• Member Since 31st May, 2016
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Sugarpaw


Im a huge fan of mlp and Im a new writer. So my stories may not be that good and I would love feed back on any of them. :)

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When Twilight and friends defeated Sombra. They didnt know he had a daughter. Now its been a few years later and she is back for revenge. Can Twilight and her friends defeat her before all of Equestria is gone for good and could one young Pegasuses love be the key to defeating the evil?

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When Twilight and friends defeated Sombra. They didnt know he had a daughter.

I know your a new writer but one thing to seriously note is that in this fandom making fics about the daughters or sons of high power figures, specifically where they are villains, typically don't manage to succeed or at the very least make people go in with low expectations. It's a sorta red flag some readers will note before reading a story that might alter their opinion, or at the very least your gonna get a few people who just dislike it for that reason regardless of quality.

Interesting. I'm curious to see where this goes and how it will become a 2nd pov.:moustache:

This isn't 2nd person POV, it's 3rd person POV. :facehoof::applejackunsure:

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