Thanks to Starlight's spell, Discord sends his past self a present: his future memories. This timeline will see Discord aiding the young alicorn sisters and the pony tribes. Still, they'll have to learn to live with a bit more Chaos in their lives.
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HALLELUJAH!!!!
Awesome Chapter!
Question: Will Discord prevent Sombra's bad ending and Changelings' birth? He can just make Sombra a Unicorn, change Sirens' Gems so they will feed on happiness and so on...
I'm shipping Lilycord so hard right now, along with Clovercord, Pansycord, and Dislestia.
this story is quickly rising to be one of my all time favorites. and im pretty sure star swirl is actually a distant ancestor of Pinkie Pie. The way he acts just seems to fit
I think I'm going to like the LilyCord shipping this will inspire, also can't wait for more starswirl and discord shinanigins
I'm sure I just woke up most of the neighborhood, OH WELL! Waiting for more
I'm thinking poly cord for the win!
Fuckin' hell, do I even need to say it...
I AM YOUR GOD, BRING ME ALL YOUR-
... This is real now...
I-I was just... oh, forget it!
I love your depiction of Discord, he is just so delightfully unpredictable. And Lily is possibly my favorite OC you've introduced so far, because of her hilarious bluntness.
... I think I really like Lily Frost.
should those D and Country matters count as Mature or still Teen? also Hope the you post the next one soon before christmas or on christmas...
I have two things to say:
One:
Sard. A yellow or brownish-red variety of chalcedony.
Chalcedony. A microcrystalline type of quartz occurring in several different forms, including onyx, agate and jasper.
Why use that in place of 'fuck'?
Two:
I actually had to open a new tab to check the rating of this story. Is teen the right rating? Either way. Ew.
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I think you forgot your [/quote] closing quote tag.
I know someone pointed it out in the last chapter, but there seems to be an awful lot of smirking going on. There are other expressions and tones people can use, I promise.
That aside, I'm curious to see where you'll go with this story. Rewriting history can be all sorts of fun.
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If that's "ew" you must have a real hard time with the fact that changelings are a thing.
Oh gods...I could not stop laughing as I read this. Why have I not discovered it before?
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I've worked with a few older (and one old enough to be my grandmother) women like that. Had one (that older one) of them sexually harass me on several occasions (then one day she disappeared. I can only assume she did it to the wrong person and got fired), but since i was fairly sure she was joking I didn't report her.
What is it with Delaware and cougars?
This story is peculiar and I like it
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I'm not talking about the changing, I'm talking a about the subjects of 'sex' and 'Discord' being used in tandem.
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Ahhh, I see. He certainly does have a... unique figure. But there's no sex tag, so it should be k.
...Unless you have an overactive imagination. You might be in trouble in that case.
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Not overactive. Tangential. Think of one thing, mind goes other places. It's the kind of mind that you'd go insane seeing.
But but but Discord your changing things... if Luna does not go all NMM then there wont be a need for the elements. or rainbow and fluttershy also Bring on the virgins
Congratulations
Ok, this was simply hilarious XD
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I'll admit I also raised an eyebrow at that. Not that I minded it really (though, back off Lily! Celestia and Luna saw him first!) but the story did jump from being relatively kid friendly PG into a very hard Teen at that point.
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The smirk is Discord's default expression after all. Throw in fandom!Luna, fandom!Celestia, and fandom!Starswirl and it's not all that surprising that the smirks are flying fast and heavy.
7804401 wrote : "change Sirens' Gems so they will feed on happiness"
I'd also like to see him change them to humans, teach them how to use guns, and to fight with martial arts too.
...
I've been reading too much 7DSJ lately.
This made me laugh more than it should have, especially when i said it in a gangsta voice
Wait... If Lilly Frost was the ancestor of Minnute, would the future changed because she married Discord and not her future husband??
Also I have to wonder if things we'll be different... Like is there going to be new villains, because in any changes to the timeline always causes new villains to rise.
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Yeah, but even so. The English language has a rich and varied array of words and expressions that can be used to describe what a character (or set of characters, in this case) are doing and how they're feeling. To keep using the same word over and over again for so many different characters is both repetitive and puts an unnecessary restraint on their characterization.
4 Chapters and already on my wall of fame? Congrats.
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While it is true that it is a rich and varied language, each word does have it's own feel and meaning. You can throw in a variety of words that have similar meanings but you're going to change the feel of a scene eventually. Grins, Leers, Smug/Sly Looks, ect... All could replace the Smirk but none are exactly the same (or they are but take more words to convey). At that point it becomes a question of maintaining your meaning/feeling vs word repetition.
As an aside, while I can certainly imagine the word smirk was used a lot (I simply took your comment at face value, I didn't check), I can say that I personally didn't notice it used to such a degree that it bothered me. Of course this is something that will affect each person differently (and even then it can depend on their mood at the time).
Awesome chapter. Im glad we can learn more about the different ancestors and founders of each tribe. I can't wait for negotiations to resume next chapter. I wonder if more councilors will accompany their leaders to meet Discord. I think we may need Discord to invent Lucha Libre to help these ponies settle their differences.
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That's what it means now, but sard actually was the predecessor to fuck, used around medieval times. How it got to its current definition, I don't know, but I thought using sard was a nice touch for something set this far in the past.
As for the other point.(shrug) As far as I know, mentioning sex and sex organs doesn't break the T rating.
Shame that you can only give thumbs up once, instant favorite :)
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For the first bit there, you're absolutely right. Using a different word or words would absolutely change the tone of the sentence, and that's the whole point. Unless all of the characters are making the exact same expression, with the exact same intent, every time, having slight differences between each use is a good thing rather than a bad one.
As for the second, it is entirely possible that I notice things like that more readily simply because I've trained myself to do so, though since I'm not the only one to notice it, I'm inclined to believe that it's not simply a matter of personal preferences on my part.
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Actually, most of them are smirking for the same reason most of the time: A lot of it is them making jabs and jokes at each other
dang it, now you're going to have to write a clop chapter. and i'm goin to have to read it, lol.
God, I wish the updates for this story came faster. XD I love reading every chapter you push out for this, man. It's pretty great.
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Actually, it would probably be better to do something like what is in Green, University Days, or Unexpected Confessions. Where a separate fic is made to hold clop chapters. And that clop bit is linked to a chapter.
7804662 SOME HOW it has been a little under the radar, at least we found it!
How do you tell where your story is like number 120? I like to see that.
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It WAS 120 until this update- two new downvotes pushed me back to 451. As for seeing it? See the character icons at the bottom of the story's front page? Follow it over to the right for the statistic button, the one that looks like a graph.
It takes several hours to update, but the fics change positions automatically if you search them by rating and go back far enough to find them
Heh. Loving this.:D
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You say that, yet he's acting more like a host welcoming guests to his home or a landlord meeting his new tenant.
He's informed them these lands are NOT up for the taking, He has been very welcoming and accommodating to them by taking back the Chaos where they are currently living. He has formally started to set up terms to negotiate, and putting down the ground rules that they are not allowed to go about killing each other and have to TRY to keep getting along.
His show of force was to prove that he is powerful enough to have a claim on this territory. His only "ultimatum", is the equivalent to telling children to play nice or guests not to fight in the house.
I'm failing to see the tyranny.
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Oh? Not quite my intention, I'll admit. May I ask what gave you that impression? Remember, he is pretending to some extent that he only recent "met" the alicorns or the ponies.
You. Author. YES you.
I like you.
Carry on.
I really want to know this.
Will there be a sex scene containing Lily and Discord?
...shush, I'm not weird, I'm curious.
negoation
now with 50% more goats
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Double post?
Very good story, I was laughing all the time.