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So it seems Thunderlane is going to be far more susceptible to corruption then initially suspected.
Though now we have some questions that need answers. Birdhoof had stated that while the town wide rumour was that Thunderlane had made a move on Rainbow Dash and that's why they broke up (and Thunderlane got his arm broke), the truth was that Rainbow had been the one to initiate.
As Thunderlane has been coming to him in secret, its possible that Thunderlane has let some of the truth slip on the incident.
So the question is, what actually happened between Rainbow and Thunderlane, since Thunderlane appears to be a stallion that would have been good with a sexual advance from Rainbow.
Right now there are three things that need immediate attention.
1st: Scootaloo needs to have her mark hidden or disguised in public. Her submissiveness should be enough for her to hide her new mindset but her cutie mark is a massive give away.
2nd: Redheart needs monitoring and again her cutie mark needs concealing. This cutie mark changing phenomenon should be further investigated, but damage control is a must right now before certain parties like the element bearers get a whiff of what is happening.
3rd: Thunderlane needs to be spoken with to prevent any further leakage of the passphrase or possible reveals of the sexual changes taking place. Once this is done, you should concentrate on the situation with Rainbow to both render the elements as less of a threat and to completely win over Thunderlane's loyalty (and ensure a headstrong mare like Rainbow Dash knows her true place in the new world like Scootaloo)
It's looking great keep it up.
Event: Ponyville School; For Cheerilee and the Special classes
Also use 2CP with Affinty to Magic Earth, this can be used to place bigger Lust Trinkets underground in more popular areas (eg. Like the Marketplace), this could also help with getting closer to Applejack as it would let you understand earth pony magic a little and it's Limitations, Limitations that can be exploited when Corrupting them.
It's could also be used to help you grow your own Plants and Herbs for your Alchemy as well as altering or inhancing them with more powerful effects.
Event: Friendship Castle.
And I'm guessing that colors represent difficulty.
Green = Easy
Yellow = Moderate
Red = Hard
The mist rolls back revealing a beautiful powder blue dragoness, being pulled from a cell in the dungeon by an ebony dragon.
"Walk you slut!" Obsidian, the black dragon roars. "You got a date with the entire guards barrack. I wonder if you will be able to walk afterward." The black dragon hisses as the blue dragoness.
"You can do it, Azure Ice. Don't give in!" The former prince calls out from his cell in the dungeon.
Outside, the black dragon starts to undo the shackles.
"I assume your plan worked Fluorspar." The captain asks undoing her shackle, his nostrils flaring from the sent of female arousal.
"Yes, the plan work. I swear I didn't need to even use my pheromones." The dragoness sighs as she starts massaging her wrists. "Once he thought I was on his side, he spilled so many secrets. Its going to take me ages to sort through them all."
The captain pulls back from the dragoness. "From your scent if how wet you are, it seems like you haven't been fuck for almost three weeks." His gaze lingering on her tits and the dripping slit between the oracles legs.
Fluorspar signed. "It was only for 24 hours, but it felt like three weeks. I am used to getting off almost hourly." Sighning, "I'm going to need some first class sex, but Fimbulwinter is still away."
"The black dragon tilts his head, "Do you want to head to the guard barracks? I bet they would all be up for a gangbang."
The dragoness glares at the dragon, "I want quality, not quantity. I all ready have the correct dragons in mind for the job." The captain remains stock and answers, "Who are they, tell me, and I will send them to your quarters."
The dragoness, smiles and places a hand on his chest, "Thanks for the offer, so come with me, it going to be a three way, you, me and Scarlet Stone."
The captain flinches at that. "MY MATE?!?!?"
The dragoness smirks. "Why yes captain. Your wife has been inviting me over for years. I believe she even told you she has experimented with a dragoness or two during Fimbulwinter reign."
"Um, I......." The captain stumbles. Obviously never thinking about his wife with another dragoness.
"Come on Obsidian, it works out for the best. Women understand women, she will help me have the best experience possible, while you bring the hardware." She smirks as her hand reaches between the captain's leg. "And from what I can tell, you like the idea of watching two beautiful dragoness, fucking each other, and you fucking them, because that what your 'lieutenant' is tell me." Fluorspar smirks holding on to a thick cock hard and dripping with precum.
Turning away, "I'll be at your cave in half an hour. Don't be late." The dragoness smirks walking away, a curve to her walk as she sways her bubbly ass. She smirks as she hears the baritone of the captain swear. "Fuck, nasty little traitor. You know I haven't brought up that fantasy to Scarlet in a century."
Fluorspar smirks as she steps into a room, with a large crystal pool in it. Diving beneath the water, the dragoness reemerges as an emerald green dragon with jade breast scales.
"Zelix, sorry for the delay, I just need to sort out a few things. Anyway, it looks like you have some trouble some toys to deal with. Not all toys are perfect, but they need to learn their place. For example, Redheart, honestly, she became a lose cannon. Just think she was refusing you. It's obvious she needed to remember who her master is. Sadly, it seems like if she gets some rough sex, from somepony else, she may start forgetting your her master. Be careful about that. She is about to seduce the doctors, and some of them may like it rough. It was good to see her become a true mare, and thrive for sex. That part, I don't consider a problem from Birdhoof."
The dragoness starts to rub at her spikes to remove the gems from her head spines. "Speaking of loose cannons, we got two more to deal with. Birdhoof and Thunderlane. I have the three strikes policies for my toys. After they act off three times, it's time to replace them. I'm not saying get rid of Birdhoof now, he only has two strikes to his name. Give him one last chance, and if not, break him. Mind, fucking, break him, into a pussy dump, only good for humping and eating out. His punishment right now is good, and if your suggestions to him are still holding up, he may be crying a bit, because he disappointed his idol"
Fluospar starts to clean her tail turning it from powdered blue to an emerald green. "Now, that leaves Thunderlane. He is not under our control at all. In fact, he now has information, that could put you in danger. You got to find him and make him into an ally and fast. The school may be the way to go. Through his brother Rumble. Any deal with Thunderlane asap."
"As for Scootaloo, it was great to see her break. At last she knows her purpose, and isn't afraid of it, or her own desires. I can't wait for her to share it with her friends and class mates."
"The cutiemarks do concern me. You have changed three of them, we better hope no one notices right away, or less someone may involve the princess." The dragoness speaks as she gets out of the water
With a violent shake she, gets the water off her scales, showing off her pristine beauty. "As for what you need to do now. I recommend firstly the castle of friendship. My second vote would be for the school. Either project is good. But, I think my lord would take great pleasure in seeing Spike becoming more of a true dragon. I could get behind the school session though if the majority of viewers want them. What I'm not okay with is the forest. I think that is inviting trouble too soon."
"Anyway go to the library, see Spike, maybe get another book. Help him become more independent, and more like a true dragon. Maybe we can learn a tip or two from that Starlight chick. I wonder if she is into twilight as well. That would be an interesting three way. Anyway, I have to go. I really need to get fucked, right NOW!!!!"
The mist rolls in as the dragoness leaves the room, her eyes masking the needy feeling of her body, and the burning between her thighs.
8052814 The mist rolls back showing a green dragoness, nodding her head.
"I agree with you. Green, good option, yellow medium option, red bad option."
The mist rolls in as the dragon takes flight into the air
Thank you for letting me be proofreader! I promise not to let you down!
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"I'm going to have to disagree with you. I personally think that the colours represent problems or "Hazards" to our character Zexis and how bad they might be if we don't deal with them. But that just one possibility however if I'm right that means what ever going to happen in the Everfree forest is going to cause us a lot of problems if we don't deal with it, which I personally think mean that Zecora is about to realise some major Voodoo on us. But once again that just my speculation anyway be back shortly with my in game persona response."
Zecora needs to be dealt with for sure... She knows something is wrong, and no doubt has been planning and putting up her guard around the forest perhaps charms to destroy you. She will be a difficult one to crack but I fear she needs to be dealt with ASAP.
But can it be done with the current amount of influence we hold?
No doubt if we could get Twilight on our side, though admittedly a slave to spike, a lot could be done. and if Spike was more corrupted and a little bigger from greed, we could just have him eat Zecora once we confront her.
The School house would also be a good bet, many young minds there to corrupt but watch out for the Applebloom, though you are in good standing with her she has a sharp mind that one. And if Cutiemarks keep changing or fillies and colts keep getting Pervmarks it could cause trouble to arrive sooner then we have planned... it could cause problems for you if Sun or Moon should appear to soon.
On the event choices, my first thoughts were the same as 8052814, since that color level pattern is something that is commonly seen and easily identified.
However, 8052967 makes an excellent counterpoint, as Nohen himself once replied to me explaining that every event that isn't picked, that event plays out in favor for the other characters instead of Zexis. So in the case of Everfree, there have already been two missed opportunities where the event plays out in favor of (we suspect) Zecora, that could allow her to prepare against Zexis. Nohen admitted that no characters will become unobtainable; only that each event that could have worked in Zexis' favor, instead can cause things to become more difficult for him later on.
Nohen should not introduce a mechanic like that without an explanation for what it does. To me, this is a very poor decision on the writer's part.
To introduce a new (and rather vague) element in the options with no explanations, can cause false logic to our decision making process due to different interpretations between the readers, in the case of EchoWolf31 and potdl. Such different interpretations can have major effects on our decisions, and considering that there are no do-overs in this story, readers should be able to understand the mechanisms of the options when they are introduced, not after the fact when it's too late to do anything about it. This is like in games where players can feel cheated or unfair due to some mechanic that was required which the developers never explained or hinted at. Only difference here is that we don't get a second chance if "game over" occurs due to something that wasn't properly explained.
So, we could correctly guess the meaning of color codes, but then again, expecting everyone to share the same line of logic is not a good idea considering that things are left open and very vague, which can cause folks to come to different conflicting conclusions.
I urge Nohen to reconsider the "come later" explanation. That just seems to be a terrible decision to make when you add new rules to the game. How can one play the game properly if one does not understand the rules?
Another good chapter, but one issue: You didn't put what to suggest to distribute his new points towards.;) Can't put forth a good review without knowing the potential ways to direct things with such.
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Well, I actually didn´t plan for the colours in the first place. But there were some, who complained, that they didn´t have enough information about what kind of events they got, so I threw this new mechanic in there.
Now, speaking in game terms, we are past the tutorial, as one would say. All the essential, basic mechanics are explained and as such any addition to gameplay I make here is in the same vein you would get a new ability or weapon. You have to experiment a bit to understand how it works. And as I said before, if the meaning of the colours are not clear after the next chapter, I will let Eros explain it. This is less about informed decision, as more about tension. Revealing every meaning and showing all nooks and crannies takes the fun out of it. Don´t be afraid to make choices here, as every event that you pick plays out in your favor. Just how much, that depends on Zexis skills and on the event itself.
And as wer are still at the beginning of the story, there will not be a sudden game over. Any bad end that could potentially pop up, will be hinted at way in advance. So don´t worry, screwing up is part of the fun.
Also, a little tip here. Someone in the comments already got the meaning of the colours. More I will not say.
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Also the CPs cannot be spend right now. As I said before, that is only possible in Interludes, with Eros. I only put them up, to show you how much you have currently. That is why I didn´t give any options. The breaking of Redheart and Scootaloo just earned some points, thats all. (2 for Redheart, 3 for Scoots)
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Except in games (ones properly thought out), when new elements/mechanics are introduced throughout the game there is a small tutorial or at least an explanation along with them. So your argument doesn't really hold water there. Considering that you didn't plan for the color code in the beginning, only after the fact, wouldn't that indicate that the color code would/should have been in the tutorial if it had been planned in the beginning?
Zexis: the more Intelligent and Charismatic you become, the easier it will be to corrupt and warp your way to the top. (pick Intelligent and Charismatic as Traits.)
The Everfree Forest is a place of great danger, and great opportunity. Some careful scouting could find you many useful resources, allies and a potential base. (choose the Everfree Forest event.) Take a look around, but above all, bypass Zecora unless pressed to the extreme. She can overpower you at the moment.
If all else fails: a poison dagger to the back fixes many problems.
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Well, considering that there are currently two views right now, 8052814 and 8052967. So yeah, fifty-fifty chance here, as I said before, each view has good reasoning to them.
That's not the point though.
The real issue is adding new elements/mechanics with no explanation.
Sure this one could be rather straight forward to figure out, depending which of the two is right, but what if some element/mechanic is added later on that is rather confusing to figure out? Again different lines of logic can lead to different opposing conclusions.
The mist rolls back to reveal a beautiful dragoness, standing outside a cave in an ice rock wall.
"8053223 , 8053185 , 8052967 , 8052814 There is no point in worrying about the colors now. They could be difficult, level of necessity, or could be nothing. After all, it doesn't matter the color of the dildo you use, only the size. So lets choose based on what we want, then we can then try to infer anything. For myself and Fimbulwinter, we would like to see Spike become more like a true dragon, so I vote for castle. To be honest, I would be so happy to test Spike's cock once he gets past puberty." Sighing. "If Zelix can limits the influence from ponies."
"Anyway, good luck you guys. I'm going to get fucked!"
The mist rolls in as the dragoness enters the cave.
BZZZZZT.........Click!
Well this is both good and bad. I am glad to see Zexis making some progress and have more mare submit to his will bu the fact that Birdhoof bugger up again annoys me. One Must always preform the task given to them correctly and not make adjustments to said order unless extreme measure arise. However mistakes can happen and more so for those you lack any sort of intellectual prowess. I say give him one more chance but a harsher punishment is needed to make sure such mistakes do not happen again.
Moving on, we can still use one of Birdhoof mistakes to our advantage namely recruiting Thunderlane. To do this I recommend another drinking session with just Zexis and Thunderlane, he has already shown that by using a potion on him he becomes quite horny and thus easy for us yo manipulate. Once we have gotten him drunk and drugged up take him back to the flower trio place for a bit of fun and secure him to our side.
I know I have mentioned this numerous times but we need to get our own place weather we do this with whatever capital we have raised or convince Filthy Rich to give us a loan really does not matte, but it is important we get this sort sooner rather than later. Our skills and talents have so far covered our unusually long stay at the flower trio house, but I do not believe we should keep pushing them as much as we have some one will eventually realise how suspicious it is and will investigate. Also once we have our own place we can start making a proper headquarter which we could use for a variety of purposes from holding meeting (Orgy parties) to a stronghold were we can bring problem individual and break them at our leisure.
Lastly it seems we have a new event coming up but our Corrupter seem to be giving us additional information in the form of colour coding our options. We have Castle of Friendship which is green, Ponyville School which is yellow and finally we have the Everfree Forest which is red. This new information could mean any number of thing from difficulty to potential danger to Zexis if he does not interfere. However, after examining previous entrees and information from the Corrupter I am inclined to believe that it is the later. This conclusion comes from that fact that the Everfree Forest has come up multiple times for events and knowing that Zecora is in there and the power she wields it is highly possible that she is doing some major Voodoo to hinder us since she knows something of Zexis true nature. Even if this proves to be untrue any problem that arise from these events at the other two location can be handled with a lot more ease. Zexis is at Ponyville School every other day and with his growing influence over Cheerlie and certain students he should be able to find out and handle any problem that arise there. As for the Friendship Castle it most likely as something to do with Spike and since we have a pretty nice start on Corrupting him we can afford to have a small setback here which we should be able to contact later. Lastly we have next to no information on Zecora actions recently and without information we can not plan any thing involving her to any great extent.
Thus my vote is the Everfree Forest but we need to go in there prepare I would recommend stopping by Nurse Redheart and organising to get some heavy duty tranquillisers and see if we could make a blow gun or something to work with them or some other equipment to be able to use them from range.
Well that it for now.
From the Archives of Enlightenment, Forbidden Division
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So we're going with a Mass Effect 3 ending mindset, cause that went over so well. (sarcasm by the way)
Seriously though, I feel that my point is being missed here.
When it comes to decision games/stories like this, I feel that people want the decision they pick to correspond with the facts and hints presented. Nothing specific has to be given, just enough of an idea that allows the participate to be able to use proper reason in their decision making process. If an element/mechanic is not properly introduced it could cause a false line of logic that leads to a decision that a player would not have made if said element/mechanic was explained correctly in the beginning. Regardless of the subject matter, the point I'm trying to get at is that if things are not properly explained, there could be accidentally confusion or misdirection for the participates that could result in a negative feedback. How many people want to find that their decision was at fault as a result of it being based on false/misleading logic due to the poorly defined facts/hints?
Friendship Castle.
A desk with books strewn across once more appears, a maiden with a size too small harem 'outfit', The maiden who was nose deep in her book, takes a glance towards you, before returning and turning a page, a calm joy comes from her as she imparts her thoughts.
"Recent victories may be the only chance to avoid deeper defeats. If you wish to prevent a powerful foe from defeating you utterly, a right application of bait and sweet smelling 'venom' must be used. Hopefully, the dear nurse can provide a well enough paralysis, or perhaps something more potent, to give the trap as well as you some fangs. No trap is useful without bait, an orange might not be as symbolic with poison as an apple, however, it should do the trick. "
Turning the page she sighs, but then she takes up her resolve, even as the outfit barely holds her slight movements.
"I learned that those who stand alone and try to be good, end up being the hardest to break once they found those they care for. Without Applebloom and Sweetiebelle, to add to Scootaloo, will give her room to break free. Thus we cannot allow her freedom of thought. Break her, and ensure her home is looked through, she likely kept knowledge there, have Scootaloo with you, she could perhaps help guide you to her knowledge. No matter what, ensure Fluttershy is not near or even her hut, Right now she is as dangerous as lake full fo hungry tiger sharks that you happen to be the middle of, Discord makes promises, not threats."
She shuts the book before gently laying it next to her looking to you in her small harem outfit, which looks ready to burst open.
"Take forth the reigns of fate, or be dashed away by them. use your wits, and gain the edge here, such a threat cannot be allowed to remain, and I look forward to witnessing, how this or any other scenario you do plays."
As she takes up the book she had only moments ago discarded, she vision of her fades. She leaves some final words, "Gentle breeze guide your path, a warm smile welcome you home."
(I hopefully did this well enough.)
Ah, it is good to see you will not ignore the young ones. I hope you follow up at the school. Then prehaps expand your influence at the hospital?
Scootaloo's sudden change of cutie mark is going to arouse suspicions. See if one of your current slaves can't hide that fact.
As for Birdhoof, he continues to prove more of a hindrance than an asset. I'd recommend you use alchemy, see if you can't find a compound that will make him turn the town against him with his own behaviours.
First drive him to anxiety. His jogging with Scootaloo will make it obvious to the town something's going wrong with him.
Gradually up the dosage, so it becomes worse, and he'll hopefully become introverted.
Then a few VERY weak hallucinogens need to be added, which with a little practical effects, moving shadows and the like, he'll start to get paranoid. As he loses sleep, he will deteriorate on his own.
Keep the hallucinogens on a steady increase and then cut them out altogether. The most likely outcome is he'll into shock and die, with the autopsy revealing he'd been on hallucinogens, and with the prior anxiety in public, they'll believe he'd been doing it himself.
After that Redheart can volunteer to take charge of the orphanage, and with her being a well-respected figure in both the hospital and general public, she'd be a shoe-in, and her medical knowledge would be considered as an asset.
With that in mind, it WILL take some time to go through all of this and Redheart SHOULD have opened up a good portion of the hospital staff to their sexuality.
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While I understand some of my fellow beings are furstrated with Birdhoof, I am of a different mind. What he did can be useful to us, useful to furthering the cause of corruption. Moreover, he did what he did in an attempt to further the cause himself, even if the means were misguided. Punishment as it was here is one thing, but... I would also groom him more from what he is now. He shows promise and he's given good aid up until now, including the potential of salvaging what happened with Thunderlane. Eager and loyal agents are worth more than ones cowed into paralysis.
And, of course, there's also the fact that although he is Zexis' disciple, Redheart called him limp-dicked and not a real stallion. That's an insult to Zexis' abilities to school his followers. Birdhoof will require further practice. Giving him Scootaloo is out, he missed that chance. A different toy, though, will motivate him. How about that cross-eyed mailmare and her brat? A single mother, perfectly vulnerable, and damaged goods as it is. Let him especially get his endurance up and teach him more about heavy bondage, that help with inducing the proper submissiveness in the toys.
Incidentally, consider giving the schoolponies some "rope classes". There's a local chapter of the Filly Scouts, so some may know a thing or two about the topic. Make it trust classes, let the colts eventually tie up the fillies they fancy. Make all parties enjoy it. You'll help the future pairs (or harems, we know that's what you want) tie the knot in more ways than one!
While we are on that... As much as it pains me and despite what I just noted, I will put my vote with the Everfree Forest. We've ignored the Zecora problem for now, we will not be able to do so forever. Zexis has a good enough handle on things in the city proper; we cannot let something happen outside that could threaten it, like allowing Zecora to turn one or more of the not-yet-enslaved Crusaders against us. Even though I would so love to watch Zexis seed corruption amongs the Ponyville students, guide Pip and Rumble and Featherweight and Snips and Snails into winning over and eventually owning their own sets of willing fuck-fillies... That will have to wait. The forest has lots of potential as well, from exotic herbs to dangerous creatures.
I wonder if Zecora has what it takes to fend off a drugged-up Everfree beast. A risky prospect, to be sure. I'll admit, I've always found it fascinating to let loose a big beastie or six to see how possible enemies might react. War thinks it hilarious when I do.
Either way, Zexis, though you know Zecora belongs on her knees and on a leash, with a switch giving her some more stripes to go with the ones she has, don't give her an opening to strike you with. She's resourceful and her powers are mysterious. She's not on the level of Discord, Princess Twilight, or even Starlight Glimmer, but she's not to be trifled with nonetheless. Be on your guard, be charming, and try to position yourself as trustworthy especially with any ponies present. Zecora is more isolated than you. If you can cut off her support from the townsponies, you'll be so much close to victory and putting her in her place.
Going to have to say focus on friendship castle my friend Zeksis, After all, It's someplace we certainly can't let go unwatched with those pesky elements around, and if something goes wrong there.... Well lets just say that the Rainbow Powered bus to Tartarus is not the best vacation plan around.
as a secondary focus... the cutie mark crusaders... that cutie mark change might cause some ripples there. being on hand to manage those is important.
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I am thankful for your input. However I will not change my course in this matter. Part of that is, because I want to see how this works out. With the feedback of the next chapter and the incoming receptions from the reader I will see wether I will change the way I set up the gameplay or not.
With this, I would like to conclude this discussion. Don´t be angry, I really appreciate your criticism, as it helped several times in the past, as with the magic for example. But part of the joy of a game, in my opinion, is experimentation and the lack of information and the decision you make because of that, in a safe enviroment. Thats why I play my games blind, with no help from internet or spoilers. And that I am very hard on the latter, you should know by now.
If you don´t like that RW, than I am sorry for that. But I can´t and will not change the way I manage this story and game, because of one person. I hope you understand.
And if the feedback from readers supports your opinion, I will reconsider it. Okay?
That fucker touched something that's ours! We'll need to teach Thunderlane a lesson. Who is so pathetic he depends on Birdhoof for sex. I don't think anybody else caught that, Thunderlane is so fucking useless he needs BIRDHOOF to even get wanking materials. Yeah, he's not so openly pathetic and useless as Birdhoof. Call him Birdhoof 2.0. Slightly improved, just as much of a bitch. Sadly, Birdhoof has necessitated that we bring him into the fold. I suggest we just feed him a pack of lies under suggestion powder. He doesn't have access to any mares so keep him in the dark as much as possible.
And while we're on the subject, fuck Birdhoof! Useless piece of garbage can't even follow simple instructions right! And failing at 'don't tell anyone' is fucking lethal to a conspiracy! At this point, I'd say Birdhoof is a liability. And considering the stakes, well, let's just say it's time for Birdhoof to take a 'trip'. A nice friendly 'trip' straight to Tartarus!
Everfree Forest? Looks like Zecora is making her move. Time to put an end to her plans. It's time to implement Operation 'A Bird in the Hoof is worth a Zebra in the Bush'. Zecora has been gearing up and preparing for a duel with us. Or who knows what else. Do you know what she isn't prepared for? A fat idiot breaking in and trying to rape her. Let him soak up whatever traps and gadgets Zecora has planned. Let him tire her out. Then we swoop in, take her for our own, and hopefully have one less Birdhoof to deal with. Or hey, maybe he'll actually redeem himself in the attempt. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, oh couldn't keep a straight face. Like that'll happen.
(OOC: Way I see it is this: Friendship Castle is the Spike project, which we've been working on but has no risks associated with it, but great potential gains. The Schoolhouse is the Teacher project, which we've been working on, and has the risk of Scootaloo's new cutiemark being noticed. And then there's the Everfree forest. Which we haven't been working on at all. Why is it even an option? My money is on potdl being correct, the color is how dangerous it would be to ignore that event. Zecora knows we're bad news, has almost certainly been preparing to do something about it, knows our tricks better then we do, and is friends with Applebloom. The fact that it's an option at all is why we should take it.)
We should go to the Castle of Friendship, we should see how Spike is doing and perhaps search for more information on corrupting ponies. Thunderlane needs to pay, and Birdhoof as well. We need to exert more of our control. SO we use Spike, he has access to Twilight a Princess, we start corrupting her and she and Spike can 'expand' their library to include more books that we can use in our quest of corruption! Just a thought my fellow members in depraity.
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... There might be something to this plan. Zecora is first and foremost a healer. Even one so petty as Birdhoof will find help from her. That could be a good way to catch her off-guard. Eventually. At the moment, it's unlikely Zexis could harm her in a serious manner even if sending Birdhoof after her first.
Injustice tells me she likes the idea of handing Zecora over to Birdhoof. Hardly anypony goes to visit her. He could do whatever the heck he wants to her out there and not put our efforts in Ponyville in peril. Who knows, perhaps he'll see siring half-zebra foals as punishment, perhaps not. It's a step up from having the creatures of the forest go at her. That would be Injustice's next best option.
Personally, I'm still torn between that and letting him have the stupid mailmare to practice his urges on.
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The skeletal ashling looks up from his mirror, clattering his teeth angrily.
"No, no. If that fat fuck couldn't handle Redheart, he'll crumble under Zecora. It would be a simple matter for her to probe him for details. He'd probably spill his guts as soon as she threatens him."
Turning back to the mirror, his eyes flare.
"I say go for school, myself. If you play your cards right, you can corrupt the town's youth under everyone's noses. And if you steal them...everything crumbles. They decide the future of a society's norms, after all. Just remember to keep things under close wraps after this slip-up. Don't trust Birdhoof any farther than you can throw him."
Everfree, pelease. Zexis trying to corrupt Zecora will be something to read about. I can wait if you want to drag out the 'fight' between the two, but it would be a definite yes to do.
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No. I'm not upset or angry. I may not agree with it, but I'll respect it. This is your project after all, and I can understand that you want to handle it that you feel is best. I apologize if I came off as hostile in any way, as that was never my intent.
"We agree to disagree." As is the case here. I wanted to at least have a good counter-argument to a view point that others may not share.
That's the nature of constructive criticism, different view points can bring ideas or opinions that could improve a project. Then there's going to be view points that just clash against each other. At least this is more about the mechanics that can have different approaches to it.
So, yes, I believe that this particular discussion can be concluded.
We've both stated our opinions on the matter. Now it's up to whether any of the other readers share their thoughts on this matter, and how their opinions stand as a result.
OOC (In regards to the color coding options, I'm actually opposed to it. Once we figure out the system, it makes it clear what the 'best' option is. I'm not opposed to more information though, maybe instead of just locations, we get a small sentence saying what we're doing at that location?
Like Friendship Castle would become 'Meeting up with Spike to do X. And Classroom would become Continue corrupting Cheerilee and students)
(There is a short summary at the end)
A translucent being can be seen sitting on a comfy looking bench with a naked female she has dark blue coat and an even darker blue colored mane and an Eldar glyph as her cutie mark, on his lap, a claw going through her mane while she purrs like a cat. Behind them a bunch of cultists can be seen cleaning all sorts of things of the floor and walls, primarily blood, gore, succubus cum and other fluids.
“we will be finished on a few hours great one.” One of the cultists says. A grumbling sound comes from the translucent being. “I hoped to be able to deal with my ‘side project’ without the stench those Slaaneshy worms left behind but no matter.”
“Starting with what has happened. Birdhoof is becoming a loose end and I would prefer him to be kept on a tighter leash.” “He wants to make Birdhoof nothing more than an obedient dog using those mind control drugs.” Said the unicorn. “Pretty much yes.” There is a short pause. “Good job with Scootaloo by the way, she is now properly under our control and happy about it as well. Nurse Red Heart will also be a very useful asset. Thunderlane on the other hand is not. After the event we should do something about it but that will come later.”
“When it comes down to the event there are only two real options that need our attention. The everfree forest problem and the school event. I have no reason to believe there is any need for intervention at the castle of friendship. I can think of nothing that could possibly cause a major setback. With Scootaloo’s corruption there may be a possibility for negative results that could set us back a bit with the school event even if a little bit of talking with miss Cheerilee could assist with damage control even if we do not intervene directly. My idea is to use Cheerilee to cover up what happened with Scoots but anything more is probably not necessary. I don’t expect the game to end from not going to that event. So in my opinion the everfree event is the most important, simply because things there have been mostly left to do their own thing.”
“Also we just ignored the color thing during our discussion on what to do.” Said the mare. “Though 8053292 probably had the right idea. We lack information on what the colors mean so we just used all the information we had to decide what to do, as if the colors where never given. I also agree with everything RW has said about the color thing, to some degree at least.” The translucent being continues. “On the other hand it can be seen as just another part of the game, maybe we just got more powerful and it can be seen a little bit of foresight. If we just got the ability to see some vague clue as to what the future might hold we wouldn’t be able to immediately understand the vision if it was happening to us for the first time. Psykers can see the future but most of them only see vague visions that can be interpreted in many ways.”
The unicorn stands up and starts to speak “Also, it may be a good idea to teach Scootaloo a thing or two about the art of persuasion. She may be a whore but she doesn’t need to be a useless bimbo.” Her tone increases in volume and she dawns a wicked grin. “To win a fight you need a sharp weapon not a blunt one. Our slaves need to be the sharpest blades in the world. All those who’s minds are broken aren’t fit to be ours, others can have them for they are nothing but currency. If our slaves are stronger, smarter, more cunning and more agile then any of our possible rivals we will not need to worry, for we will rule uncontested with the best loyal to only us.” The unicorn stops her rant, sits back down and rests her head back on the beings lap ones more. “Well said.” The unicorn shudders in pleasure after the comment.
“I do believe that should cover everything. Hopefully things will turn out well.” Darkness follows
Her cutie mark is the glyph below and it can stand for one or multiple of the following: Soul-drinker / Scavengers / Looters / Parasites / Vermin / Dying / Diabolical / Demonic / Decaying
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A short summary as a conclusion:
I think we should go to the everfree for the event, we should talk to Chreerilee about Scootaloo’s cutie mark and make sure it can be hidden during school time, we should start teaching our slaves things when we have time, we should deal with Thunderlane at a later time, I believe breaking the minds of ponies who are useless to us should be broken and I don’t care whether they are male or female, something needs to be done about Birdhoof he is getting out of control.
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Not if he doesn't know anything.
It wouldn't be difficult at all to use Birdhoof to smuggle something debilitating into Zecora's range if he himself isn't aware of it. She can't probe him for knowledge he doesn't have. If, say, he's carrying a smoke bomb filled with hallucinogenic aphrodisiacs, triggered to go off at a specific point or from remote location? Zebra bitch opens the door, she and the "fat fuck" get a face-full of horny gas—either they'll wear each other out, or Zecora runs off into the woods to copulate with the next thing that has a big enough dick. She'll be vulnerable either way.
I still maintain Zexis should teach Birdhoof and, later on, Thunderlane and Mac the virtues of handling both cunts and secrets. Birdhoof, right now, still needs some autonomy to perform his services. We shouldn't be too quick to discard loyal followers, especially if we have to few. Zexis gave him the stick, now it's time for the carrot.
8056458
That bom is actually a good idea, if we can make it that is. it would be useful to have such a thing anyway if we go to confront Zecora. When we confront her we need to deal with her fast. nutrelising her like that would be perfect. or we take a tranquilizer dart or something els from the hospital and can use a lot of drugs on her to our hearts content. Should be quite amusing to watch.
We can even use Birdhoof for it. we just shend him to het and he injects her with something that knocks her out. She is but a zebra she shouldn't be able to do much after a drug like atropine. 0.5 grams should be enouth to knock her out with something like that.
One orange and blue light turns on, highlighting a figure shrouded in darkness.
He sighs before speaking. "Birdhoof's... indiscretion might be turned to an advantage, however we must keep a closer eye on him. We cannot let him make another screw up on this level.
"Thunderlane may prove to be a useful ally; a knight to Birdhoof's pawn. And maybe we can get information from him about what happened with Rainbow Dash.
"As for the events, I suggest the Everfree Forest. If an event like this is up then it most likely involves Zecora, and we know we'll need to deal with her sooner or later. Investigating this area may give us a lead.
"I would do more... work on Cheerliee instead of Sweetie Bell and Apple Bloom; we'd do more with having the teacher under our thumb first.
"Lastly we should learn more about the Purity Laws; what they entail and how they came about.
Until then, here's hoping things carry on smoothly. We will be watching."
The lights shut off.
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"It would indeed be usefull to finally know what those entail. Knowing how far we can go without doing anything outside of the law would be useful. Even if we have already broken the law on several occasions it would still be useful to know how far we can go with the changes we would like to make to the ponies around us. this would be usefull information before we make one of our slaves do something that would get them arrested."
8068241
"Exactly. Information is ammunition."
Event: Friendship Castle
what we need is a magic resistance, smart and loyal subordinate. right now we only have Bird Hoof and I don't thick that we should have so much fate in him.
Spike is a dragon and with him we would have huge advantage against any magic creature. if you didn't know, when Discord was reales for the first time he pretty much corrupt whole ponyvill, but in that chaos the only one that didn't get corrupt was Spike. dosen that show you how much his magic resistance would help you against other magic creature.
He is smart to and pretty much would help you to strategy a plan to either corrupting mare or take over citys. I mean he have lived with one of the smartest mare in Equestria his whole life and if he only have learn 10% of the things she have said then he would be able to create a plan to conquering any country.
just saying.
One more thing, Zexis. If you happen to go to the Everfree for whatever business you wish to do there, keep in mind that the forest is a wild, dangerous place. One of the dangers often encountered there are magical creatures called Timber Wolves.
Timber Wolves are a form of self-creating golems which inhabit constructs made of rocks and deadwood. Good on the attack, but tend to crumble on a strong hit. Since they can regenerate from almost nothing and don't require sustenance other than ambient magic, that's not usually a problem. The important part for you—other than the sharp fangs and claws—is that they're mostly plant creatures.
You can feel your affinity for all things plant life, can't you, Zexis? Back in Zebrica, powerful shamans would know how to tame the wild spirits of nature, just as they tame their own females. Perhaps there is potential there. A Timber Wolf's "corpse" is saturated with the Everfree's chaotic magic even if the will has moved on to a different shell. A priceless item for a skilled alchemist! Not only that, but perhaps you will eventually stumble across a way to gain some form of influence over the creatures. Even control.
And even more interesting, Zexis... You dimly remember your teachers mention a way to infuse another being with such natural magics. There are stories of legendary Zebra sorcerers who not only dared to cross the mares in their care with many non-equine creatures in a carnal way, but who would create powerful, loyal mare-slaves by mutating them in various ways. You have to admit, the idea of a timber-pony Applejack, wagging her tail, staring at you with glowing green eyes and begging for your touch is deliciously hot.
Keep the possibilites in mind, Zexis...
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That would be more helpful if Spike actually were impervious to magic. I've fought elder dragons with true spell resistance, they don't seem to be in this world. If he were, Spike wouldn't get thrown about in Princess Twilight's magic like a ragdoll whenever she wants him to. Moreover, Zexis using his alchemical potions and powders on him shows he is susceptible.
He would still make a worthwhile ally nonetheless, for the other reasons you mentioned alone. He is also an in with many other ponies, not only in Ponyville but even Canterlot and possible visiting Crystal Ponies.
(Warning the following comment has sex in it. Only ones allowed to dislike, due to that, are the author, the person, I'm responding too, and myself.)
The mist rolls back to reveal a green dragoness on her back with a crimson dragoness on top of her, nipping at her neck. In the corner a black dragon is standing there, his cock at full mast, and dripping. The captain of the guard seems anxious as his claw trembles and drifts toward his leaking dick.
"Scarlet!" The green dragoness moans. "I was right, you truly get what a dragoness needs. Unlike most of the drake's I've been with." The dragoness whimpers, her pheramones and sounds further pushing the guard captains resolve.
"Fluorspar," The other dragoness purrs. "I take that as a complement. How is my husband doing back there?" The dragoness asks a smirk growing on her face, which morphs to pleasure as their cunts rub against eachother, wetting the other with their own arousal.
Looking back Fluorspar see the black dragon, with his claw running up and down his needy cock. "No! Obsidian!" The captain startles as this, a growl issuing from his maw., "I know you want it, but really, if you are a good boy, you get both of us. If you disobey you may only get Scarlet tonight." Turning back to the red dragoness on top of her, she asks. "Don't you hate it when the boys don't do what they are told?" Fluorspar then bits down on the dragoness neck, while her claws rub the her partners breast.
"I don't know! Boys will be boys, but to be honest, my husband has been patient. I doubt other boys would have lasted as long, as he has, so give him a AAAAHHHHHH break!" Scarlet moans
"You have a point, note to self. Tell 8054194, that maybe that failed excuse of testosterone may have some value after all, so no need to have him eliminated." The red dragoness looks at her mate quizzically. "Who is she talking to." "She and Fluorspar do it all the time." The Captain replies, though with his claw reluctantly leaving his cock. "Fluorspar claims some god is watch, so they talk and report to them."
"I do love the idea with bondage. I may have to do that once I get back to the castle." The dragoness remarks. "Anyway, your right Scarlet." The green dragoness smirks. "Let's have Obsidan, get his reward." With a dual move of tails, both dragoness shiver as a slight draft waft against there cunts.
"You heard her my stone, get over here." Scarlet speaks. Flluorspar shivers at the feeling of a wet, but wiggling appendage laps between the two dragoness legs.
"OHHHHHH!!!!!!!" Scarlet moans. "If you two are going to orgasm, I'm making sure its going to be so big it knocks you both out, a barotone rumble comes from between two quivering snatches.
"As for the Everrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrfree forest, I think it's the AAAHHHHH worst option. The danger is to great for aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh reward. I guguguguguess we will find ooooooooooooooooout! very soon."
The mist rolls in leaving two dragoness quivering at the sexual oral lashing each is receiving.
(Warning the following comment has sex in it. Only ones allowed to dislike, due to that, are the author, the person, I'm responding too, and myself. Also continues off of my last recent post.)
The mist rolls back to reveal a green dragoness on her back with a crimson dragoness on top of her, nipping at her neck. A black dragon body can be spotted between the dragons the face isn't visible.
"I'll AAAAADDDmit, that I didn't think of THUNDERLAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEE!!!!" The green dragoness screams as the captain of the guards tongue and his mates cunt presses against her own quiving sex. "Like that. 8054567. You make some valid points on maybe the need to train BBBBBBIIIRdhooooooooffffff. But I don't agree with you with your choice of the everfree forest. I don't believe the color coating means that, but we will find out soon enough. If I'm right and red meeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaans the worst option, then Zecora is only going to become suspcious of ZELIX!!!!! and its going to cause us to have a set back. If you are RRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHTTTTTTTT." The dragoness moans as the tongue dances inside of her. "Then we will see evidence that we avoided a disaster. IIIIIIIIII personally want us to visit the SSSSSPPPIIIIKKEEE again, but thats because I want to see how big his cock, and sexual APPETITE grows!!!!! It's a major TURN OOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
The black dragon removes his head from between the two females, his maw dripping from different body fluids. Bring his claw back down to his dripping cock, the dragon smirks as he aims it at the shivering dragoness. "I guess it's time to bring out the 'hardware' you boasted I have." The dragon's smirk grows lewd. "If you want it, you got it!!!"
The mist rolls in as the dragon slams his massive black cock between the two dragoness, while the red one moans the green one quivers at the rumblings from her partner.
(Warning the following comment has sex in it. Only ones allowed to dislike, due to that, are the author, the person, I'm responding too, and myself. Also continues off of my last recent post.)
The mist rolls back to reveal a green dragoness on her back with a crimson dragoness on top of her. A black dragon slams his cock massive black cock between the two dragoness, while the red one moans the green one quivers at the rumblings from her partner.
"8056318, I beliEEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEE." Fluorspar moans, as the back cock now is pushed into her waiting snatch. "I mentioned that as well. We mmmmmhhhh don't know what the color MMMMEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!." The dragoness screams the cock shifts from between the two dragoness, causing them to quake and moan into one another. Hearing the panting and groans from the aroused captain, that is fucking them only turns on the oracle more, making difficult to concentrate.
"I say, WWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEE stick with ahhhh our personal desires now, then IIIIIINNNNNNNNTEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRPPPPREEETTT Later!!!!!! I don't think we SSSSSSSHHHHHHHOOOOOOUUUUUUULLLLLLDDDDDDDD go into the aaaahhhh Everfree yet, but I gruess we AAAAAAAARRRRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I do agree that we need to work with Cheer Cheer CHEERLIEE soon, to COVER up what is happening to Scootaloo!!!! As for Thunderlane, he is a LOSE cannon!!! That needs to be be be be dealt with soon!!!" The dragoness screams as she feels her orgasm start to comes. The sexual frustrations of over the last 28 hours builds within the dragoness, her claws and tail curl as the pleasure starts to course throughout her entire being
"I do like the IIIIIDDDEEEEAAAA of training the slaves/servants. Each one of them needs to become the best TTTTOOOOOOOOOOOLLLL possible!!!! Scootalloo should learn. The dragoness's eyes widen as a load roar comes from abover her, and a warm feeling comes between her legs. Her body responds, her arms and tail shake in pleasure as her body orgasms from the captains cum, with a quick pull the dragon pulls out of the green dragoness covering both of the dragoness with white hot cum, before he slams into his crimson color mate. The roar of the dragoness above her, the clamping of her fangs on the oracle's neck causes the pleasure to intensify, turning her vision white as she comes
The mist rolls in covering the scene of three the passed out dragons, covered in pearly white cum. The orgasm knocking them all unconscious from the intensity.
8077164 **Dislikes all of them for the sex! Yes, I am joking**
8077195 Thanks. I've been waiting to write these scenes, but I ran out of sex phases, and time to write, or I would have responded to yours as well. Thanks for not downvoting the responses due to the sex in them.
A translucent being can be seen intently looking at some cristals before turning and looking at you.
"8077164 I thank you for your support on my ideas. I do wish to say something about one of your other comments though."
8077129
“On a side note Nohen guaranteed that whatever choice we make the result will be in our favor and that the others won’t end in our favor. This means that it is unlikely, though still possible that, the colors mean: amount of success. Also I do not believe this is the case because of all the other factors that could affect the importance of each of the choices. Also I simply believe, like some others, that at least some form of intervention is required in the Everfree. At least knowing what is going on there would be nice. We also have nothing that could truly set us back in the other locations, some damage control should be sufficient. A lack of information still makes your interpretation possible though. To me it simply seems logical that the colors mean: need for intervention, though others thought they mean difficulty. It’s hard to say. The only thing we know for certain is that the event we pick will play out in our favor.”
The being looks as if lost in thought, putting one claw on something that may or may not be a chin.
“This game has become quite a lot more interesting than expected. Requiring strategy, the ability to make predictions, diplomacy and interpreting the words of both friend, foe (,the writer) and other characters. Quite amusing if I do say so myself.”
The mist rolls back, reveals a gloggy green dragoness, with harden cum covering her legs and tail. A red dragoness lies on top of her.
A black nude male dragon resting his snout on the red dragoness rump, smiling contently from the smell of his mate.
The green dragoness rumbles, "I''m not getting up yet, my legs.... They haven't felt like this since a long time. 8078114, From what I gather there are three possibilites.
Option one. Best to worst. Nohen did mention that there was a best and worst options last time. so
Red - Worst
Yellow - Medium
Green - Best
Option two. What need worked on
Red - Address immediately
Yellow - Could use work
Green - No work really needed
Option three. Mass effect inspired, quest line This means that if we wanted to be lets say corruption by force, or subtle corruption
Red - using physical force to corrupt ponies, closest to rape
Yellow - ??????
Green - using subtle means to corrupt ponyville, no one can follow you.
Remember with this one, the different pathways aren't revealed yet, especially since we haven't been to the forest yet."
The mist rolls in as the green dragoness rest her head on the stone floor and falls to sleep.
8077129
The fuck are you talking about training Birdhoof? Maybe you got your brains fucked out slut, cause I'm talking about killing the slimy git and saying he moved to Manehatten or something. And yeah, I do consider using him as cannon fodder against Zecora to be suicide for him, cause even if he survives, he'll be in bad enough shape that we could kill him ourselves without any problem. Unless, of course, he somehow wins. Then he's earned his life. Otherwise, eliminate the useless piece of shit. He's a liability and an active detriment to our plans. We're conquering the world here, we can't afford to be squeamish.
(The Mass Effect option is out, it was already stated that someone was correct when only the first two ideas had been suggested)
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Lets just say, that other interpretations have popped up, that I find intruiging enough, that I might twirk the colour-coding a little bit. So don´t count 8078196 out.
Other than that, the next chapter is already in the works and about to be send to the proofreader. Then I will reveal the solution.
8078196
Honestly, I would have never thought of that last one.