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The North Star

Apple Bloom can't go to sleep one night, and is told a story from Granny Smith about the mysterious second sibling of Celestia that is all but too real.

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Arnjol

Arnjol #1 · Jun 24th, 2012 · · ·

Very captivating.

Thefirehazard

Thefirehazard #2 · Jun 24th, 2012 · · ·

This was a rather nice short story. The premise was relatively solid and entertaining. Not too bad for a first fanfiction in my opinion.

ponyhailey

ponyhailey #3 · Jun 24th, 2012 · · ·

That was great.

doddythechef

doddythechef #4 · Jun 28th, 2012 · · ·

uve mad me mad at myself thanks alot he's a thumb

Kirakina

Kirakina #5 · Jul 9th, 2012 · · ·

not bad, though i felt you could expand WAY more about the palace and maybe she could meet the family she didint know? message me and maybe we can talk abotu it youve got my mind a'runnin'