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The one eyed caribou and the griffon were a reference to Cyclops and Wolverine, right?
The oned eyed moose and the wolf would be Odin and Fenrir.
The Minotaur would be Zeus, and that centaur would be a giant, I think.
I don't know about the rest.
I don't know if someone asked before, and I don't want to check the hundreds of comments, so I'll hask here: now that Twilight has ascended, does she have some sort of subliminal and/or unconscious effect over others? Zexis does seem to show hints of more positive traits when interacting with her.
Man, Cheerilee is converted in one dose but Applejack he can barely do more than get her at a big pressure point. I guess the Elements are really a cut above the rest regarding willpower. Makes sense, though.
Zexis should beware; Applejack's friends will come to her aid the moment they realize she needs it, even if she won't admit it. They're annoying nosey do-gooders, especially regarding their friends. She'd have to be seriously hypnotized to deceive them anyway.
8324681
That would be an interesting twist, for Zexis to need to resist becoming a better person. Not sure how well it would fit a corruption fetish fic, though.
8324722
This fic keeps surprising me with every chapter, so you never know with this writer.
8324681
Last time I checked Marvel comics were not mythology.
I changed the description slightly to make it easier. Tip: Where are the Giffon Aeries and what kind of myhology overlaps with that?
8324719
Well, considering that Cheerilee once fell under the influence of a simple love poison, made by some kids, almost instantly....
I vote we go corrupt rainbow dash! We could make a magic circle and put her in the center and have a demon posess her... Yay.
As for twilight... *Hoofpalm* i dont know i just hope she goes away... How will we ever trick her into failing with her tracker! Ahhhhh
Rainbow dash should be the highest priority though! (Disclaimer: do not listen to me i will make us get caught)
The extra activities for Colts and Fillies; they don't seem to happy about them, so maybe give out candy or something for a reward at first, get them to associate positive sensations with the classes. And who knows, maybe you could spike the candy or something.
That incense is definitely something we're gonna have to explore, though - if we can get the class to inhale the lot of it during those extra lessons, it would make them much more suggestible and horny - two things we can use to our advantage. If we can corrupt the kids, we can probably move on to some of the parents, gain their resources and whatnot. But that comes later. Right now, i think a good pair of targets would be Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. It would help you get on the Crusaders' good sides, not to mention Scootaloo can vouch for you - and maybe Applebloom too, if she's far enough along. Once they trust you implicitly, they'll be much easier to corrupt, and they could open up paths to some of the Elements of Harmony! Applejack would probably be a good start, considering how far Applebloom has come, not to mention how we've started planting some ideas in the head of the Element of Honesty! If we can get her to admit the absolute truth - that Big Mac should be calling the shots, not her!- that would be a major step in the right direction!
8324752
Ah; you said all but two were references to mayor deities, so I thought you were making a small reference to them.
One-eyed Moose is without a doubt Odin and that makes the wolf Fenrir.
I am guessing the Kirin-mare (undead) is Izanami and sister/wife to Izanagi from Shinto
Balor for the one eyed Giant and the Laughing Gryphon would be Nuada
Our bearded friend is Zeus without a doubt, but the creature, I really can't think of anyone other than Cronus that would fight Zeus and be a actual threat, other than his brothers. (and his scary as fuck wife-sister)
I have no idea who the Alicorn and Black draconequus are, also no clue who the shattered dragon is (though it does remind me of NWN2's dead dragon who fought the King of Shadows)
You can see the translucent being floating in mid air as if resting on something below him. After which he begins to speak.
8324953
'While using the incence on the foals is a good idea we shouldn't corupt them fully by maxing out their lust. This would couse to many complications such as obviouse behavioral changes. The urges that result from that lust are far too easily discovered. If not due to the noise, the smell and if not by that then by a parent or other adult walking in on them doing whatever.'
'As far as the class goes I want to take things slow to limit the chance of discovery and make the changes more gradual.'
'All my other plans remain the same, at least untill the next interlude when we can finaly increace our int.'
8325223
The centaur 'Zeus' would be fighting would be one of the giants the Olimpic Gods defeated in the myths; they were described as having several extremities in them.
BZZZZZZZT...........Click!
Finally!......... It took this dam machine long enough. I apologise for my absent my assistant required a bit of retraining. Any way after looking at the last couple of communication I have to agree with many of our fellow contributor that we need to get control and corrupt the rest of the teacher for the school in order to secure it. I would recommend that Cheerilee call a teacher meeting for all the teacher to meet the new teacher Zexis a bit of a social get together. From there Zexis can spike what ever drinks are severed and put the general suggestion that all the teacher trust him that he seems like a nice stallion and an excellent teacher. From there pick out the target from among the teacher and focus getting them on Zexis side one at a time. Hopefully there is a music teacher with some talent for creating music which we could use to create some subliminal message that we could use to help corrupt more ponies.
Next we have a couple opportunities coming up involving Twilight and co search for Zecora. Firstly we must get Zecora ready to be transported into the Everfree Forest and leave her in a safe enough location that we can find her later with Twilight I would recommend something like a large patch of poison joke it should be a relativity safe place as such a plant would be avoid by most creatures of the Everfree due to it nature. I also recommend that Zexis put some sort of commands on Zecora to make sure she stay put in whatever location we leave her other wise if she wonder of a gets killed in the Everfree forest it could cause some complications. When we go into the Everfree forest I recommend that we take Redheart with us as it we can use her to suggest that Zecora stay in the hospital for recovery also just encase Zecora gets hurt during the time she is alone.
Now the big Opportunity I see here is that we can use this chance to start corrupting Starlight glimmer or at least get her less suspicious of us. To do this after we recover Zecora we call to the Everfree forest and have its timber wolves attack us and make some way to split the party so that we have Zexis and Starlight in one group maybe leading the timber wolves away and Twilight and the rest escaping out of the forest with Zecora. We can justify it that Zexis has a good knowledge of the forest and it dangers but would like some magical muscle to back him up and that Redheart is needed to take care of Zecora, Twilight has the authority to get the guard to come looking for them if they do not return by the next day and well spike needs to help protect them as they escape he is a dragon after all. If we can pull this off we lead Starlight deeper into the Everfree find a "safe" place to hold up for the night and over some of our "rations" during the break from there we can bond with her over something like how despite how peaceful Equestria is it not always fair and not everyone is treated equally using how the racist veiw ponies seem to have of other racist use Zebra as a example. If she make a snide or racist remark make sure that Zexis does not get angry but instead declare how disappointed he is that the student of the Princess of friendship is racist and that you think Twilight would be disappointed in her. I know there is a lot of holes or thing that can wrong with this plan but I think it has some potential but I would appreciate any constructive criticism or suggestion to the plan.
Another advantage with Zecora being taking out of the picture the Ponyville Spa now no longer has it usual supplier for herbs for it special baths. It might be a idea to set up our flower trio to be their new suppliers and once we have some spare time or more control over the hospital or school start corrupting the spa ponies as it would make an excellent place to corrupt the citizen of Ponyville in particular ponies like Rairty.
Finally I know I said it a number of times but Zexis needs to get his own place both to help drop any suspicion about his extended stay with the flower trio and to give him space and privacy to do some of his other activities. I still think using Filthy Rich to help with this would be a good idea and if we can corrupt him we can use his help in corrupting Applejack by making him give a loan when Big Macs asks.
Lastly in regards to our continuation attempt in corrupting Applejack we need to build on the failure theme we started with Applejack and that she can not let the farm fail and she is willing to let Big Mac have an attempt if it mean that the farm does not fail. Once she gives Big Mac a chance and he succeeds (with Zexis help) we get here to associate Big Mac with the farm doing well and not failing and that any idea Big Mac has will help the Farm even if that idea in the end is whoring Applejack for some extra bits and she Applejack will do it cause if she does not then the farm will fail. But this is just my idea were we could go with this and once again I welcome criticism and suggestion for improvement.
well that it for now
yours sincerely
From the Archives of Enlightenment, Forbidden Division
Click!
The mist rolls back to reveal an order looking blue dragon looking at some papers on his crystal table.
"All this talk of gods, demons, and what not..... ugh. It gives me a headache. Zircon desires to tell me about some of my new responsibilities as a less god."
The blue dragon gives a pause scratching his maw. "You know... I never thought of myself as a god or even a lesser god. I just want to bring dragons back to our true selves. And to get rid of those stupid rules placed in by Tundra."
Looking away from his notes the blue dragon waves his claws. From the table emerges a small crystal version of ponyville and the everfree forest.
"Now the first issue is that spell. I think it's too late to tamper with the spell. So we can only change the results. I say, first make sure Zecora's mind is broken. Then place her here." The dragon's claw points to the edge part of the everfree forest close to sweet apple acres. "If you can plant some evendence, like appleblooms bow or a fake spear with Zecora at this location, Twilight and company may think she was going to attack Applebloom again. Then keep her quiet by insisting she be kept at the hospital in restraints and under the carrying eyes of Nurse Redheart. Who will make sure she doesn't say anything against Zelix."
"On that note though. It seems like the lack of intelligence is catching up to us. We need to make an ally that is smart and will work with you Zelix, so you can handle challenges of intelligence in the future."
"Now, next issue. The boys are finally going to grow into studs. I say, use the insence. Just like a few and then start showing those colts some porn or even fuck their teacher in front of them. That should start bringing things around"
"As for the Apple Family. I say that amulet may be great in allowing AppleJack to admit she is a failure. Heck it may allow her to say that Mac was right. If not the suggestion powder must be used and then only when she is down in the dumps on herself do you use the pills. That way you can crush her will while not raising her corruption too high."
"Now then excuse me. I need to look over this thought placement spell. If I can learn it, Zircon says I can start corrupting dragons without using my crystals."
The mist rolls in as the dragon start tracing runes with his claws.
8325223
I beleive the white alicorn with the red mane is faust.
8326181
Now that you say it, it feels rather obvious, still i had automatically amused the alicorn was male for some odd reason. Thank you.
8325480
Hmm, I might be more behind on mythology than I'd like to think, thank you for that information.
I know I make a lot of choices that aren't practical but here is an actual good idea! Part of it should be obvious, part of it not.
Here it is: The incense should be used with the class with the colts to make them horny and more interested in fucking mares, along with the suggestion powder. And in the fillies class, it can be used to make them more receptive to the idea of... deferring to the colts. Letting them experiment with them :D. They should dreammmmm of being dominated by the young colts... *eyes gleam for a moment* Drinks can be served, maybe punch. But how can we be sure everypony will take the drinks!? hmmm.... Maybe say you are trying a new recipe and want ponies to vote on whether it is good or not! Say you want to get a count of the proportion of how well it is liked between colts and fillies. That way, it will be even more sure that every single one of them will drink it! Along with the incense it will be an amazing scene!
he should corrupt twilight first, in turn she will corrupt spike due to his loyalty, the they can help keep a lid on who knows the memory rewrite might come in hoof for that
Also maybe we should visit vinyl scratch sometime, she is cute :D ! I wonder if there are any lesbian ponies... I bet she and Octavia would make a good couple... or rainbow-
*sees Nohen about to throw something at me*
ahhhhh *runs away, giggling maniacally*
Hey Zexis here is another suggestion... You should open the mares to more fetishes, its been kind of vanilla so far, except for the most adorable Scootaloo. The more exotic and depraved, the better... like hoof worship... watersports... Hypnosis addiction... Oh there are so many options! *eyes gleam evilly*... Zexis, you represent the god of lust, he would like kinks! I bet the mares already have them and their fantasies could be coaxed out!! Ahahahahaha it would be so much fun!! Experiment, Experiment!!! yessssss
edit: wait wait... for you... you would not care about the mares fantasies... only what the males want... that's even better isn't it!
As they say, if you want something done right, you need to do it by yourself, maybe it could be better to check how is going with Apple Bloom. There was a problem at first with Scootaloo but it was soon passed, we don't want any other accident happen again, so maybe it could be good to check that everything is correct before you try to use her, we don't want her to break the suggestions and tell it to her sister, then the plans could be destroyed in a moment.
*The figure frowned as he leaned his chin on his hands. Looking to be in deep through. "We are at great risk here. Princess Sparkle managed to finish her tracking spell. Which means that shouldn't we act quickly she will track her to the basement of the orphanage. And because you have been seen publicly with that fool Hoof many times it will put you in a lot of suspicion. Use the time before you join her in 'tracking' Zecora to get her back to the forest to validate your lie of her still being in there. Then. Get rid of any trace of your DNA from her. We don't know if they can identify you by your DNA or not but we still should get rid of that particular evidence incase they can. This should be top priority. Ask for Big Mac if you and him can use a card of his with some hay to smuggle Zecora to the forest and dump her somewhere random inside of it and get either one of the flower sisters to make a reason of why you're going to the forest with Big Mac with a cart. Like needing a lot of wood or something similar"
The figure then sighed and said "Goddamn it Eros. The Avatar is an idiot"*
Here is my take on what we should do about Zecora. As 8326016 said, leave her in the forest, and the plan with the wolves is great! But how about this: Maybe zexis can use his magic and affinity to plants to create a tentacle beast to fuck her until we get there, to try and explain why she is in a lust addled state. Then, twilight will not be suspicious of us!
After this, we can take her to the hospital where nurse redheart is already on our side... Then, nurse Redheart can say later that she made a full recovery and left on her own, and we can transport her again to wherever we want her.
We can also use charm on twilight to win her trust even more. On a side note, I think we should corrupt more elements before trying to ambush her. She is going to be so tough to take down
One orange and one blue light turns on, highlighting a figure.
"Greetings. To begin with, I'm glad to know that the tome had caused no lasting damage. I would still investigate it, make sure it isn't harmful. And do not ignore Zecora's little diary in it; her insight may prove valuable about the Zebra Lands as well as some insight into alchemy.
"For now, though, that has to be ignored. We need to ditch Zecora as soon as we can do so without being spotted. I would prefer it if we just took her to a cliff in the Everfree and shoved her off it, but I imagine my associates would prefer to keep her alive and in use. In more then one way.
"We could overload her with an aphrodisiac, find a spot for her to be in and carve out a wooden sex toy for her to use. The shock of her appearance should awaken some sort of... primal urge in those who find her.
"Do not proceed further with Applejack until Zecora is fully dealt with. When you get back to her carry on as you were; slow, subtly and steady is how you break her. More importantly, we have to be careful we don't draw undue attention to her, or at least make it seem as if her troubles are based on the farm failing.
"Carry on with the school as you are. Once more, break them slowly."
Outside of the door there is the sound of gunfire, the shadowed figure turning his head as he reached into his suit, drawing a pistol.
"Until then, we will be watching."
The camera shuts off with the sound of a kicked in door.
8327360
Zexis doesn't give them a fetish; just brings out what they've repressed.
8328474
Well, he is the representative of the god of lust, and kinks increase lust, so it would make sense if they got kinks from his ministrations :3
The plot thickens. And I don't just mean Cheerilee's.
8328474
8327360
I wouldn't be so sure about that. Suggestions are a powerful thing, as is conditioning. If he pushes somepony into a particular fetish, why shouldn't that pony develop it?
At the very least, it might be fun to try..!
Zexis, you're getting better at identifying who is who among your students. Good! Twist is obviously pretty smart, which is a good thing. Smart pets are useful, as long as they're properly obedient. Rumble is getting there. Snips and Snails are troublemakers; see if you can tap that potential for your purposes. They're not book smart as such, but they're talented spies and a penchant for mischief makes for skilled and eager trainers for the filly-pets. After all, you are the perfect evidence, eh? Continue with the plans for the school. The incense might help, as 8324953 8327323 have noted. Lay the groundwork for a new generation of masters and slave cunts. Keep in mind the idea of the farm play I mentioned, just as one possible thing. And prepare yourself for any spontaneous visit from concerned and/or overeager parents, they need to either be quick-talked into leaving or given a dose so they believe they saw something completely benign.
To everyone: Zexis is becoming emotionally attached to Princess Twilight to a dangerous degree. I'm not sure if he's simply taken with her beauty and power, though I suspect it's something else. Perhaps Zexis is falling under the influence of her portfolio. Let's not forget we are dealing with a demigoddess, one of Friendship no less who is reaching out to our vessel. He could be falling under her sway.
8334686
A text only reply is sent.
[I wouldn't jump to conclusions on Twilight having an effect on Zexis in that way until evidence is provided. However we cannot ignore the possibility this could happen.]
8334686
Persenaly I don't see Zexis falling for Twilight and her falling for him as such a bad thing. I see it a a useful tool to make Zexis see things from a different point of view then what he was tought back home. Though you probably don't care about that. What you probably will care about is that love blinds. If we can get Twilight to fall for Zexis we can make Twilight ours. It will give us room to experiment with how to corrupt her by blinding her with love.
And the idea of Zexis falling under her sway is something I yet need to see the results of. Because if anything has changed it is only the way Zexis acted around Twilight herself. It is true that it is a possibility but it is either not verry strong or only an aura effect around her. Either way the corruption aroumd Zexis should be sufficient to undo this. Even if there is risk persuing a relationship with Twilight will yeald benefits and could give us a lot of new information eother way.
8326016
It is good to have you back, kinda mised you in last chapters discusion.
Pleasentries aside. I support your plan regarfing Zecora and the spell. Though there is one thing that may not be possible. Just the wolves might not be enough to split the party and we might be stck with some one els then Starlight. This might complecate things but it might also allow us to get closer to Twilight and figure out if she is actually effecting Zexis in the way Derpsby is sujesting or if it is just Zexis taking a liking to her or even a crush we can exploit.
We also don't nesesarily need the flower trio to suply the spa to corrupt its visitors. Zecora might still be able to make potions depending on how broken she is. The result is still the same but we might be able to make more by also using Zecora to suply the herbs we desire them to have.
8336630
8336666
I am indeed ringing the warning bells early. And I am aware Zexis has been feeling affectionate towards Princess Twilight Sparkle for a little while now, and how that opens her up to his influence if he, or we, can find a way to exploit her emotional vulnerability. However, I am also worried this process is a two-way street. At the very end there, Zexis felt guilty for lying to her. As you both noted, we should monitor this development closely, as well as perhaps prepare to feed Zexis a few convenient self-deceptions to separate how he feels towards her from his (i.e. our) overall goals. It wouldn't do if, say, he suddenly hesitates to corrupt Applejack because she's Twilight Sparkle's friend.
8336838
[Again, we've yet to have anything conclusive; it could be simply Zexis has a level of empathy; more towards those he likes. Regardless once our itinerary is cleared we should move to corrupt her. Slowly as not to raise alarm. Still, best we stay watchful.]
Zexis you want to go on a long romantic walk with Twilight Sparkle! Just imagine how beautiful she is with her soft purple alicorn fur.... and how friendly! She intrigues you... You can't stop thinking about how friendly she is... how much you want to be around her. you feel your heart fluttering as you begin to think about Twilight Sparkle...
[8334686 don't look at me like that, I don't know what motivated me to write this! ]
[ Well since Nohen said making suggestions on enchantments would be appreciated I think Zexis and his growing accomplices need some glamour type charms. Things along the lines of "do not notice me" or "I'm boring" could be useful for when Zexis and his allies need/want to do things in public that may arouse suspicion such as moving Zecora back into the Everfree, I know invisibility charms or noise cancelling charm would be cool but I don't think Zexis is at that level yet. Also some charms to make ponies trust whoever wearing the charm could be useful particular since as a Zebra we have constantly been having uphill battles with our first impressions because of racial profiling.
Another type of enchantment I think would be useful would be some sort of listen bug putting it in key places or places where a lot of ponies talk/gossip could be interesting. Might let us get an idea of what the local populace thinks and hear potential useful rumours or information we could use to our advantage. Anyway there just some idea I thought of any one else got some suggestion beyond the obvious ones E.g Strength, Agility, Magic cancelling ect....... ]
*In The Basement there is only darkness... Until the drifter opens the door, letting a little light into the sanctuary of dankness... And falls flat on the unmade bed and sleeps for a week*
"Oh... Well then it seems that I have to change some of my plans with this development. Oh great Kek! Lend me the power for this politically incorrect cause!"
*Entering incognito mode*
Revaluation of priorities required: TL:DR, Dump Zebra bitch in the woods and be smart about it! Then get her to the Aryan slut in the hospital.
Development of tracker faster then anticipated (Purple smart is smart). New first priority should be to transport Zecora to the Everfree forest in order to avoid detection. Recommend immediate action be taken to carry Zecora as deep into the forest as safely as it is possible. If too many possible witnesses during transportation wait until nightfall, use disguise/vehicle or proceed with second priority. Usages of a safe road if existing recommended, preferably to the castle of the two sisters and recruitment of Birdhoof for assistance with transportation. Sedation and other precaution recommended depending on Zecoras state of mind as it is imperative that Zecora will not expose Zexis. WARNING: Princess Twilights and Starlight Glimmers number and potential of learned spells unknown, high possibility of interference and experimentation on Zecora if given the time, recommend minimal time for examination and ensure immediate transportation of Zecora to hospital in the care of nurse Readheart who must be told beforehand. Keep visitors away form Zecora in the hospital to avoid potential complications. The importance is time taken to arrive at Zecoras location for more time to carry out possible opportunity.
Possible opportunity during operation: TL:DR, Get rid of walking lie detector and seduce purple smart.
Interference from Applejack must be avoided in order for opportunity to work, recommend using new suggestion to persuade her to stay on the farm instead of following along in the tracking if needed. The opportunity is the one suggested by 8326016 (Just you wait you faggot! I will hack my way in to your archive one day!). But the risk posed by the timberwolfs is to great in my opinion to go through with. Like 8327328, I suggests focusing on Princess Twilight instead of Starlight to try and win her affection, casual flirting and whispering some steps away from the main group might be the better option. 8334686 as this (fine faggot) fellow drifter has noticed the risk of Zexis growing attached to Princess Twilights is a possibility, however like 8336630 (I will hack you too one day faggot!) and 8336666 (do you know the boogeyman?), I do believe that more information is required as the potential benefits with gaining her trust and love is immense and should be pursued until the potential danger is proven.
*Autism low* *Sings the My Little Pony theme out loud at Burger King* *Charging*
Second priority remains form previous suggestion: 8297378 TL:DR Check up on Apple Bloom you faggot! Remember that she knew how to make the talisman from Luna in a dream! Find out why!
Alterations include going to the hospital immediately if possible. Prioritize Applebloom, staff is secondary and usage of Aphrodisiac-Incense now possible for complete corruption. NOTE: if corruption is to low at arrival a subtle approach of one at a time will be required.
Many fellow (faggots) drifters has offered plans for the school and many of them are of good quality. 8327323,8324953 and 8334686 have my support. But like (...Dragon faggot with a big dick... Not like I am jealous or anything!) 8326049 said, intelligences needs to be improved, as such actions involving the school should be secondary to hospital were potential for quicker corruption is greater.
Prioritize Applejack after upgrade session in order to gather necessary abilities.
Find out who got the lust charm from the Flower trio.
Important note as 8328300 commented on. WARNING: possibility of Zexis discovering his true nature low but the possibility as risen. Recommend note to be taken by fellow drifters of this possibility.
(8338022 and then the get some sex on the beach! They are walking on a beach right?)
That is all for now.
*Exiting incognito mode* *Deleting browser history*
8325223 and the two subsequent replies from 8325480 and 8326181 I believe to be correct. I believe The black draconequus is Death/The Grimm Reaper but the dragon has me perplexed. It can be Satan, Warhammer fantasies Celestial Dragon Emperor of Cathay or the holy spirit from Christianity.
8338182
The listening trinket is an interesting idea. How about a portable peephole? Put it against a wall, look what's on the other side! A closing/opening charm, an air-light amulet that makes what it's hung to easier to carry; a friendly chatter charm that lets allies exchange short mental messages, a traitorous talent talisman that turns a pony's talent against them (Starlight has put research into that, Zexis has a reference point to go on), an amulet of alternate auras that fakes somepony else's magical signature, and of course Periapts of Perversion and Fetish Fetishes, upgrades to the simple Lust Charms that instill particular desires in their victims!
By the by, something to note about equine magic: It tends to be more powerful or even require ancient languages and/or rhymes. Zecora talked almost completely in rhyme, likely because of the power it offered her. Zexis and we should perhaps keep this in mind. Spells, charms, artifacts and alchemical products might benefit from it.
8324681
I believe they are in reference to the Tuatha De Danann.
Angus has an eye that he keeps covered, as anything he looks at with it withers and dies, and there's another with a silver hand that I forget the name of.
8348182
Ok, thanks :D
Here are my ideas for enchantments,
To start with the idea that certain enchantments would require certain materials. For example, to cast a spell using an enchantment that belonged to the fire element you would need a ruby. Another idea could be that certain materials can store more powerful enchantments or can at least store more energy.
I am not sure this is as it really is but when I made these I took into account that anyone with high magical affinity has at least some natural resistance to the effects of enchantments.
The skill requirements I will mostly just leave to you as I don’t know how much skill with enchanting would be needed for a enchantment of a certain power to make it balanced. The skill requirement I will place after behind mostly resemble what I think would be required to make the enchantment and also how much time it will take to make the enchantment. Everything may need a revamp
Now on to the enchantments,
One For All:
This enchantment is placed on a wearable item or an item that can be held and will give the wearer or holder any natural abilities the maker has. With this I mean that the wearer will become as intelligent, strong, fast, etc. as the maker. If the wearer has a stat higher than the maker nothing happens. This will also not include magical abilities if the wearer isn’t capable of using magic and even with a high affinity for magic won’t allow the wearer to cast spells. If the maker has affinity for magic it will still be passed on, though only unicorns will be able to gain anything from it. The wearer also won’t gain any stat increases from the maker beyond that which the enchanter possessed at the time of enchanting, the enchanter essentially embeds his own capabilities into the enchantment so others can use these as well.
Requirements: high enchantment skill, any item capable of storing the energy of the enchantment.
All For One:
This enchantment is the opposite of the One For All enchantment. It requires at least two items to function. One of these items is the recipient and the other(s) is(are) the donor(s). The items need to be connected with each other for the enchantment to function. The donor sends the wearers stats to the recipient. This process will weaken the donor and makes them very easy to tire. The recipient will always have his or her stats increased even if the donor is inferior to the recipient. The stat increases will become weaker and weaker as the difference between the stats of characters increases. This means that after a certain point some of the donors will be too weak for them to give any stat increases. If the donor’s stats increases the recipient will also gain from that stat increase. This will still not allow non unicorns to cast magic. A donor can’t give their power to more than one recipient. If they would the energy drain would weaken them to the point that they might die.
Requirements: high enchantment skill and very high enchantment skill if the amount of donors exceeds 2 and any two (or more) items capable of storing the energy of the enchantment.
Message:
This enchantment allows the user of the item with this enchantment to speak with anyone who also has an item with his enchantment. The communication functions the same as telepathy. It thus doesn’t need speech to function and you will thus only hear what the being with the enchanted item wishes to say to you.
Requirements: medium enchantment skill and any item
Enchantment of spells
Allows the enchanter to embed a spell into an object. How often the spell can be cast depends on the energy cost of the spell and how much energy is/ can be stored inside the object.
Requirements: any enchanting skill depending on the difficulty of the spell and some affinity for or knowledge of the school of magic the spell belongs to.
Enchantment of thought
This enchantment will embed a certain thought or idea, specified by the enchanter, into the mind of the wearer. How long it will take for an effect to be seen depends on the willpower of the target. Depending on the skill of the enchanter this will be more or less noticeable to the target.
Requirements: any skill level, any item
Enchantment of magic absorption
This enchantment will absorb the magic of anything around it unless the enchantment can’t store any more magic. This enchantment can be targeted towards a certain for of magic and can’t negate spells that are already cast and no longer need to be fed magic to continue. A good example of this last fart would be a fireball. Magic is used to unleash it but not to maintain it.
Requirements: any skill and any item
Enchantment of unimportance
The wearer or holder of the item will be deemed as unimportant by all those who see him or her unless they are protected against the effect. Depending on the kill of the enchanter the user will simply be deemed unimportant or be deemed so unimportant that even the mind doesn’t deem it necessary to remember he or she even exists. This means that a skilled enchanter can make anyone forget anyone was there even after they bumped into each other, the mind rationalizing instantly that it is to unimportant to remember he bumped into someone.
Requirements: any skill, and any item
Aura of Fear
Causes anyone not protected against the effect to fear the one the maker intended them to fear. If the one that is intended to be feared in unprotected against the effect they will start to fear themselves. Those with minor protection will only feel a sense of dread.
Requirements: medium skill, any item
Aura of Reason
Those within the aura will rationalize anything and everything they see hear and feel as normal or at least as something that would normally occur or that they would normally desire to do, hear or see. Those protected against the effect won’t see sings any differently of course.
Requirements: high enchantment skill, any item
Enchantment of Negation
This enchantment negates any spells cast within a certain radius. The enchantment does this by dispersing the magic energy. Thus the more energy that goes into a spell the harder it is for the enchantment to negate and the more skill the enchanter needed to have to negate it.
Requirements: any skill, any item
Tattoo of Spellcraft
This tattoo allows the user to cast spells like a unicorn. These tattoos will never allow the casting of anything beyond mid-tier spells and will cause a ton of strain on the body. A mid-tier spell might even cause bones to break if the caster makes a mistake during the casting of the spell. The caster will still need affinity for magic to be able to cast spells.
Requirements: High enchantment skill and the ability to make detailed tattoos so the enchantment can function properly.
Enchantment of Control
By placing two eye patches, or other items with the enchantment that completely cover both eyes, the targets mind will be assaulted to become completely obedient to the first being they see after the enchanted items are removed. This last part can be bypassed by a master enchanter but for those of less skill and to meat less mental resistance the target will only know who he or she has to give his or her mind, body and soul to by laying they eyes on him or her. This enchantment does not change memories or skills beyond installing the idea that they want to obey the first being they see without question. This process causes much pain if the target resists, this enchantment will also only function if the target is completely aware of their surroundings. If the pieces that cover the eyes are removed before the process is complete the target might just have a headache or lose consciousness depending on how far the process was to completion. Furthermore all process will be removed if the eyes are able to see again before the enchantment has completed its work.
Requirements: high enchantment skill, two items that cover the eyes and can store enough energy to complete the ritual.
Energy storage
This enchantment can store energy that can be used by other enchantments or spells. This can also be painted on the body as a tattoo.
Requirements: any enchanting skill, and if applicable skill with making tattoos
Enchantment of Fleshcraft
This enchantment allows anyone to guide the changing of the body of the being effected by the enchantment. The larger the changes that are wished to be made the longer it will take to change the body.
medium enchanting skill.
well there you have it everything I could come up with regarding enchantments that wasn't either overpowered or too generic.
hope it gave you all some ideas.
Remember that corrupted memory potion from earlier? Can only be used once, but will completely corrupt a target by changing and corrupting their memories? I would save such a Potion for a very difficult target, someone like Twilight - someone who will be extremely hard to break or convert. I would recommend we save her for later, but keep that recipe close. Zexis is certainly in her good graces, but I would suggest waiting to use into on her (or another target) until we have more support in town.
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Nuada of the silver arm/hand was the first king of the Tuatha Dé Danann. Parallel with Lludd in Wales and Nodens in Gaul.
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Silver hand in Gaelic being Argetlam.
I'm familiar with MOST of them. I just have trouble with names.
I think zexis should be able to empower his minions. then you could write missions with complementary abilities and stuff... if you wanted to. you could have more combat centric abilities then, which opens it up more
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if we can get access to the right enchantments we would be able to empower them by giving them enchanted items. Or we could enchant their bodies.
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Magical tattoos... of course.
Ponies are affected by symbol magic. They all develop their own during their lives. A sickness exists that causes them to develop more, like a destiny cancer. Zexis himself has proven the corruption he causes can change a pony's Cutie Mark. And Starlight Glimmer created a spell that tears the mark off and replaces it with a fake one that shackles the victim to general abilities far below even mediocrity.
Imagine if, say, a new shop offers body art. Among those, tattoos? Created with magical ink drawn from the many interesting ingredients Zexis has access to, which also include cleverly-disguised patterns?
The sickness is on them now. Inscribed in their skin. Magic seeping into their bodies, altering them, altering their thoughts...
Half-price for anypony wanting to tattoo the name of their crush/lovers/spouse on themselves. They won't know if there is a tiny reference to Zexis somewhere, making them more inclined to follow his ideology. And if they knew, they wouldn't care for long.
Finnish, Norse, Hebrew, Greek, and Japanese mythologies all in one chapter, and that's only in regard to the various hells. I had trouble trying to get all of the allusions in the depiction of the Sin War. It's not too often you see references to Irish myth.
Hitting this chapter I honestly hope Twilight doesn't get corrupted but instead falls in love with Zexis.
You should teach the trio of flowers to please other mares. There are not enough stallions for all and they are not as tough as you. try to corrupt without using drugs, you will have to do it at some point.