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Hey! This is an account, good observation. I love to write, and draw, so thats good I guess.
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Not bad
Cool. Have some stars.
You have a nice idea, but your execution could be better. Your sentence structure does not flow. It is superfluous in places where you need it to be terse and terse where it should be verbose. If you are interested I can re-write it for you or, at the least, give you ideas and edits for you to re-write it yourself. As it stands, this story is mediocre at best.
Not bad eh.
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To be honest, this story is actually a transcript of a flashback in one wayward night of RP over steam chat, and I was contemplating whether or not to leave it up here. Currently I'm projecting the most part of my writing on a larger fic "Clandestine Emotions: and forgot about this one.
That being said, I give you full artistic creativity and permission to do whatever you want with this fic, just credit me with the idea when you do. When you have what you need from here, let me know and I will take it down from the site.
Good luck and thank you.
(Side note, every comment here has a moustache.)
Derp3 is an OTP of mine. Bout time I found something like this. Could very easily be stretched longer but you can really describe what goes on. I hate reading a fic and having no clue what position they're in. I like this. But instead of leaving a
like everyone else, I'll leave a 
Good job.