(This is my first fanfic so I don't have too high hopes for it. But if people like the story, I will make a real story that sets place in the same alternate universe.)
Far in the horizon a giant mountain of glowing crystals breaches the sky. Within rests the first alicorn, the source of all the evil that now rages around the world.
Not bad for a first timer. I wouldn't mind seeing a follow-up of some kind.
7440770 I will wait a few days to see how people take to the story before deciding. But your comment increases the chances of me doing so, thank you kindly :)