• Member Since 14th Jun, 2012
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InsaneWubWubs


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A city, held behind the impenetrable iron walls, built upon true fear and terror. Families, torn apart by death and cell doors. Three ponies band together, and attempt to survive in the wasteland known as,
Creakocity.

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I like were this is going, putting the iron current that almost everypony is to chicken shit to brake. :rainbowlaugh:
PS: you mite wont to put active words (looks, pulls, turns, ect.) into past tents (looked, pulled, turned.) it would make it easier for the reader to understand.

Get a beta reader. Or a spell checker. Or a dictionary.

Seriously, the mistakes here are distracting.

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