...How fucking Oblivious are you Twilight.

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It was pretty obvious the moment they appeared at her doorstep, wasn't it?

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She's got a certain image of Celestia in her mind. It's going to take a lot to break it.

Oh... Now them showing up makes more sense. Yeah... that repeal isn't going to be repealed.

"All hail Pinkie pie, the god of parties. Compare your party planning talents to hers, and then kill yourselves."

Don't know where that came from.

Also, the castle's foundations will break before the weekend is over.

yep I saw this at about the 1/4 mark of this chapter.
this is going to be a vary interesting story as it gets heated up.
but I think I may have a little beater video for pinkie just to bade it is not a pmv.
coffee cup #100.

I wonder if Celestia knew about Twilight and Shining Armor and set up the magic fax machine with Mayor Mare to watch for exactly this thing, or if it was just a happy accident that she happened to see it while perusing the things Twilight was signing into law.

I can just see Celestia giving Luna the happy news.

"Luna!"
"What!?"
"Pack a bag, we're staying with Twilight for a few days."
"Whyever for?
"Twilight's repealed the Equestrian law forbidding incest within the bounds of her Kingdom."
"You're bucking with me..."
"Well, not yet, but give it a couple hours."

Celestia and Luna know that spike is out and are probably there to bang.

Okay so a few more errors in this chapter.

1st paragraph: Twilight Sparkle stood at the Ponyville train station platform the following evening; 3rd paragraph: The next train wasn't for almost a week. Seems to be a bit of continuity error here. As it's not the next evening from last chapter but a week later.

1st paragraph: Her legs twinged, rigid and on edge. Pretty sure a comma is needed after rigid but it's not a BIG deal.

"This act formally repeals regulation 1nc35t." He looked up a her with a blank stare. Pretty sure that's supposed to be at.

That seems to be it. Again good job.

Did anyone else picture the Quicksilver scene from Days of Future Past with Pinkie?

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I did and now it is in my cannon for Pinkie.

Incest AND princest?

Tracking.

This is the most degenerate shit I've read in years.

I fucking love it.

She and grabbed a loaf of fresh bread

There seems to be a stray 'and' here

she ran upstairs the the bathroom

*to the

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 Twilight shuffled her feet

Sounds kinda odd.

It hurts so bad xD
Laughing my lungs out!

Gee, and to think that just yesterday Pinkie was spouting a bunch of crazy nonsense about how "there is no spoon." We weren't even talking about spoons, so of course there was no spoon!

One thing I noticed at least once during Pinkie’s acceleration. There might have been other places, too.

Forth - forward
Fourth - ordinal form of the the number four.

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Fixed! Thank you.

A+ on the song and wording, worked out the song ended just as I read "The world lurched back into normal speed".