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Jeseille-Hazim


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Spike's job is to throw the bachelor party after the Canterlot wedding. The only problem is that he doesn't know what a bachelor party is.

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:trixieshiftleft: Meh.....


WHERE IS THE CONFLICT, THE THINGS....THE STORY?!

Really this is one of those fics that rival watching paint dry

Better luck next time man

You have decent word choice and grammar and stuff, but the plot was just kind of like...eh...a liiittle boring, if you have any friends who write fics, I'd ask them to read it over quickly to see how it is :twilightsmile:

:ajbemused: could have been better

Ehm... where are the strippers?

Wait isn't a bachelor party supposed to be before the wedding? And what Eden said.

This should end up like "The Hangover". :pinkiegasp:

759066 Well, after the wedding they still said the bachelor party was still going to happen. So, I just went with it.

759279 I've only watched a bit of The Hangover 2, so I wouldn't really know how the movie would play out.

758337 Thanks. This was when I had a case of Writer's Block, so I couldn't really think of that much to write. And all of my other brony friends are not that interested in reading fanfiction, so I can't really try that. :applejackunsure:

758617 Shining Armor technically did get married. He doesn't seem like the stallion to cheat on his wife. And yes I do know that there's usually strippers at bachelor parties, but why would there be strippers in the colorful world of Equestria?

758494 Thanks, and thanks for the watch. :twilightsmile:

758318 Nah, this story would never get to almost 2,000 likes like that story did. So... Meh.

758342 Yeah, I kinda agree with you on that. Since I had a little case of Writer's Block when thinking up this story, so it could have been better.

759066

Yep.

Equestria is a strange country, and not for the dragoons and magic pony :facehoof:

I like it. :ajsmug:

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