Ow a pickle, they are covered in vinegar which will be extremely painful, that would burn and it has killed someone before. Well other than the pain lol legalizing incest, it would not do anything other than creep out everypony and probably make a lot of ponies angry. Trying to change something that's been a forever taboo will end in a good result, my money is on a civil war if it was a realistic fic. Yes i know it sounds extreme but it's true.
Just my opinion and you don't have to stand by it, so please don't get triggered.
The dinner play is like something out of a bad rom-com. Loved it. Bonus Chapter = Sexy time? For both sets? Please? Apples too, cause twi wouldn't leave them out of the "accidental" repeal news.
I'm sure after Shining gets to plow Twilight proper-like she'll be thinking straight enough to remember to tell AJ, so she and Mac can start goin' at it like rabbits.
Shakespearicles, I just love your sense of humor. Whether it's more or less clean (a la Regicide Squares) or filthy (Brohoof Bash/Backrub stories), I always get a laugh.
Okay last but not least. A few more errors and we're done.
both weak and the knees and and should in. Only way it makes sense anyways. A small one here I just sign thing now instead of you I think that needs to be things. Two of the same errors "Oooh oh, uh, clumsy me," "I'm sure I will come up with a few measures of my own,"Those commas should be a full stops. She glances beside her, at her brother I think that glanced was supposed to be used here. It works either way. Her kissed her back. Shining became a mare?! "No promises," he said with a smile"Let me finish what I started," Twilight said The comma makes a final appearance it seems. That's all I could find. Once more, good job with this story. To continue my last post now, I look forward to a bonus chapter, or as you said here: 7266379 I would love to see what Big Mac and Applejack get up to once they find out about this. More than anything though I want to see the sparkle siblings consummate their relationship finally as well. Not to mention what Luna and Celestia will get up to.
Ha! This is excellent work, Shakey. It's sparklecest, but it's comedy gold as well! And that scene with Pinkie was an absolute treat. A fine job, my friend. ^_^
Well it just got hot and feisty. Orgy time! I am sure Luna and Celestia will enjoy a very favorable male such as Shining Armor, adding to the fun. I mean she sure knows how to tease the siblings and their very open to the idea, since their planned visit.
7931644 Yes. I have plans for the princesses, AJ and Mac, and a continuation of Twi and Shining. I'm going to try to get some more for this written in- *flips through schedule calendar* April-ish?
"My muse is a fickle bitch, with a very short attention span!" - Sander Cohen
Ow a pickle, they are covered in vinegar which will be extremely painful, that would burn and it has killed someone before. Well other than the pain lol legalizing incest, it would not do anything other than creep out everypony and probably make a lot of ponies angry. Trying to change something that's been a forever taboo will end in a good result, my money is on a civil war if it was a realistic fic. Yes i know it sounds extreme but it's true.
Just my opinion and you don't have to stand by it, so please don't get triggered.
What is the shipping on this story?
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"Oh Big Brother, I have something even BIGGER for you"
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Indeed. But was more referring to Twilight not being able to tell they were breaking in that bed the best way possible.
Don't worry about Cadance, Your Highnesses.
She's spending some quality time with her little brother.
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Nothing's happening between them, I assure you. And even if it did, it wouldn't be a problem cause she's totally adopted.
Yeah.
Shining is about to drained by three alicorns. Possibly four.
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Pickles, the bane of burgers everywhere. She truly has unleashed evil upon the land.
Such ruler,so nice,much princess,very leader,so wow hahahahaha XD i like it
Does this story have insect in it?
7262166 I think that would bug too many readers.
7262237 I think it would bee a great idea!
This is great, I can't wait to see more of this maybe you could get Twilight parents in on it too
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Well, at least broach the subject. Please?
Bonus chapter? Yes please!
I noticed a few errors in this fic that I'll happily point out to you if you wish.
The dinner play is like something out of a bad rom-com. Loved it.
Bonus Chapter = Sexy time? For both sets? Please?
Apples too, cause twi wouldn't leave them out of the "accidental" repeal news.
Right?
This shall be my new reasoning to be suspicious of ranch dressing
I can see all kinds of fun times happening in this story.
What about Big Mac and Applejack?
They should know about the new law.
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I'm sure after Shining gets to plow Twilight proper-like she'll be thinking straight enough to remember to tell AJ, so she and Mac can start goin' at it like rabbits.
Shakespearicles, I just love your sense of humor. Whether it's more or less clean (a la Regicide Squares) or filthy (Brohoof Bash/Backrub stories), I always get a laugh.
Bonus chapter? Oh, yes please!
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Bonus Chapter(s), Pretty much this.
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and then this.
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Okay last but not least. A few more errors and we're done.
both weak and the knees and and should in. Only way it makes sense anyways.
A small one here I just sign thing now instead of you I think that needs to be things.
Two of the same errors "Oooh oh, uh, clumsy me," "I'm sure I will come up with a few measures of my own,"Those commas should be a full stops.
She glances beside her, at her brother I think that glanced was supposed to be used here. It works either way.
Her kissed her back. Shining became a mare?!
"No promises," he said with a smile "Let me finish what I started," Twilight said The comma makes a final appearance it seems.
That's all I could find. Once more, good job with this story.
To continue my last post now, I look forward to a bonus chapter, or as you said here: 7266379
I would love to see what Big Mac and Applejack get up to once they find out about this. More than anything though I want to see the sparkle siblings consummate their relationship finally as well. Not to mention what Luna and Celestia will get up to.
7266379 More of this good thing would be best. Now, AJ and Big Mac can have a proper Brohoof Bash!
Ha! This is excellent work, Shakey. It's sparklecest, but it's comedy gold as well! And that scene with Pinkie was an absolute treat. A fine job, my friend. ^_^
7266563 7266588 7266647 Thank you so much for the help!
Your knack for imagery is ridiculously good.
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No problem! Glad I could help.
Could you write a bonus chapter about Luna and Celestia? I would like to see their reaction when they saw the new law and their antics in Ponyville.
DO A FOURSOME
Yes, More!
A sequel to Brohoof Bash? Yay! Now please finish it, I don't want to start reading until it's all done and I don't want to wait...
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Really great that you took a run at this one.
Would be fun to see AJ's reaction to not being told right away.
Gee, that went zero to a hundred pretty quick...
And if by "Bonus Chapter" you mean, luna and celestia sex scene, then oh yes please.
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Hey, there's no need for this Waspishness! Calm down, you seem antsy.
7510308 those puns stink worse than a skunk dipped in fresh poop
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...Or a dung beetle sprayed by a stink-bug.
i think there should be a sequel it needs one
7682336 there will be more.
Well it just got hot and feisty. Orgy time! I am sure Luna and Celestia will enjoy a very favorable male such as Shining Armor, adding to the fun. I mean she sure knows how to tease the siblings and their very open to the idea, since their planned visit.
Oh hell yes! I'll be keeping a close eye on this one
. . . You DO have updates SCHEDULED for this one, right?
7931644 Yes. I have plans for the princesses, AJ and Mac, and a continuation of Twi and Shining. I'm going to try to get some more for this written in-
*flips through schedule calendar*
April-ish?
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7933259 I have a terrible memory though. Be sure to remind me at the end of March if you don't see anything.
7933346 My memory is equally reliable, but I shall try!
It's almost April-ish. Please, please, please finish this!!!