The world has changed. What happened is not exactly clear but what ponies across Equestria know is that there Princess have battled. A night started early and lasted too long and a there is now a face on the moon
To a creature named Spinswebs and her family clan this means nothing, soon it will mean everything. They are now on a mission that here mother says will change there lives for the better forever A mission to capture and subdue a The Pony princess Celestia. Spinswebs has always know ponies to be weak soft skittish creatures and views this as a simple mission to and easy better life for her clan. She even has key role to play. What could possibly go wrong on such a simple mission.
This is interesting, you're just lacking some grammar and description! Maybe go to a group like this one and ask someone to proofread for you. You've got an interesting idea, so make sure you polish it up!
Will all the chapters be so short?