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Damn. Insane work dude! I wouldn't be suprised if you made a threesome between them. xD Keep it up!
Half of me despises when people write stories that have conflict based on miscommunication.
The other half tells the first half to shut up, as conflict makes for a good story, and the payoff when everything is sorted out will be worth it.
Keep writing, loving every bit of it!
I seem to recall Luna saying that she would share David with Celestia and David tentatively agreeing with it but I don't think anyone has brought it up with Celestia yet.
In due time... the harem will grow.
Cool chapter, bro
The raw emotion, I love it! Nice work.
I've been waiting for so long for this part of the story to get here. Ever since Luna made her prediction about Celestia pretty much doing everything that happened in this chapter. Now they just have to get Celestia to sit down, stay calm, and listen to them tell her that Luna wants her to be happy too and that she won't get upset over this.
Wow. Celestia needs help... and some TLC.
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Indeed.
Of course, there'll be plenty more potential conflict. Just watch the fireworks when David's dreams reveal some, but not all, of what happened with Celestia...
...in 3....2...1...
Great chaptrr.
Seems like he completely forgot about his conversation with luna regarding a herd/harem while talking to Celestia.
175k words sure go by quickly when you're enjoying it.
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He expressed no regret, Celestia did. And bringing it up while emotions are super raw like this probably either didn't occur to him, or didn't feel right to the author.
I didn't even think about that, oh my gosh!
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It is possible that didn't forget he was waiting for her to say something about this and didn't expect her to try to force him away before he could tell her.