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Arashi No Angelico25


I'm new to this so give me a chance, yeah?

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Free Spirit or later renamed Lucky Star has never really know what happen to his family during the “accident”. He couldn’t remember it since this happen when he was a small young foal. Even though he doesn’t remember much but one thing he does know is that his family is no longer with him. Or does he? Unknowingly one had survived from the terrible accident and that happen to be Lucky’s older brother Prophet. Not much is known about Prophet or his whereabouts after the incident. While Lucky is living at the orphanage, Prophet does not have the similar life like his younger brother has but instead quite the opposite. Prophet is going to learn the hardships and the “reality” in life. Will Prophet get rid of the “nightmare” that haunts him throughout his life? Was it his fault that cause his parents’ death by prophesying his brother’s future? Can he changed his life for the better? Will he ever meet his younger brother in the future? One thing for sure is that Prophet is going to remember this journey for the rest of his life.


(I don't own these characters. The characters are own by Kilala97.)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 3 )

Hmmmm... nice prolog this could be a real nice story. The only thing you should add is which race they are. Thought at first they are all earth ponys but then Hunter did magic.

Good start for your first story

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7571036 Hello there! Sorry for responding this late and yes thank you for correction. I edit that part as well :) Again thank you!

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