoint/respwan. Was that intentional......?
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Okay, I don't recall anyone ever saying we should separate the genders. I only said that it might be a good idea to split the class or take multiple classes to test certain ideologies. This was to see if my idea or if Derpsby's idea would yield better results at least in the short term. Do note this was more to look at the end result and not at the speed at which the results are made.
Also about that idea for classes, those ideas are nice and all but it is a bit to early to start incorporating any form of sexual acts into our classes. At least until the parents are sure we aren't doing anything weird and until we are certain the kids won't start speaking up. (I went into greater detail regarding this in my second comment in this chapters comment section)
And in regards to turning all girls into sluts... well should you know my point of view regarding the subject by now.
Also I want to elaborate on something els I have said. I said I wanted to prioritize the school classes. This was a poor choice of words maybe but what I meant was that I wish to spend the most time preparing for classes and giving them and spend the rest of our time on all other project like the farm, Friendship Castle, that book, Zecora and the Hospital. the farm is a close second on my priority list though. This is mostly because the classes and the farm will require the most micromanaging from Zexis and are going to cause the most problems the fastest should something go wrong. Neglecting anything is something I wish to avoid because that will only cause things to either return to how they were or cause problems for us down the line. The farm is almost done anyway so after that is finished we can allocate more time to other projects where Zexis needs to do things personally. The hospital is something that can pretty much take care of itself due to how effective Red Heart is.
Oh and no our intelligence is still at lvl 1 sadly so looking into that spell won't yield much results unless we get into a position where we can sabotage it without it clearly being us sabotaging it. This is probably why most including me haven't mentioned it, we didn't think we had the traits we needed to deal with it.
we should stop taking boring traits like intelligence and go for fun ones like addictive cum! mmmm that will be so much fun! And yea I do hope we get some dominant females as well. they can still be under zexis or another male if thats what we want... and then some males or other females can be under them
Wanted to add something to the feminine potion idea.
Zexis can give the fillies the potion in small dozes. That is also before he fuck them.
So the change will be felt or seen after the act.
That will lead the fillies and ponies to belive that sex = make one more sexy
That can also in a way be an explanation for some mares beuty.
Meaning the princesses, Fleur de Lis, Rarity or others. Meaning that they in secret have lots of sex. (that will be the conclution the filies and colts will take)
That can also be the factor and push fillies will take to make them become more sexy. That can be Scootaloo's ne role in teaching the fillies the way to become a slut/whore/hooker. Meaning a respetive or honourful job
That can lead to training and testing on first the colts, then close nearby stallions to then spread outwards.
This will be going on fitst in secret but later becoming more open.
But that will be an opertunity for Zexis to explore with the other mares. Meaning the wives/girlfriends and such that will be sur eto
be affected when for example the neighbour filly is having sex with a mare's husband, or even his own daughter.
Zexis can then buck then silly (or make others do it)and make then into sluts and then let it spread.
I have but one question, this pertains to the very nature of fetishes in this world.
Is it a part of any and all personalities, some integral part of them? Or did a certain someone spend effort into giving this world's corruption a head start?
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Well ponies are still people. So they of course have sexual preferences or hidden fetishes. Corruption is just taking these and perverting them. Twisting people until they have changed into something evil, corrupted...
Mundus is not a Candy Wonderland. In fact, Equestria an exception for being so peaceful and harmonious. Many other nations are more similar like our real world, when it comes to corruption, chaos, war, and such.
There are good forces and evil ones. And neutrals. Lots and lots of neutrals.
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One could argue that Equestia itself is corrupt with the Purity Laws in place, if a most subtle, peaceful corruption
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Well that's a Possabilty and as a saying goes "To much of Anything is Poisoness or Deadly".
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Exactly.
Also, we've only scratched the surface and explored one town; for all we know Canterlot is a pit of debauchery and they just hide it well.
8304988
wouldn't surprise me, looking at how Celestia and Luna rule and how much influence the nobles might have. Besides it is really easy for nobles to hide pretty much anything if they have enough wealth and political power, some of them are probably far too powerful for the state to even be able to investigate anything they do. And with how incompetent the guards often are... there might as well be an underground slave trade and nobody would know.
Since our discussion seems to have halted without a true decision being made on how to take care of the class maybe we should vote on what we want the end goal of the classes to be.
we still need to choose wether we:
1. Turn all the girls into submissive sluts and the males into dominants.
2. Teach all the strongest and brightest to truly believe in their superiority over those weaker and less intelligent and make the weakest and least intelligent of the class into submissives. This means that everyone must obey the most powerful and most intelligent.
3. Try to experiment with both and see which gives the best results.
I have made a star poll see the link below. This may be the best way to see what the majority wants.
http://www.strawpoll.me/13465233
you can find more detailed versions of the ideas in further down in the comment section (mostly in mine and Derpsby's comments)
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Good idea, but personally I would not use it myself. I usually get the consens already and choose suggestions accordingly, but other ideas that are not part of the main discussion or comepletely new ideas will get involved every now and then as well.
So, don´t be dissapointed if I don´t adhere completely to this poll or the majority.
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I would want to point out that Celestias and Lunas reign is actually very competent. Again, Equestria is one of the better nations of Mundus for a reason.
But you´ve given me an idea....
8306202
no problem
I was mostly just hoping to get a proper consensus out of it. But I feel like far too many people drop out of the discussions after the first comment and then only return next chapter. I also thought that maybe if they didn't want to post another long comment just voting in a poll might be something they would do. and if people never read all the comments a short summary and a poll might have been enough to at least get their voices heard through a vote.
Just voting also takes much less time then a long comment so maybe those who don't bother writing one, don't feel like writing one or don't have time for it could maybe add their voices like this. If barely anyone votes it will just be a failed experiment and if a lot of people vote it will show that it might be a good idea to repeat.
The more people join the discussion the more fun it is and the clearer the path everyone wants to take will be.
8306202
Competent, I'm sure, but not flawless.
And dare I ask what idea...
8305796
Apologies. I was busy on another plane. With a most interesting challenge regarding a princess, her servant, and a magic book...
No matter. It's not important here.
Regarding your idea of experimenting with both approaches, it's certainly an interesting one in theory. With Zexis specifically, we would need to decide wich pool of impressionable minds gets which treatment. The process will be somewhat tainted also by Birdhoof's and Cheerilee's wildly different teachings from before.
What would make the most sense: To have Birdhoof teach the colts how to be dominant males and the fillies to be proper, obedient sluts? Or foster a strict hierachy where the strong prey on the weak? Should Cheerilee discriminate her students into the smart and powerful and the weak and cowed? Does she have the right skills to teach her male students to be the dominant gender, even if she herself is a mare?
Truthfully, a society built upon the smartest, most vicious rising to the top to lord over the others carries its own risk, such as massive infighting over positions.
Either way, there is always one last hurdle to overcome if we were to push Zexis in that direction: He has been designed to accept male domination much more readily. His thoughts, his kinks, even his memories are built upon the premise of the Zebrican Homeland being a place of stallion over mare. He is our vessel, yes, but can he be changed so quickly, so thoroughly?
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It is indeed not a perfect plan. Both roots have their pro's and cons.
Starting with who should teach who in the experimentation scenario. Using Birdhoof for the more male dominant and Cheerilee for the creation if a hierarchy based on the strong and intelligent, both with Zexis' guidance of course. Would be the best. Having a mare teach that males are dominant doesn't make much sense as it might create a paradox, because if males are superior a female would not be able to teach a male anything. This would at least be a problem for the foals in the class even if it isn't truly logical. And Birdhoof teaching that the strong should rule over the weak would be a bit dumb as well, because he is probably less intelligent then most of the kids and doesn't desire the females to know that they might be better then him.
And when looking at the amount of infighting that might occur, this depends how we shape it. Infighting will occur in both situations, all the dominant males in the one and all the most powerful in the other. We will need to deal with it either way. Depending on how we organize society and how ponies swill progress through the social ladder, infighting might be reduced to just political infighting or at least not fights in the open. just making certain things illegal and getting to the point where we can enforce our laws without anyone being able to object, will probably get us to a stable society. How easy this all will be depends heavily on how our corruption will influence a nation when we get to that point.
A society where everyone strives to be as powerful and intelligent as can be will probably make us every powerful and if we can maintain control permanently. It will make the nation we create nearly impossible to defeat. Competition breads excellence, thus a nation built on competition will give us a nation built on excellence.
If I would weight both options. I would say that creating a male dominated society will be easier in the short term and might make it easier tot convince males to join our side. This won't get much resistance from Zexis either as this is what he has pretty much desired from the start. On the other hand, it might be easier to discover due to certain changes that are guarantied to draw some attention. It might also need more micromanaging because some males like Birdhoof for example need to be changed to ensure they don't give us away. This will also get much resistance from most females and will be very hard to paint in a good light or put it up as some new ideology to challenge the old one.
(I know I am a bit biased and would like to hear some more positives to this way of thinking.)
Creating a society based on excellence will probably take more effort in the short term i exchange for more powerful and organized underlings. Due to the fact that I have probably already stated most of the positives in previous comments I'll mostly go over what I see as the negatives. Due to our underlings possibly having more ambitious personalities we will need to secure dominance too a much greater degree. We will possibly need to share some power with others and treat some as equals until we surpass them as well. Power struggles might indeed ,as Derpsby has said, occur. Many of our underlings will have great interest in impressing us to get more power, this might be good or bad depending on what they do. Our underlings will possibly try to ensure everyone stays in line and enforce our rule for us, Be it to actually impress us, show loyalty or to ensure that everything they have built will last. This will mean that many of the ones we corrupt will keep everything hidden from those that we don't want to be seen by. On the other hand one of our underlings might do something risky to impress us and ruin things for us and especially for him or herself. We might be able to spread out ideology more freely as well, even if we preach things that go against everything other shave learned. It won't be nearly a alarming to Celestia to hear a new ideology has sprung up then, a bunch of sex crazed males terrorize this and this town or something. Some ponies might also be drawn more quickly to this sort of ideology then with the other. to give an example, Rainbow Dash would probably feel right at home in a society that is based on an endless competition to see who is the best.
The biggest downside though must be the greater need for Zexis to show he is in control or he will be cast down the ranks of his own organization.
(again I may be a little biased.)
And looking specifically at Zexis, he doesn't need to change instantly. But now I think about it experimenting with both might be a difficult thing for him to pull of. For this he would need to have a mindset somewhere in the middle between these two ideologies. If we don't get to extreme with what we teach for a long period and slowly inch the foals to where we want them we might get the time we need to change Zexis as well. But the best option would be if we would pick one and use that slower period to either change his view of the world. Or we could speed things up by just sticking to how Zexis thinks now. This would save time and is also why this would give greater results much quicker in the short term. I mostly fear for our long term strength if we do that though.
I would like to hear your opinion on this.
(I will not be able to react for at least 2 or 3 days though. I'm going on vacation and I won't have excess to a pc or laptop of a while. and I am not going through the hell of typing such a comment with my phone.)
(It also seem like the poll is a minor success at the very least but we will need to see how many will use it or how much it will change the story.)
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The approach in many ways boils down to the simple versus the complex.
A merit-based, cut-throat society can advance quickly. The best rise to the top; competition leads to optimised results... but only if a system is in place that allows for detecting the "best and brightest", encourage them to compete but not in a way that uses up all resources in self-destructive power games. As you said, even Zexis himself would need to watch his back.
With the other approach, things are easier. Males are in charge and taught to be in charge from beginning, females taught to be subservient and happy about it. As the roles are set, conditioning and brainwashing will create a caste of willing, eager slaves who never had to deal with the temptation of rising above their station. Advancement will be slower, but the foundation stronger, with an effective workforce that needs or desires not much more than a thorough dicking now and again.
Is it more unfair than the first option? Unjust? Oh yes. Just listen to my dear sister laugh when she hears of it.
Another factor is Eros. I know he says he's egalitarian, but have you looked at what he actually did? Even females in supposed high positions were more playthings than servants. A God of Honesty, he is not. And where I come from, furthering a deity's portfolio serves to strengthen its followers in turn.
*In a very dark area, footsteps could be heard as a vague outline of a male could be see approaching the Corrupter.
"I have so far stayed my hand from meddling untill I fully labeled this... Little project not a waste of my time. And with you not only getting rid of a mid obstacle but also securing a direct path to the corruption of not only the children of Ponyville but also one of the Elements of Harmony. And for that I give to you congratulations*
The figure then snapped his fingers. Making a desk and a rather small throne to appear in front of him. After the figure took a seat he leaned on the desk with his elbows as he closed his hands in front of his face.
"However." At that the figure's eyes started to glow red as twin red smoke-like energy trails was emmited by the corner of his eyes
"By doing so you also got a setback in a rather important road. Spike's and by extension. Both Twilight Sparkle and Starlight Glimmer and that... Disappoints me."
The figure then sighed as the glow and energy left his eyes and said
"But. There is no use in bothering you with that for now. You should instead fortify your current bases. First and foremost. Get rid of Zecora. Take her away from the basement of the orphanage in case Twilight Sparkle actually manages-and she will-to make that tracking spell of hers. Get rid of any traces of your and your Allie's DNA from her body. Take her and dump her in the castle of the sister in the forest. That way when Twilight Sparkle managed to complete the spell she won't end up tracking her to the basement of the orphanage. Talk her there was a big risk that you shouldn't have taken. After that finish your corruption of Applebloom and help Big Mac corrupt Applejack so you can secure his status as an ally as permanent instead of just temporary while also implementing fail-safes Incase Big Mac ever betrays you. After that. Hang out with Spike and actually make the effort to know more about the Element Holders. After all 'Know thy and thou already won half the battle'. Then make more of an effort to amend Roseluck's mind. It's already been a while and Ponies WILL start to get curious, and we don't want that. That is all for now from me"*